Kaidoh's Weakness
Kaidoh was training rigorously usually. Then rain fell.
While he was finding shelter, He felt dizziness and burning warmth. Then he ran into Echizen.
Kaidoh: Echizen?! Pant What are you doing in a place like this?!
Ryoma: Mada mada dane…..
As the two waited for the rain to stop, Ryoma tried to start a conversation with his sempai
Ryoma: So Sempai, you're training tirelessly as usual.
Kaidoh did not reply to his kouhai, then suddenly fell on Ryoma's feet……..
Ryoma: Sempai?!!!?!! You're BURNING UP!!!
Not knowing what to do, the freshmen tried waking his sempai up with a stick…..
But suddenly, Momo found them while eating his favorite burger while riding his bike…
Momo: Hey, Echizen?! What are you doing to mamushi?!
Ryoma: BAKA!!! Can't you see that's he's ill!!!!!
Momo: FINE! FINE! Come down hot head!!
Then Momo pulled his phone and called Inui…….
Momo: Mushi-mushi Inui Sempai? We need help! Mamushi just collapsed!! Meet us here
at the park!!!
Inui: What happened?! But there's no time…..bring him to the nearest hospital!
I'll be there in a few minutes…..and I'll call the others as well! Hurry!
Momo: H-hai Inui sempai……
At the hospital…..
Kaidoh finally regained consciousness and found himself staring on the ceiling….
Kaidoh: ….Uh?... Where am I? H-how did I get here?
Then he suddenly heard a familiar voice talking…..
Inui: You overworked yourself Kaidoh,….Its a good thing that Momoshiro and Echizen were
There to help…..
Momo: Stop making us all worry mamushi!!
Kaidoh: I didn't tell you to help me, BAKA PEACH!!!
Tezuka: Stop it you two! This is a hospital not a boxing ring!! Kaidoh, it is your responsibility
To take care of your body, don't overwork it!! As punishment, 20 laps after you've been
Discharged!!!!!
Kikumaru: That's so mean nya! Kaoru-chan just came in after all Tezuka.
Ryoma: Mada mada dane…….
Fuji, Oishi and coach Ryuzaki came into the room…….
Kaidoh: Fushshshsuuu!!! Great, more lectures…..
Ryuzaki: The doctor said you're going to be ok after a week of bed rest kaidoh…..
Fuji: They allowed you to be discharged tomorrow, but no training until then……
Oishi: That's good news…..we were so worried!
Momo: Yeah right! Mamushi can't live even a day without practice, right Echizen?
Ryoma: Whatever……
Inui: I agree 100!!!
Kaidoh: Fushshshuuuu! But I can't miss training!!
Tezuka: It is for your own good! Now get some rest. We'll come again to escort you home.
Ryuzaki: Don't be such a baby!! It cause more trouble.
Kaidoh: Fine……….fushshshshuuu!!!
Oishi: Ok, its settled then! Let now give Kaidoh some time to rest….
Seigaku Regulars: HAI!!!
Kaidoh: Wait Inui sempai, …. I need to talk to you……
Momo: Nande mamushi? Need a goodnight kiss? Hahahahaha!
Kaidoh: GEEEEEEEEET OUUUUUUUUUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Momo: You DON'T have to shout!
Inui: What do you want to talk about kaidoh?
Kaidoh: Its about my training this morning sempai……. I ……..why…….
Inui: Kaidoh,……. everyone has limits. Remember that.
Kaidoh: I know sempai……its just…… I – I want to be stronger till the nationals……
After a few minutes of silence…. Inui noticed wounds on his kouhai's body……
Inui: Well, .. I have to go now… If you got enough rest, you can get back in training 95.
Kaidoh: H-Hai sempai….
The next day…..
Momo: RISE and SHINE mamushi!
As he entered the room, he caught his rival talking someone on his phone…
Akutsu( on the phone) : You told them nothing?!!!
Kaidoh: it…it was JUST ME!! Don't involve them on this!!!!
Then he suddenly noticed his teammates at the door….
Akutsu: Looks like your little friends are there…. Ja na!
Momo: OHH? Who was that? A friend?
Kaidoh: Fushshshsuuuu! None of you business!!!
Momo: NANDATO??!!!!?!!! Are you picking a fight?!!!
Kaidoh: STOP POKING YOUR NOSE INTO SOMEONE ELSES BUISINESS!!!!
Tezuka: What's this?!!!! A fight early in the morning?!!
Ryoma: It seems perfectly normal…..
Fuji: ( Entering with a fruitful of basket ) : How are you feeling Kaidoh?
Hearing that, kaidoh's body suddenly felt so much pain….. but he still tried to hide his agony
on his teammates, he didn't want them to know…..
Inui: Everything ok?
Kaidoh: Yeah…..
Inui, hearing this word from his kouhai. He knew something had gone terribly wrong……Then
He approached Tezuka…..
Inui: He's hiding something….
Tezuka: You noticed it too huh, make more investigations….
Ryuzaki: Kikumaru and the others are waiting in the van…. Kaidoh, can you stand up?
Kaidoh did not reply but tried to stand up, his legs were wobbling, then he fell….
Momo: Hahahahah! Looks like mamushi's too weak to stand up!
Ryoma: Sigh…… Kaidoh sempai?
Kaidoh has this very painful feeling again…. He just looked down so no one would notice…
Tezuka: Inui, please help him in the van….
Inui: That goes without say….
Kaidoh: G-gome, for the disturbance sempai….
When they finally got in Ryuzaki's van, Kaidoh suddenly fell asleep, tired of enduring all
That pain….
Kikumaru: Kaoru-chan's so cute nya!
Momo: Aheheheee! Mamushi fell asleep…!
Ryoma: SSSSHHH! I'm trying to sleep aswell……
" No!!"
The noise broke their conversation, turning it to silence instead.
Kaidoh was sleep talking..
Kaidoh: NO!! NO!! They have nothing-
Inui: Kaidoh! Kaidoh!
Fuji: A dream?
Kaidoh: A nightmare…..
Author's notes:
Well,….do you like the 1st chapter? Sorry I know it lacks of feelings….. Criticisms are very much appreciated for a beginner like me….. So I'll be waiting….and typing!