That Summer....
Please don't be so critical. Im not a very good writer. Reading all the fics on this site got me thinking and if i get reviews on this i might add another chapter. (BTW things that are in ~~ are thoughts.) Hope you enjoy it!!!
~*~Hermione~*~
Hermione was reading a very good book when there was a tap on the window. ~It's a bit Late for the Daily Prophit wonder who that could be?~ thought Hermione as she got up from her bed. She walked to the window, opened it and saw Hedwig fly through. Her heart started beating faster. This is the first letter he sent her this summer. she peted hedwig and took the letter from her. She shook up the letter and read:
Dear Hermione,
Hey how are your summer holidays going? Mine are fine i guess. The Durslys are being extra nice to me and they said that if i wanted to i could bring a friend over for the rest of the holidays (I think Sirius has something to do with this). I was going to invite both you and Ron but Ron sent me a letter last week saying that the family went to see his brother Charlie and he couldn't get out of it. So, Hermi, would you like to stay at my house till the end of the holidays? Then we could go to Diagon Alley and Kings Cross together. What do you say?
Love,
Harry
She had liked Harry since their first year when she met him on the train. She never thought that she would be alone with him for so long though. She never told anyone because she was a ffraid that someone would tell and that would ruin the friendship. But now she had reason to believe that Harry liked her to. ~wait! Hermi? He never called me that. And he never signs his letters with love.~ Thought Hermione. She ran downstairs to aske her parents to let her stairs. Finally after a half an hour of pleading they let her go. She ran as fast as she could up up the stairs and into her room. She went to her desk pulled out her quill and some partchment. She began to write....
Dear Harry,
I'd Love to come! I'll be there tommarow. I just have to pack and ill be ready. Thanks for inviting me over. See you when i get there!
Love,
Hermione
She sent the letter with Hedwig. She began to pack and when she was done the only thing she didn't figure out was what to wear there. She sat on her bed and thought for several hours and then she finally figured out what she is going to wear. A smile came to her face. "This is gonna knock him dead." She said aloud.
What do you think? I have a great idea for the next chapter so ill put it up even if i don't get any reviews. But Still R/R please.
Please don't be so critical. Im not a very good writer. Reading all the fics on this site got me thinking and if i get reviews on this i might add another chapter. (BTW things that are in ~~ are thoughts.) Hope you enjoy it!!!
~*~Hermione~*~
Hermione was reading a very good book when there was a tap on the window. ~It's a bit Late for the Daily Prophit wonder who that could be?~ thought Hermione as she got up from her bed. She walked to the window, opened it and saw Hedwig fly through. Her heart started beating faster. This is the first letter he sent her this summer. she peted hedwig and took the letter from her. She shook up the letter and read:
Dear Hermione,
Hey how are your summer holidays going? Mine are fine i guess. The Durslys are being extra nice to me and they said that if i wanted to i could bring a friend over for the rest of the holidays (I think Sirius has something to do with this). I was going to invite both you and Ron but Ron sent me a letter last week saying that the family went to see his brother Charlie and he couldn't get out of it. So, Hermi, would you like to stay at my house till the end of the holidays? Then we could go to Diagon Alley and Kings Cross together. What do you say?
Love,
Harry
She had liked Harry since their first year when she met him on the train. She never thought that she would be alone with him for so long though. She never told anyone because she was a ffraid that someone would tell and that would ruin the friendship. But now she had reason to believe that Harry liked her to. ~wait! Hermi? He never called me that. And he never signs his letters with love.~ Thought Hermione. She ran downstairs to aske her parents to let her stairs. Finally after a half an hour of pleading they let her go. She ran as fast as she could up up the stairs and into her room. She went to her desk pulled out her quill and some partchment. She began to write....
Dear Harry,
I'd Love to come! I'll be there tommarow. I just have to pack and ill be ready. Thanks for inviting me over. See you when i get there!
Love,
Hermione
She sent the letter with Hedwig. She began to pack and when she was done the only thing she didn't figure out was what to wear there. She sat on her bed and thought for several hours and then she finally figured out what she is going to wear. A smile came to her face. "This is gonna knock him dead." She said aloud.
What do you think? I have a great idea for the next chapter so ill put it up even if i don't get any reviews. But Still R/R please.