So then first of all the characters : We have the usual Stargate SG1 characters Jack ,Sam , Teal'C , Jonas , Janet and General Hammond of course. And there's Sun ( not to match with my pen name even though she has exactly the same name.) She's tall has long brown hair and dark brown eyes. She's telepathic and a person of respect to most of all Jaffa (Has not much to do with her "talent".) Even some of the Goa'uld have or had an eye on her (A problem for Jack.) , so she is promised to Apophis ( I never wanted him to die so he's still alive here.) but not by this time , please don't ask why.

The setting is a quiet afternoon some time before "Frozen".

If something in the story is absolutely illogical please tell me .