Hey guys, I am Revidox and this is the first story that I have ever written. English is not my first language, so if you happen to spot a grammatical mistake than I would be very happy to correct that. Feedback is always welcome, as long as it is positive.
First things first, the reason that I wrote this story is because after the first time I have seen Total Drama Island I couldn't stop watching. It all started at a very young age, and I had to wait a whole week for each episode to watch it. TDI has always been my favourite cartoon, and I still like it. So I decided to make a tribute to it, a story in the way that I have always wanted it to be. The major diffrence in this story and the canon TDI is the budget Chris McLean got to start the show. With this change, he could hire two extra campers, and some new wildlife to the island. The campers I chose for this story are Zoey and Lightning. I have reviewed a lot of Total Drama characters, and these two were close to perfect for the story. There will be a lot of differences because of the introduction of these two. I will try to state as much as possible in the end of each chapters without spoiling the next episode.
So here you have it, have fun with the story.
- The Dock of Shame -
A peacefull dock appears while the birds are singing and the incects are chirping. Suddenly, a good looking man with black hear and a stubble beard pops up right in front of the camera.
"Yo, we're coming at you live from camp Wawanakwa, somewhere in Muskoka, Ontario. I am your host, Chris McLean, dropping season one of the hottest new reality show on television, right now! Here's the deal, twenty four campers have signed up to spend eight weeks right here at this crummy old summer camp. They'll compete in challenges against each other, then have to face the judgment of their fellow campers. Every three days, one team will either win a reward, or watch one of their team members walk down the Dock of Shame, take a ride on the Loserboat, haha, and leave Total Drama Island for good!"
- The Campfire Pit -
A large dome like area appears where all the sides are covered with large tall rocks, with the exception of the entrance, which is made from wood. There is a campfire at the center of the area, and slightly further up are twelve tree stumps. At the right side of the are stands a lectern, where the host walks up to.
"Their fate will be decided here, at the dramatic campfire ceremonies where after each challenge, all but one camper will recieve, a marshmallow. In the end, only one camper will be left standing and will be rewarded with cheesy tabloid fame, and a small fortune which let's face it, they will probebly blow in a week."
"To survive, they will have to battle: Black flies, grizzly bears!" Chris said as the camera shows a bunch of black flies who are getting shoo'ed by a grizzly bear. The camera fades to a giant maggot in a bowl. "Disgusting camp food and!" The camera fades back to Chris who is standing back at the Dock of Shame, as he is making a dramatic pause. "Each other! Every moment will be caught on one of the hundreds of cameras situated all over the camp." As the camera shows a camera placed in a birds nest, followed by a camera ducked taped to a tiki totem. "Who will crumble under the pressure? Find out here, right now, on Total, Drama, Island!"
- Theme song -
- The Dock of Shame -
Chris is standing at the Dock of Shame. "Welcome back to Total Drama Island! Alright, it's time to meet our first campers. We told them they'd all be staying at this 5 star resort, so if they seem a little tence, that's probebly why!" He said with a large smile on his face.
A boat appears and is seen dropping off a rather short pale girl, with brown hear and a pony tail on top, glasses and braces. She is wearing a green shirt and pink pants with white shoes.
"Beth, what's up?" Chris asks her as she quickly hugs him, much to his annoyance.
"It's so incredulous to meet you! Wow, you're a lot shorter in real life!" Beth said exited.
"Uh, thanks..." Chris said sarcastically.
The second boat arrieved. A very relaxed girl with long blond hair in a ponytail stepped on the dock. She wore a blue hooding, blue jean shorts and sandals while carrying a blue duffel bag and a red surfboard with a yellow stripe on it.
"Allright, our surfer chick, Bridgette is here!" Chris said.
"Hey! What's up?" She said to Chris.
As she look around. She sighed.
"I thought we were going to the beach." She said.
Chris was grinning.
The next boat stopped.
"Introducing our youngest camper, at the age of 17, Cody!" Chris said while introducing the third camper.
Cody had brown hair, a white polo shirt with two red stripes in the middle, blue jeans, red sneakers and a gap between his two front teeth.
"Cody. The Code-ster. The Code-meister." Chris said while giving Cody a high five.
"Nice man, just me and the ladies here, plenty of oppertunity to make them interested" Cody said. Beth was smiling and waving while Bridgette was looking rather uneasy.
The fourth boat is seen dropping off a very tall dark skinned teenager with short hair and a short beard. He is wearing a withe hat, green shirt with a D on it and light green jean shorts.
"DJ!" Chris said.
"Yo, Chris McLean! How's it goin?" DJ asks while dropping his luggage on the dock and giving Chris a high five. "Hey, you sure you got the right place here? Where's the hot tub at?" He asks while picking up his luggage.
"Yo dog, this is it, Camp Wawanakwa!" Chris said while holding in his laughter.
"Looks a lot diffrent on the application form..." DJ said frustraded while walking through the dock.
As punk rock music blasts from afar, boat number five dockes. A guy with short black hair, a green mohawk and a goatee stepped off the boat while holding his radio in one hand and throwing his green duffle bag on the dock. He wore a black t-shirt with a picture of a skull over a long sleeved white shirt, with blue jeans and white sneakers.
"Duncan, dude!" Chris said.
"I don't like, surprises." Duncan said while clenching his fists.
"Yeah, your parole officer warned me about that, man. He also told me to give him a holler anytime you get really surprised." Chris said while having again, a big smile on his face.
Duncan sniffed, let out a little smile and said "Okay then" while looking seemingly okay with the situation.
As he walked down the dock, he noticed Bridgette's board. "Nice board, he said somewhat sarcasticly."
"Thanks!" She said cheerfully. "I thought we were going to be on the beach."
Duncan was surprised that she replied so kindly.
"Well, to be fair, we are. It's just, a, crappy one..." Duncan said, more friendly than his first comment.
"Yeah, too bad." Bridgette said, while showing a smile to Duncan.
"I'm Duncan." He said as he dropped his duffelbag while he was walking up to Bridgette and DJ.
"I'm Bridgette." She said with a smile.
"DJ." Replied DJ while giving Duncan a fistbump.
The next boat arrived.
"Eva, nice! Glad you could make it!" Chris said while Eva stepped off the boat.
Eva was very buffed with black hair in a ponytail. She was wearing a blue tank-top, matching blue gym shorts and blue tennis shoes. She carried a large bag.
As she walked down the dock, Cody was holding his hand up for a high five. Eva instead dropped her bag on Cody's foot. He let out a loud scream. "What do you have in there? Dumbbells?" He asked while holding his foot.
"Yes." She replied.
"She's all yours man" Duncan said to DJ, who is looking quite uncomfortably while Bridgette grinned at him.
The next boat dropped off a small thin guy with a brown mullet and a small bit of stubble on his chin. He wore a green hoodie over a white t-shirt, with blue jeans, green sneakers and a blue toque.
"Ezekiel! What's up man?" Chris asked.
Ezekiel was looking in the sky. "I think I see a bird." He said as he was pointing at it.
Cody chuckled, while Beth was giving him a weird look.
"Okay, look, dude. I know you don't get out much. Been home-schooled your whole life. Raised by freaky prairie people. Just don't say much and try not to get kicked off too early, okay?" Chris said to him.
"Yes sir!" Replied Zeke.
Boat number eight docks. A blonde guy wearing a white cowboy hat, a pink open shirt showing his abs, blue shorts and sandals.
"Chris McLean! What's up man, It's a honor to meet you man!" The guy said.
"The Geoffster! Welcome to the island man." Chris said.
"Thanks man!" Geoff said while giving Chris a high five.
Geoff walked to the group, giving high fives to the males and introducing himself to the females.
The ninth boat docks. It drops off a very pale girl with black and blue hair. She is wearing tight black clothes, a black skirt and black boots, obviously goth style. She walks off of the boat angrily.
"Hey Gwen." Chris said with a smile on his face.
"You mean we're staying here?" Gwen asks, while it is pretty obvious that she isn't expecting the answer that she is hoping for.
"No, you're staying here." Chris said while pointing at Gwen. "My crib is an airstream with AC that way." He said while again, holding in his laughter.
"I did not sign up for this!" Gwen said frustrated.
"Actually, you did!" Chris said while holding up a bunch of contract, presumably one for each camper.
Gwen quickly grabs the contracts, rips them apart and throws them off the dock into the water while putting up a sinister grin on her face.
"The great thing about lawyers is, they make lots of copies!" Chris said with a smile on his face while he flashes another of the contracts.
"I am not staying here!" Gwen said frustrated.
"Cool, I hope you can swim though, because your ride just left!" Chris said.
Gwen is looking at the boat. She turns aroud and glares at Chris. "Jerk!" She said.
Chris was posing for the camera, grinning. Out of nowhere, he heard someone breathing very heavily behind him while a boat left.
A very skinny guy with short red hear, glasses and a view hear on his chin stood behind him. He had a blue t-shirt with a picture of a burger on it over an orange long sleeved shirt, green pants and blue shoes. He carried some luggage and a keyboard.
"Welcome to camp, Harold!" Chris said.
"So do you mean this show is at a crappy summer camp and not on some big stage or something?" Asks Harold while looking around.
"You got it!" Grinned Chris.
"Yes! That is so much more favorable to my skills!" Harold said while pumping his fist.
Shortly after another boat docks.
An Asian girl with long raven hear stepped onto the dock. She wore sunglasses, a small top, green shorts and black sandals.
"Heather!" Chris said as she was removing her sunglasses.
Beth quickly ran up to her and said: "Hi! Looks like we're your new friends, for the next nine weeks!" While Heather looked at her in pure disgust.
Heather's disgust quickly turned into a stare at the next contestant standing on the boat.
He had a tan skin, dark brown hair and perfect white teeth he showed with his smile. He wore a tight green t-shirt, worn out blue jeans and sandals.
"This is Justin. Welcome to Total Drama Island!" Chris said, while fistbumping Justin.
"Thanks Chris. This is great." he replied.
"Just so you know, we picked you based entirely on your looks." Chris said.
"I can deal with that." Justin said while shrugging.
Another boat docked.
"What's up y'all? Leshawna's in the house!" The girl said as she was stepping on the dock.
"Yo, baby, hey how you doing? How's it going?" She said as she was giving Chris a high five.
Harold gasped.
"Feel free to quit now and save yourselves the trouble, 'cause I came to win." Leshawna said full of confidence.
"Ow what's up my brother, give me some sugar baby!" She said to DJ as she gave him a high five aswell.
"I have never seen a girl like you in real life before..." Harold said as he stepped to Leshawna.
"Excuse me?" She replied.
"You're real big, and loud!" Harold said, trying to give her a compliment.
"What did you say to me!" Leshawna replied, lunging forward. As she was about to throw a punch, DJ and Bridgette quickly held her back. Harold was making a karate stance in an attempt to defend himself.
Chris interrupted them as the next boat arrived, managing to calm them down.
"Everybody, this is Lindsay!" Chris said.
An obviously good looking blue eyed blond girl steps off the boat wearing orange shorts, a brown top and brown leather boots.
"Not too shabby" Chris wispered into the camera.
"Hi! Okay, you look so familiar!" Lindsay said.
"I'm Chris McLean" Chris said.
Lindsay just stared blankly at Chris.
"The host of the show?" He continued.
"Ooh, that's where I know you from!" She said.
"Uh, yeah..." Chris finished dissapointed.
"I am calling my parents, you can not make me stay here!" Heather said.
Upon hearing this, Chris quickly flashes the contracts again to the camera while grinning.
"Looks like someone missed her double cappuccino macchiato this morning." Duncan said to Bridgette and DJ, to which they both grinned.
"Get bend." Heather replied in a cold way.
"Our next camper, is Noah" Chris said as Noah is dropped off.
Noah was short, had a tan skin, dark brown and a slim body. He was dressed in a red sweater vest over a blue open shirt that was again, over a white long sleeve shirt with the sleeves rolled up. He also had green shorts and sneakers.
"You got my memo about my life threthening allergies?" Noah responded.
"I am sure someone did!" Chris said.
"Good, is this where we're staying?" Noah said slightly annoyed.
"No, this is your mom's house, and we're throwing a party!" Duncan said.
"Cute. I like your haircolor, is it all natural?" Noah responded with a very sarcastic tone.
"Want to find out?" Duncan said while fetching a spray can out of his duffel bag.
"No thank you." Noah said while he quickly walked away.
"If you keep acting like that, everyone might think that you're the bad guy" Bridgette said, slightly flirty.
"Well, I heard pretty girls like bad guys" He said to her as she akwardly smiled and blushed while looking the other way.
DJ gave Duncan a quick and quiet fistbump while Geoff is looking uneasy at Bridgette.
The dock was shaking.
"Whoo ooh! Chris, what's happening?" A very large guy said, who was responsible for the shaking dock. "This is awesome!", he continued.
He was very overweight, had short blond hair, wore a white t-shirt with a blue Canadian leaf on it, green shorts and green sneakers.
"Owen, welcome!" Chris replied.
Owen gave Chris a very tight bear hug, and Chris' back lead a loud cracking sound.
"Awesome to be here, man. Yeah! Man, this is just so..." Owen said as he could not find the right word to use.
"Awesome?" Gwen asked.
"Yes! Awesome! Whoo! Are you going to be on my team?" Owen asked.
"Oh, I sure hope so." She said with sarcasm in her voice.
"Cool." Chris said as Owen walked down the dock and the next boat arrived.
A very big dark skinned guy stepped off the boat. He was very buff and had short black hair. He wore a blue t-shirt with yellow stripes on the sleeves and one on the chest, green shorts, blue tennis shoes, a small silver earring and a necklace in the shape of a lightning bolt.
"Rudolph, my man, what's up?" Chris asked .
"Yo Chris, please, it's Lightning" the guy replied as he gave him a high five.
"Alright than, Lightning. Good to have you here man" Chris said.
"That's right! That's how Lightning is called!" Lightning said with a very enthusiastic voice while he showed his biceps as he walked down the dock.
The next boat docked.
"Our next two contestants, not in alfabetical order this time, are the twins who aren't twins, Katie and Sadie!" Chris said as the girls were getting off the boat.
Both girls had raven hair in pigtails, wore lipstick, the same black and white striped shirts, pink short shorts and pink open shoes. The only diffrence was that one was tall, thin and had a darker skin while the other was short, pale and chubby.
"Ladies! Sadie, Katie, welcome to your new home for eight weeks." Chris said while he walked up to them.
The camera turned to the Campside.
"Oh, my, gosh! Sadie look! It's a summer camp!" The tall one said.
"Okay, I always wanted to go to summer camp!" Sadie said to Katie, while they both let out a deafening "EEEEE" scream.
"If they scream one more time, I am gonna puke..." Gwen said.
"Nice. And here comes Courtney." Chris said while he helped her off the boat.
She had tan skin and freckles, brown hear, a small violet t-shirt over a long sleeved white shirt, green pants and sandals.
"Thank you." She said as she got of the boat.
"I would have been here sooner, but there were troubles with another boat." She said quite sassy. "It should arrive soon."
"I know, they already contacted me." Chris said annoyed.
"Hi, you must be the other contestants." She said while walking down the dock. "It's really nice to meet you all."
Owen walked up to her to shake her hand. "How's it going? I'm Owen!" He said.
"Hey, everyone. Izzy!" Chris said as the next boat arrived.
Izzy had long, curly red hair. She wore a small green top with green shorts, a yellow tie-around skirt and green sandals.
She was waving wildly while screaming: "Hi, Chris! Hi! Hi!".
The boat stopped at the dock, causing her to fall from the boat, hitting her chin on the dock. Everyone chuckled. "Ooh, that was bad!" Owen said, while he and Courtney pulled her out of the water.
"That felt so... good! Except for hitting my chin. This is summer camp?! That is so cool! Do you have paper-mache here? Are we having lunch soon?" Izzy said while shaking her hair to het the water out.
"That is a good call!" Owen said.
"Hold on Izzy. We still miss a couple of contestants and would you like to tell me what you did on your boat?" Chris said with a raised eyebrow.
"Bla bla something something don't start a fire on the boat something bla!" Izzy said, followed by a slight grin.
Courtney and Owen watched uneasy as they returned to the rest of the group at the dock.
"Okay... Contestant number twentytwo, is Trent!" Chris said while the guy stepped off the boat.
Trent had short black hair. He wore black jeans, a light green t-shirt with a black hand print in the middle over a sandy camo shirt with green sneakers. He wore a big blue backpack and carried guitar case.
"Hey, good to meet you, man. Saw you on that figure-skating show, nice work." Trent said to Chris.
"Hey, thanks man! I knew I rocked that show!" Chris replied.
"I saw that. One of the guys dropped his partner on her head, so they got immunity that week." Beth said.
"Lucky! I hope I get dropped on my head." Harold replied.
Lindsay cheerfully agreed by saying "Me too!".
"So, this is it?" Trent asked Chris while looking around a bit worried to the rest of the campers.
Most of the campers were either chatting or staring in the distance, with the exception of Harold, who had his finger in his nose, Eva who was already lifting weights, Ezekiel, who was staring at Eva and Lightning who was talking to his biceps.
"All righty then..." He said while walking to the group. He stood next to Gwen, smiling at her as she lookt away. While Trent looked at the arrival of the next boat, Gwen quickly glanced back at Trent, smiling.
Boat number twentythree docked. A guy with brown hear, a red track suit and a red headband jumped off the boat. Unfortunately, he slipped on the wet dock. He crashed head first on the floor, his luggage flew through the air into the water and splashed Heather. "Ugh, my shoes!" She screemed.
"Tyler!" Chris said as he was presenting him. Tyler quickly picked himself up and gave a thumbs up.
The last boat arrived. A short haired red headed girl with a flower in her hair stepped off. She wore a red top with light green pants and sandals.
"Everyone, this is Zoey!" Chris said as Zoey waved.
"Hey guys, it's so nice to meet you all!" Zoey said. Owen quickly ran to her to shake her hand. "Nice to meet you, I'm Owen!" He said as he was shaking her hand with both hands.
"Everyone is here! But before we go to the Lodge to have lunch, we need a group photo for the promo's!" Chris said as he retrieved a camera from his pocket. "Everyone on the end of the dock!"
Everyone walked to the end of the dock.
"Okay, one, two, three, oops! Okay, forgot the lense cap!" Chris said. He removed the lense cap. "Okay, hold that pose! One, two, oh! No wait, card's full. Hang on."
"Come on man, my face is starting to freeze!" Leshawna said.
"Got it! Okay, everyone say, Wawanakwa!" Chris said.
"Wawanakwa!" said everyone back as the dock started to crack.
Chris took the photo and the dock collapsed. "Okay guys, dry off and meet at the campfire pit in ten." Chris said with a large grin.
- The Campfire Pit -
"This, is camp Wawanakwa, your home for the next eight weeks!" Chris said. "The campers sitting around you will be your cabin mates, your competition, and maby even your friends, you dig?" As the camera was showing Harold waving at Duncan, who replied with clenching his fist to Harold "The camper who manages to stay on Total Drama Island the longest without getting voted off will win one, hundred thousend dollars! Girls get one side of each cabin and dudes get the other."
"Excuse me, Kyle, can I have a cabin with a lake view since I am the prettiest?" Lindsay asked.
"Okay, you are, but that's not really how it works here." Chris replied, while raising his eyebrow. "And it's Chris!"
"I have to live with Sadie or I'll die!" Katie whined. "And I'll break out in hives! It's true!" Sadie said as she was holding Katie.
"This, cannot be happening." Gwen said.
"Aww, come on guys," Owen said, grabbing Gwen and Tyler into a double headlock hug with Gwen under one arm and Tyler under the other. "It'll be fun! It's like a big sleepover!"
"At least you don't have to sleep next to him" Tyler said to Gwen, as he was pointing at Duncan, who was giving a noogie to Harold.
"Here's the deal: we're gonna split you into two teams." Chris said as he grabbed a piece of paper. "If I call out your name, go stand over there." He said, pointing to a spot of the campfire area. "Gwen, Trent, Heather, Cody, Lindsey, Lightning, Beth, Katie, Owen, Leshawna, Justin and Noah. From this moment on, you're officially known as, the Screaming Gophers!" Chris threw the team's banner to Owen.
"Yeah, I'm a Gopher! Woooo!" Owen said very exited, looking at his new banner. "Wait, what about Sadie?" Katie replied.
"The rest of you over here!" Chris continued. "Geoff, Zoey, DJ, Tyler, Sadie, Izzy, Courtney, Ezekiel, Duncan, Bridgette, Eva and Harold! Move move move move!"
"But Katie is a Gopher! I have to be a Gopher!" Sadie cried.
"Sadie is it?" Courtney asked, trying to calm her down. "Come on, it will be okay."
"This is so unfair! I miss you Katie!" Sadie said, ignoring Courtney. "I miss you too!" Katie replied.
"You guys will officially be know as, the Killer Bass!" Chris said as he threw the Killer Bass banner to the team.
"It's awesome! It's like, amazing!" Harold commented, as he was holding the banner.
"Alright campers, you and your team will be on camera, at all public area's during this competition." Chris explained.
- The Confessional -
The Confessional was a simpel old outhouse. It contained a toilet, toilet paper, a window at the top and a roll of fly paper. The side the campers faces while sitting on the toilet contained a camera, taped to the wall.
Chris
"You will also be able to share your inner most thoughts on tape with video diaries anytime you want. Let the audience at home know what you are really thinking, or, just get something off your chest."
Gwen
"Okay, so far this sucks."
Lindsay
"I don't get it, where is the camera guy?" Lindsay was facing the wrong direction.
Lightning
"Lightning is here to win!"
Owen
"Hey everyone, check this out. I have something very important to say." Owen farted. "Hahahaha."
- The Campfire Pit -
"All right, any questions? Cool. Let's find your cabins." Chris said to the campers as he was walking to the Campside.
- The Campside -
"Gophers, you're in the East cabin. Bass, You're in the West." Chris said.
Heather opened the door to her team's cabin.
"Bunk beds? Isn't this a little... Summer camp?" She said.
"That's the idea, genius." Gwen said as she bumped into her.
"Shut up, weird goth girl." She replied.
Cody walked up to Gwen. "You're so smart. I feel that." He said.
"Shouldn't you be on the boys' side?" She replied. Cody grinned.
As Leshawna walked to her cabin, Cody got thrown from the out the cabin by Gwen.
Chris laughed at the side of poor Cody on the ground.
"Where are the outlets? I have to plug in my straightening iron." Lindsay asked to Chris.
"There are some in the communal bathrooms, just across the way." He replied.
"Communal bathrooms? But, I'm not Catholic." Lindsay said, very confused.
"Not communion, communal!" He said.
Gwen sighed. "It means we shower together... idiot."
"Oh, no! Come on!" Lindsay cried, very emotional by Gwen's insult.
"I'm glad we're in our own cabin with just guys. You know what I mean?" Owen said to Trent and Noah, as Lindsay was still crying. They gave Wwen an akward look and went back into the cabin. Owen quickly realized what he said. "I mean, no-I didn't mean it like that. I love chicks. I just don't want to sleep near them. Uh! I mean..."
On the other cabin, Geoff asked: "Excuse me, Chris? Is there a chaperone of any kind in this facility?"
"You're all twenty years old, old enough to look out for yourself! So, other than myself, you'll be unsupervised. You've got a half an hour to unpack and meet me back at the main lodge, starting, now!" Chris replied. "Nice!" Geoff said.
Bridgette was just about to talk to Duncan, when someone on the other cabin started to scream.
Tyler, Gwen, DJ, Harold, Duncan, Bridgette and Leshawna all went inside the girls' side of the Gopher cabin to investigate the scream.
"Oh, man, that white girl can scream." Leshawna said.
Lindsay stood terrified on a stool. "What is it? Kill it! Kill it!" She said.
A little cockroach stood in the middle of the cabin.
DJ freaked out aswell, making a leap to the nearest bed. The bed fell apart the moment DJ jumped on it.
"That, was my bed." Gwen said, with a displeased tone. Heather and Beth both took shelter in an upper bed.
Harold and Leshawna both tried to squash the cockroach, although the little bug managed to keep avoiding the angry footstomps. All of the sudden, Duncen stood right in front of the cockroach armed with an axe. With one swift slam, he sliced the bug into two pieces.
"Well that's one way to kill a cockroach." Gwen said, slightly impressed.
Tyler quickly snook up to Lindsay. "If you ever see one of those again, just let me know, okay? 'Cause, you know, I could do that, too." He said to her. Lindsay was flattered.
"They always go for the jocks." Duncan said with a small grin on his face. He looked back at Bridgette, who smiled at him.
- The Main Lodge -
The Main Lodge was the dining area, with two large tables on each side and a large kitchen behind the wall. Between the kitchen and the dining area was a serving hatch. Behind the hatch stood Chef Hatchet, a very large, incredibly muscular black man wearing a yellow t-shire, green pants, armie boots, a chef's hat and an apron.
"Listen up! I serve it three times a day, and you'll eat it three times a day. Grab your tray, get your food, and sit your butts down now!" Chef screamed at the campers.
"Excuse me. Will we be getting all the major food groups?" Beth asked. "Yeah, because I get hypoglycemic real bad if I don't get enough sugar." Harold said. Chef's eye twitched.
"You'll get shut the hell up!" He screamed at both of them.
"Have a cow." Owen joked to Noah.
"What was that? Come closer fat boy. I didn't hear you!" Chef said.
"Uh, I didn't really say anything important." Owen said as he started to panic at Chef's glare.
"I'm sure you didn't!" He agreed.
"You, scrawny kid. Give me your plate." He said to Noah.
Chef dropped a scoop of red meat onto Noah's burger, but the meat jumped back onto the scooper. Chef dropped it again, and the meat didn't move this time.
Leshawna and Eva were standing beside each other in the line. "Yo, what's up girl?" She asked Eva. Eva responded with a glare. "Oh, it's gonna be like that is it?" She replied to the glare.
"Next!" Chef screamed.
Lindsay and Gwen were standing beside each other at the serving hatch. They were looking concerned at their plates. "Excuse me, my nutritionist says I shouldn't eat any white sugar, white flour, or, like, dairy." Lindsay said to Chef, while he caught a fly with his bare hand.
"I don't think that's gonna be a problem." Gwen replied. "Cool!" Lindsay said.
"Okay, I hate to be predictable and complain on the first day, but I think mine just moved."
Without saying a word, Chef grabbed a mallet and squashed her burger, causing the meat to spill everywhere. "Right! Okay, then." Gwen said very disturbed.
The teams sat on their tables, and everyone was conversing with each other. All of the sudden, Chris walked in. "Welcome to the main lodge." He said.
"Yo, my man! Can we order a pizza?" Geoff asked. He had barely enough time to duck as a cleaver flew right over his hat, leaving a loud clang as it hit the wall. "Whoa, it's cool, 'G'! Brown slop's cool. Right, guys?" Geoff said, as Chef was still staring at him with a deadly glare. Everyone seemed to agree with Geoff.
"Your first challenge begins in one hour." Chris continued.
"What do you think they'll make us do?" Katie asked DJ. He shrugged. "It's our first challenge. How hard can it be?". Chris smiled.
- The Cliff -
The camera showed a 100 foot high cliff, with all the campers on top wearing their bathing suits.
"Oh, s***." DJ said.
So, this was the first chapter. Let's break a couple of things down:
- Because there are more campers now, Chris decided to introduce the campers alphabetically instead of random introductions, because he felt like it was easier for the viewers to remember the names of the campers this way. Because of this, some things were changed. Cody felt much more manly because of him being the first guy to enter the dock. He might even get more confident in himself throughout the story. Another big thing, Duncan arrived before Heather on the island. The only girls that were there when he arrived were Beth and Bridgette, and we all know that Duncan likes to flirt with the best looking girl he can see. I used Bridgette's kindness to turn Duncan's insult into a compliment, from her perspective. And as we all know, Duncan can be nice to people if they can stand him. How will that work out later in the challenges? And ofcourse, Zoey and Lightning. How long can Heather stand Lightning's ability to keep refering himself in the third person? How long can Izzy stay sane? How long can Owen continue his eternal quest for food? Find out in the next chapter, of Total Drama Island: 24 Campers.
I will try to put a new chapter every two weeks. The first chapters will probebly be published sooner, but I have a lot of extra plotpoints that I want to write that aren't in the original show, so I will have to work those out a little bit better than I currently have. See you all next time!