Aladdin and the Sonic War
Episode I: The Menace
Originally Written By: John
"Translated"/Edited by bricksailor93
A note from the editor: This story was written by John, my brother. This is a strange story, indeed, but that can be explained by the fact that John is autistic. He was "inspired" (that's what he said, not what I said) by me writing the story "Loose Ends". He decided to write a story of his own, based on two things he loved: Star Wars and Aladdin. The story is told from the point of view of Aladdin. He also incorporates a lot from the Hunchback of Notre Dame, Mulan, and other movies.
The important thing to know about this story before reading it is that when you are reading the writing of a kid like John, it will be random and confusing. As his sister, I automatically "translate" what he writes into a form of English that "normal" (I don't really like using that word) would use. To make comprehending his story easier for others, I have "translated" it. However, underneath the corrected grammar, the story is still all John's, and I take no credit. This is my way of making my brother's wish of publishing this story come true. Quite honestly, this is the closest to "published" this story will ever get, without Disney suing us until the day we die. I will say in advance, when John uses different countries like Russia as an enemy, he only does it because he needs country. He holds no prejudices against anyone or any country, so please, don't take any offense!
The other thing we (as in John, my parents, and I) are trying to achieve is awareness that autistic kids CAN do things like write stories and have imaginations. If anyone does comment on this story, I would please ask that you not say things like "This is stupid." "You took that right from the movie." "Why are you writing at all?" Take my word, I know how strange it seems at times. But as John will be seeing the comments, I'd ask you consider before being negative. Tips, advice, constructive criticism, etc. is fine and welcomed.
One last thing: Thank you in advanced for reading! You have no idea how much this means to us all. Heck, if this gets more views than "Loose Ends," I'll be happy. I hope you do find a way to enjoy the story, even if it is only a laugh or two at an autistic kid's imagination.
Happy reading!
-bricksailor93 (aka John's sister)
Chapter One:
Long ago, in a far away land of France, when I was 36 years old, my boys and I were out in Russia with the French Army. This is when the battle between us and the Russian Territory began. This is really where it started. The Russians attacked and we were forced to defend ourselves.
"Open the guns and put some bullets in!" I shouted, "Be prepared to fire!"
Everyone fired their guns at the Russians.
Alan and Ben, my sons, moved to the right of me to grab the canons. They lit them and fired straight at the Russian troops.
Luke took his lightsaber when the troops approached. "Captain, we gotta fight them off!" he said to me.
"Okay, everyone, defend yourselves!" I said.
Luke, Alan, Ben and I attacked the Russians. Using lightsabers, destroying the Russian Army, we swiped and killed several men in a fight. Alan attacked several men and Luke, using his weapon to fight, hit them over the head. Ben suddenly appeared out of a the crowding army. I finally attacked an evil Russian (that was violating the law).
This man's name was Neol.
He was an enemy of mine, and he grabbed his lightsaber as he approached me. I grabbed mine in turn.
"How did you get here?" I asked him, knowing that Neol had been imprisoned in a prison far away on the coast.
"My friends released me," Neol said with an evil grin. "So that I could become a a Menace."
I screwed up my face in determination.
"Well, I won't let you escape for long, Neol!" I turned to him as he turned on his lightsaber, and I mimicked him. Luke watched us.
Luckily, my attack was a trick. As Neol swung his foot at me, I kicked, sending him flying through the air. He crashed through a pane of glass. He got out quickly (I just saw him out of the corner of my eye!)
"Unfortunately, you have failed to win!" Luke yelled at Neol. He stepped in at this time and grabbed the evil man, forcing him to drop his lightsaber. Neol yelled in anger. He made a move to attack Luke, but I stabbed him with my lightsaber. He was only injured, not killed.
"This isn't the end, Aladdin!" he snarled as he grabbed his arm.
I was forced to leave him there. I took the French Army with me, and we took off through the mountains. Luke by my side, we took the lead through Russia.