IMPORTANT. PLEASE READ.
This was the other plot line that I had in mind for Tangled Web. Recently I can't get it out my head, try as I might. I didn't want to completely take down the other version and so have decided I will finish that one. But for my own sanity I need to put up this version. It's driving me insane lol. Actually it was from this plot bunny that I got the idea from timing, hopefully you won't think it's to similar.
The first chapter only has one different paragraph, but it pretty much changes the direction of the plot. I have amended the first five chapters and will put up the first two, maybe three today, depending on the response I get. As always let me know what you think
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