Okay this is my first ever fanfiction so I could do with some opinions and reconmondations. Please tell me if I have some spelling mistakes or what-not. If you can see any improvements please tell me! Thank you! ~Emzo's Creations
Disclaimer: Unfortunally I don't own Twilight; Stephenie Meyer does.
A Night In The Meadow
The night was pitch black as Bella slowly approached her window. She carefully slide it open.
"Bella?" whispered Edward from the garden below "I've got a treat for you."
"What is it?" said Bella straining her eyes to see him.
"Stand back and I'll explain" He replied. Bella cautionally stepped back from the window as Edward flew into the bedroom. Bella looked at him with amazement but quickly changed it to a curious expression.
"Would you like to camp out tonight?" asked Edward as he smiled his crooked smile.
"Why? Where to? What for?" Bella gave him a suspicious look.
"A surprise. Do you want to go or not? 'Cause if not……Well I guess we could just stay here…" Edward replied shrugging his shoulders.
"Okay! Okay! But what about Charlie?" She said as her curiosity got the better of her.
"We'll be back before dawn," He replied "Just get grab something to warm to put over your pyjamas."
So much for explaining thought Bella. As Bella dug through her wardrobe, Edward sat himself on the edge of her bed making occasional comments on what she should put on. When Bella was finally dressed warmly, she climbed on to Edward's back and Edward jumped out into the night.
"Where are we going?" Bella asked.
But Edward remained silent. Within a few minutes they arrived at the meadow, which had a tent in the middle of it. Bella, still confused, climbed off Edward and stumbled towards the tent. When Bella didn't say anything, Edward gently tapped her on the shoulder and pointed upwards. Bella's mouth popped open. Above, was thousands upon thousands of stars glistening in the night sky.
"Wow, it's beautiful." whispered Bella after a full 5 minutes. Edward pulled a sleeping bag out of the tent.
"I know" He replied "Only a few, to you, occasions do you see this clear of sky in Forks." Bella slowly sank in to the sleeping bag drinking it all in. Edward and Bella sat there and watched.
"Bella, sweetheart, it's time to go," Edward said gently shaking her awake. Edward helped her out of the sleeping bag and wrapped a blanket around her. Edward took her home and kissed her goodnight. As he left, the sun was just rising sending the sky into an ocean of colours.
When Bella stirred, there were two notes waiting for her. The first one she found was from Edward. In his elegant writing it said:
I hope you enjoyed your night in the meadow.
Charlie is going to be out for the day.
Do you want to do something?
Call me when you're ready.
Love you
Edward
x
Sure enough, downstairs Bella found Charlie's note:
Gone fishing.
Will be back for dinner.
~Dad
I hope you liked it and please review it all your comments are welcomed!
I've wrote another chapter but I need to type it up and spell check it. I'll do it soon don't worry! :D