Hey all well I read a story by krissipooh and realised that our story's do seem very similar well at least the first chapters I also read her reviews and noticed a lot of people pointed it out to her which got me upset so I can't imagine how she felt.
I have been told (thank you lovelyl) that she originally had this idea and she did do it before me so with that I have decided to change the story a bit so none of us get into any trouble with it.
I don't own sailor moon
It was a sweltering summer's day when Darien walked into the library with his girlfriend of two years.
She had wanted to study for her very last exam in uni and he had agreed to go with her simply because he hadn't been able to spend any time with her lately and he loved reading.
It was when he saw her that everything went wrong. She was wearing a light yellow summer dress that fell to her knees, her long golden hair tied up in a simple pony tail.
He knew her had done for years and had been sleeping with her before she had gone for two years studying abroad it was in that 2 years he had met his current girlfriend Raye and up until the moment he saw her was in a happy relationship, he excused himself quickly and headed towards the stacks she was in.
She saw him and gasped; she didn't have time to do much more then that as he was on her striate after.
She let him crush his lips against hers, she let his hands roam her body reacquainting themselves with old curves and learning the new ones she had developed in the last two years finally he pulled away leaving them both gasping for breath.
No words passed between them, none were needed.
She let him push her up against the wall at the end of the deserted stack of old books, she let him lift her up and press into her. She moaned quietly as he trailed open kisses over her neck and down to her chest.
She blushed as he hiked up her dress reminding him that the innocence he had taken from her had never faded.
One of his hands moved up to her breast and started to massage it tenderly through her dress and bra. His spare hand was rubbing against her panties causing her to buck her hips against him.
As soon as he knew she was ready he pulled himself out of his trousers and entered her feeling of completeness washing over him only served to remind him why he was addicted to the girl he was holding why she had become such a drug to him.
He briefly recognised his girlfriend's voice on the other side of the stack of books they were behind, but even that didn't stop him.
He pushed in and out of her almost harshly as if punishing her for leaving him and she bit her lip to stop from screaming out at the sheer pleasure of it all.
She came quickly but he didn't stop he couldn't he needed this he needed her.
His lips never left contact with hers or her skin. His hands were everywhere from the bottom to her breast massaging them both but never leaving her skin.
She felt herself getting close again as she tightened around him and felt his length twitch inside her in response telling her he was close too.
She came again while kissing him her scream getting lost in the back of his mouth.
As he came he said the name he had swallowed every time he had done this in the past 2 years her name the only one that rolled off his tongue so easily.
She sighed content as he redressed her holding her when she was relaxed enough she let him go told him to find his girlfriend, and watched his retreating back.
'Nobody said love was easy' she frowned, then left.
Okay so I've used a bit from the original but hopefully this changes it enough to make it my own I honestly didn't mean to have the same as anyone on here as I said before I literally got this idea while watching TV.
I do hope you like this re write as much as you all did the original.