my first fic. please tell me what should go better x3

i dont own anything but the text itself

My brother has always been better than me. In everything. I've never liked that. Everyone seems to like him better. And they all expect me to be as cute as him.

Heh, there's no way that will ever happen. Fucking impossible.

Now, though, we have moved to a completely new place. No one knows us here. It's only me and my brother, living in a dorm at this new school. It is far away from wherever we have lived before. Not even the same country. We used to live in Italy, but moved when we got a place in this school. I was against it, but we had no choice. We have money from our parents, and our own house home in Italy. But we still had to move. What choice did we have? Well, we could stay home and take care of our sick grandfather, but nooo… that won't do. You have to go to school! You know that school is great, and you don't even have to pay! What a great chance! You got to take the chance when you have it! Blablablablabla... man, did she ever shut up? That babysitter we used to have…she sure could make you feel like shutting your ears, even if she was a pretty woman. And her boyfriend… ugh, don't get me started. I'll just say that you don't like to be scolded by him. It's a wonder how she puts up with him.

I stood in front of the building that would be the place with my bed inside. I doubt I will ever call this my home. I felt the cold wind stroke my cheek. Well, this went pretty well.

Ugh. I shivered. If something went well, that could only mean one thing. Something would go wrong.

Well, I can tell you what could go wrong, or what did go wrong…

Fuck it. I just know this will go to hell.