This is a remake of The Hunger games with different charters and a different district, the narrator is Miranda Mellxs this is Reaping day.
Chapter one,
As I wake from my sleepless dream I can hear my Mom talking in a sweet but hushed tone to my little sister Gem. My name is Miranda Mellxs and I'm 10 years old, my skin tone is kind-of brown but don't think I'm african American because I'm not I'm Hispanic, my hair is dark brown and medium sized, I put my hair half up and half down and put a bow in my hair to make me look cute. My sister Gem is 6 and looks almost exactly like me except she has really long dark brown hair that goes past her lower back. I get out of bed and ask my Mom, ''what are you doing Mom?'' ''I'm trying to calm Gem down because she had a nightmare.'' My Mom replies. We named my sister Gem because of her Sapphire blue eyes. My eyes are gray like my Mothers, Gem gets her eye color from Dad. ''Gem what was your dream about?'' I ask. ''About Daddy dying.'' Gem replies in tears. '' Gem it's ok Dad is going to be fine I promise.'' Our Dad works somewhere were its very dangerous but we know that he'll be fine or that's what we hope, we worry about him all the time but we convince ourselves that he'll be fine. ''You really think so?'' Gem asked ''Gem I know he'll be fine because Dad can handle himself pretty well. ''I hope your right Miranda.'' today is reaping day and even though I'm Ten years old I'm in the drawing of name for the Hunger Games, so is Gem and my older brother Frilly. I'm a really good runner, swimmer, climber , hunter, singer, jumper, and cooker. Hopefully I can use that to my advantage if I get pick for the Hunger Games this year.
Frilly is 17 years old, he looks excatly like Gem but without the long hair and sapphire blue eyes, he has grey eyes, his hair is wavy dirty blonde hair, like our Dad's hair, and he has fair skin. My brother and I call my little sister Gem Piglet because she's as helpless as one and as small as one and she snorts when she laughs but it's cute and delightful. ''Frilly hurry we'll be late!'' Gem calls to our brother. Gem and I quickly eat a bowl of stew and dash out the door with Frilly lagging behind us. ''Frilly hurry come on!'' I shout. ''Fine but I'm going to beat you there.'' ''No your not.'' Then the three of us race to the stage were the reaping day ceremony are going to be. I won the race and as Frilly and Gem congratulate me I see my friends in the crowed, Kalily, Kammy, and Rally. Kalily is my best friend of the three because she's the only one who plays with me without bossing me around and she's just my best friend, if she were called I would volunteer in a heart beat. President Frowls takes the stage and as he doses the audience goes quiet. Then he starts drawing out the first tributes name for the Hunger Games, ''and the name is umm Kalily Wayls!'' ''Is there any volunteer out there who wants to take her place.'' My heart skips a beat and I feel like I'm going to be sick, so I run up to the bottom of the stairs of the stage and I offer to do it. ''I'll volunteer for her. ''What, why are you doing this Miranda?'' ''Because your my best friend and I don't want you to get hurt.'' ''But..'' ''Just let me do this.'' ''Ok.'' she says sweetly as I go up the steps to the big stage and shake president Frowls hand. '' how about an around of applause for umm...'' He looks at me as if he did not know my name so I shouted '' Miranda.'' ''Oh yes Miranda.'' president Frowls has white bushy hair and a noes that looks like witches noes because of how pointy it is. As the hoots and the sound of hands clapping from District 11 stops it becomes silent again as President Frowls draws the next name for the boy tributes. ''And this years Boy tribute is umm ''Ronny Relms!'' ooh I know him or I've seen him before. The boy named Ronny with shaggy brown hair and baby blue eyes took his place on stage. ''Any volunteers?'' Nothing but silents came across district 11. ''ok then lets give a really big round of applause to our tributes who will be in the Hunger Games. The whistling, shouting, and clapping, broke the silents of the crowed.
I watched the rest of the reaping day at my house I see my opponents from the other districts walk on stage. A girl from district 4 , than a boy, and a Girl from District 12 whose name is sammy she looks a lot like my best friend Kalily except with darker skin than her. Than I see a Boy from District 12 who's name is Rakmy. After the reaping day reruns I go down the hall to my room to pack my stuff for the Hunger Games. The outfit I'm wearing right now is a pink\yellow dress that has red roses on it, with a hair bow that is Pink\yellow to match my dress. As I'm packing my clothes in my suite case I hear my brother ask me something, ''why did you do that?'' ''because I love her, and she means every thing to me and I couldn't let her go, because she is my best friend and she is the only one who understands me, she doesn't boss me around, she doesn't yell at me if I do something wrong, and she doesn't push me around, and she dose not hit me when she gets mad, if I do something she dose not like she tells me sweetly and then I stop what I'm doing, and I just could not let her go.'' ''Yes, I guess I understand but you are my flower, your my girl, and you are my soul. you mean every thing to me, and if you die my world will crash down, and there will not be much of me left in this world. ''yes, but it is too late Frilly and I'll be fine.'' After I had said that Frilly's gray eyes turned red, because he had started crying, tears rolled down his skinny cheeks. I ran over to where he was standing and gave him a big hug. ''Good night Frilly.'' ''Good night Miranda.'' as he left the room I started packing my clothes again. I have circles underneath my eyes because I do not sleep well during the was time for a bath, I went into my bathroom and saw my sister Gem in the bath tub half asleep, I could tell she'd been there for awhile, I picked her up, dried her with a towel, and brushed her silky dark brown long hair, then put her silky pink pajamas on her, and tucked her in bed. After that, I got undressed and got in the warm bubbly bath tub, after 5 minutes, I drained the water and dried myself , brushed my hair, and brushed my shiny white teeth. After all that I put my satin yellow nightgown on and went to bed. *****
''Miranda wake up you have be at the Justice building in one hour, hurry up and get down here.'' ''Ok Mom I'll be there in a minute.'' I spring out of my nice warm bed, brush my medium silky dark brown hair, which my Mom put in a nice ballet bun for me, I put on a pink\white dress that has a light colored blue at the bottom of it, I have a white hair bow in my hair to match my white tights and my white dress shoes. After I'm dressed in my nice clothes, I'm taken to the Justice building, where I can say good bye to my friends and family. I see Gem burst into the room, and when our eyes meet she runs over to me and immediately wraps her arms around me. Than I sit on the soft velvet chair and I see my brother frilly come in with tears in his eyes and say, ''Good bye my beautiful flower.'' ''Bye Frilly.'' ''Good bye my Piglet Gem.'' ''Good bye Miranda.'' ''Bye Mom I love you.'' ''I love you too my baby girl.'' As they walked out of the room my best friend Kalily comes in to say good bye, ''Hey bff, you be carful out there ok.'' ''Ok I'll try to.'' ''I'm going to miss you very much Miranda.'' I'm going to miss you too.'' than we hugged each other and said our last goodbyes to each other. As she left I see my prep team come in, one of them said, ''hi follow me umm...well.. oh Miranda.''
End of chapter One please review my story I want to know if it is any good so please review my first chapter of the remake of the Hunger Games!