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-Eyes of a murderer-
Neji: I do not own Naruto, sorry.
I gently opened my eyes, doing so made the blizzard roar to life once again in the bleak midwinter. It was around twilight, with the remaining light barley helping me see past the blinding catastrophic snow from hell. I always held my hopes high that someone would come help me, or that it would stop, but it never did come to a halt. It was a continuous storm that I knew wouldn't come to and end - just like my life. I always wanted my life to come to an end ever since I made the wrong choice. I knew that I wasn't the only one to choose wrong, but I somehow felt I made the worst choice ever.
No! It wasn't the worst choice ever I made the right choice I just know I did!
I realized that my irrational side must have been getting to me again just as it has been the last couple of days.
Thoughts like the one I just expressed are the wrong feelings, and I knew that I made a wrong turn in my life.
Why where these feelings following me everywhere I went? Did I do the right thing? Why did I do this?
Questioning thoughts like these follow me, even in my dreams they still haunt me. I can't escape myself from this Imprisoning hell, no matter how hard I try, recklessness is in the shallows of my eyes. It stands with me everywhere I look, and everywhere I feel.
Why am I asking myself this you may be asking yourself right now. Well if you must know I will tell you why.
It all started with the night I fell in love with a murderer.
***
"Hinata!" Naruto exclaimed from the statues of the Hokagaes. I turned away from my book and blushed at the sight of the pretty blond boy.
"Y..y..e..s," I called back to him in a nervous tone. He jumped onto The head of the fourth Hokagae's statue; then jumped from his head gracefully and landed next to me. "Hinata, what are you doing be Ichiraku Ramen? Didn't your parents not give you and allowance this week?" At first speechless by his voice, then petrified by his curious eyes, but all of that was nothing compared to being immobilized by his stunning voice. "Hinata, your turning red? Do you have a fever or something?" Shocked at my flushing I turned even redder, making him even more confused.
"Naruto I..I..'m fine. And I'm just here to read in peace." I managed to say to him without blushing harder.
"Whatever you say Hinata." He spoke without a problem. He then began to walk away from me, making me only want to yell for him to come back. I tried not to gaze at him when he walked away, but it was so hard. Little did I know he didn't have a clue that I liked him.
"Naruto!" I called to him. It seemed like only seconds my loud voice got to his ears, and he thankfully yelled back to me.
"Yeah? Hinata what's the problem?" This is it. I thought.
"Will you go on a mission with me?" I replied. Naruto looked confused, he had an inquiring look of curiosity in his eyes, wondering why I would ask him to help me with a mission. However their was another side of him to his eyes that wanted to go on the mission because it was... well... a mission.
"Sure, I would love to help out the leave village. I'm very glad your starting to like missions like me Hinata!" His voice grew exited as my face grew red. He doesn't have a clue. I thought. I only blushed harder when he stared into my eyes with a goofy grin on his face. It's a start. I thought.
"Lets head over to Tsunadae, and lets see if she approves of us going on a mission together." Naruto spoke. I tried to return to my senses when he walked towards the Hokagaes office. My attempts where futile because I was still frozen in place.
"Wait for Me Naruto!!!" I yelled. He turned to see me dashing towards him, and he waited for me to catch up to him. It may have been seconds to him, but for me it was hours until I finally reached him.
"Hinata, hurry up I want to do the mission now!" He spoke.
"I'm here, and I am so sorry Naruto!" He put his arms around his chest, like he didn't forgive me at first., but I didn't think about forgiveness. All I wanted to do was to go on our so called 'Mission' that he didn't know was a 'date'.
One minute later of rustling leaves, and whistling winds later we reached the Hokagaes office.
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"I have no missions to assign today," Tsunadae spoke as kindly as she could.
"What!!!??? Hinata said she had a mission to do are you telling me she lied to me??" Naruto replied
"Well, that could be a possibility." Tsunadae spoke. Naruto turned to me, immediately angry at my lies. "Hinata! Why did you lie to me! You know I have a deep compassionate love for missions!" Naruto's voice was filled with hate and fury at my actions I had just created. 'Help me!!' I mouthed to Tsunadae. My words made it clear to her that I did this for a reason, a reason that she specify didn't understand why though. "Actually. I have a mission on finding a loose bandit that just escaped from the sand village, and I think you and Hinata should handle it." Tsunadae's heavenly voice spoke. Naruto glanced towards Tsunadae, his face going from a beast to an angels.
"Rely?" He asked. Tsunadae nodded towards Naruto, making him have an even more angelic face.
"Yes, and as a matter of fact I need you to wait outside my office. Me and Hinata have some things to discuss about the mission." Tsunadae replied. Naruto immediately did as he was told, and rushed out of the office door. Tsunadae casually walked towards the door, and then as soon as her hands touched the door knob; she slammed it fiercely.
"What the hell are you thinking Hinata!!!!!!" Tsunadae screamed in a confused tone. I first was frightened by her words, but then I replied to her.
"I just want to go out on a date with him for crying out loud!!!" I yelled at her as loud as I could. Tsunadaes face of anger turned into one of Naruto's faces of curiosity.
"Is this only because of a date Hinata?!?!" Tsunadae asked in a fierce and confused tone.
"Yeah what are you going to do about it?!??!!!" I Yelled at her with a hint of a questioning tone. That was what made Tsunadae sit their like an idiot, pondering on my simple question for minutes.
"I can send you two on a 'PRETEND' mission together. But make sure you be careful, their are crooks out their at this time of day Hinata." I ignored everything after the word together. I immediately jumped towards Tsunadae with my arms outstretched, I embraced her and let out a loud.
"THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" My words made Tsunadae jump two hundred feet in the air; she had never been scared like that before. Naruto then busted through to door, coming to see what the commotion was all about.
"What the hell is going on!!??" Naruto asked.
"Naruto! Tsunadae said we can go on our mission now!!!!! She also said we can take as long as we need to on the mission."
"Wait just a second I didn't sa-" Hinata cut off Tsunadaes comment by yelling.
"Thanks Tsunadae I really appreciate you letting me go on the da-- I mean mission!!!" I grabbed Naruto's hand, and flung him out of the office. Tsunadae only shook her head as we went away on our little date, and muttered under her breath.
"Kids......."
***
By the time Naruto and I reached the woods it was pitch black darkness with no light to help us see, but a small flashlight that Naruto had. "Hinata, I think maybe we should get some supplies and build a fire or something." Naruto spoke.
"Yeah… I suppose, but make sure you don't kill yourself looking for the supplies Naruto, we wouldn't want you to get injured. Right?"
"Hinata… The thing is I kind of hurt my foot while we where walking and… well… I kind of need you to look for the supplies if you could… please?" He asked.
"Sure thing!" I spoke happily. I hope he is ok. After all if he is injured the whole plan will be ruined. I thought. I did as he requested, and headed down towards the dead trees to collect some wood. With no light it was kind of hard to see anything at all, and with no fire I wouldn't be able to see anyways I thought.
BOOM!!!!
A crackle of thunder sounded towards my direction. It was only seconds later the a flicker of light showed that wood was already in front of me. Perfect. I thought. I grabbed as much as I could, which was only about five pounds of wood, and headed back towards Naruto. Five minutes later of continuous thunder, flickering lights, and the spooky voice on the wind I finally reached Naruto.
"Hinata, Glad to see your back so soon. I never thought you would find wood so quickly!" Naruto spoke to me.
"It's really No problem. With all that lightning I could see it right in front of me." I spoke to him.
"Oh… well if there is lighting ahead don't you think we should put up our tents?" He asked.
"I don't see why not. After all we don't want to wake up to an unpleasant wetness do we Naruto?" I asked.
"Yeah… I suppose." We where pretty much silent after that. With nothing to do but set up the tents we began to do what we had to do. It wasn't easy work though. Naruto's tent was falling down each time he tried to put it up. Yet mine stayed up the very first time. It took a moment for me to realize what was wrong, and when I did realize I burst into tears – his foot was still injured from the walk. As my crying grew louder Naruto turned to me to see what the problem was. "Hinata! Did you hurt yourself?! What's wrong?" Naruto asked in a concerned tone. I nervously pointed towards his foot that was still injured I managed to say barely without a stutter.
"Your foot.. I am so sorry for not taking it into consideration! I swear I didn't mean to! I just didn't realize it!! I am so sorry!!!!" I spoke in an upset and sincere tone. This made his eyes be filled with understanding all of a sudden. "Hinata… I am so sorry I didn't tell you.. it's just that…. Well… I… I… I.. well I love you!!!" He spoke sincerely. Tears of happiness slid down his face and he spoke, "Who am I kidding you wouldn't fall in love with a fool like me would you?" He spoke this softly, and tears of happiness changed to tears of sadness.
"Naruto.. Don't you understand that… I love you to?" I asked. His eyes widened with hope as I told him the truth. "This wasn't a mission… it was a secret date… there was literally no missions Naruto." I spoke.
"Hinata." Naruto replied. We stared at each other for a moment, only wanting more then gazing into each others eyes. I saw him lean forward, obviously wanting something from me that I had understood. (watched to many romance movies, and obviously knew that he was about to pull off a cheesy move on me.) Only inches apart now I could feel the warm clingy breath that wanted me. It grew stronger as I grew closer, and it intoxicated me to finally get to where I wanted to be.
Our lips touched, and our feelings connected immediately. I could feel his thoughts bursting through mine, and I am sure he could feel my mind tapping into his as well.
It was only a split second into the kiss when suddenly a force knocked us off of our feet with a loud - WOOSH! Naruto screamed in pain. And so did I as the force spread us farther apart. "Hinata!!!" He screamed. I couldn't see anything, and I barley managed to say under my breath,
"Naruto….."
My body gave in to the force, and I could no longer had any idea what was happening at the time. I didn't know that a murderer awaited me.
My story to why I feel this way may not be understandable now, but wait. I will have another section of it ready to read soon. Then you will see what happened that tragic night I fell in love with a murderer.
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Until then please wait patiently. The weekend is ending and that means school is starting.
- End of Chapter one and all of it's contests -