Disclaimer: I do not own LOTR ~ sticks her tongue and does the happy dance
~ so you cant hurt me! ~ Says that in a cheerful voice ~ ok but I do own
Eternity and I do own her other form! I made them up so I get royalties if
anyone uses her! So hahaha but if you're planning on suing for any
reasonable reason please don't..Im poor and weak..And don't send any
muggers/killers after me cuz' ill most likely scream really really
loud.anywhoo on with this piece of shit..I mean story.. Also this is a
rough scratch of a story and I want to see if you guys (the readers) like
it and I know I have to work out a few kinks.
I PRAY THIS IS NOT A MARY SUE! IF IT IS PLEASE TELL ME AND ILL GO BEAT MYSELF! Also please tell me if I spelt anyone's names wrong so I can go and fix it..
"Talking" ~ Eternity in horse form ~ 'Thought'
Chapter 1-IM A WHAT!
Eternity sighed as she tried to balance on the thin beam that made up the top of the fence. Slowly she placed a bare foot infront of another and curled her toes every so lightly around the edges like she was holding on. She slowly brushed her big toe along the side as she spun and tried a handstand. Slowly she swung her legs up into the air as she had one hand infront of the other. Her thin fingers grasped the edge so that she didn't tip over and fall.
She was balancing on the fence in her backyard, practicing her gymnastics as a warm breeze whipped her sweaty hair out of her face and slowly drying it. The breeze shifted through the short grass of her backyard, brushing up bugs and dust along with pollen and small snippets of grass, sending it flying around and some landed in her eyes making her yelp, lose her balance and come crashing down.
The ground knocked the air out of her and she lay there gasping and making snorting sounds. 'Oh pain..Great pain' she thought as she tried to prop herself up on her elbows but found herself laying back down her mind wheeling with sweet numbness. 'Did I break something?' she thought as she tried again and propped herself up from about 3 seconds before gently lying back down and growling in irritation. "Oh rosy shit!" she cursed.
She closed her eyes thinking about how she was going to tell her brother that she fell again and may have really badly hurt her back. 'He works so hard to support us' she thought as a sudden wave of dizziness washed over her 'oh head ache' she groan but it came out different, deeper. Slowly she opened her eyes but quickly closed them as they were met with the harshness of natural light. 'Oh note to self never open eyes that fast'
Slowly she opened her eyes and blinked in confusion. She was still lying down and some old guy was leaning over her whispering weirdly and when she opened her mouth to scream she heard a horses neigh and that made her really confused. The old man backed up but continued to talk to her as if she was some kind of animal and then suddenly she understood him like she could a normal human but was just ignoring them.
"Hello young one" he said in a soothing voice "my name is Gandalf the gray but as you see" he gave a light chuckle " I am not gray but white so I am now Gandalf the white." He reached out and ran his hand along her cheek and began to scratch her neck.
~ HEY OLD MAN! ~ She tried to yell but came out as an angry neigh and that spooked her self. She took a step back and then looked down at her feet. ~ Bloody hell I have hooves..~ Paused and began to breath really hard ~ I'm a horse! ~ She paused and looked at the man infront of her. ~ Wow did he just say Gandalf the white? ~ She felt all of her hooves move towards him alittle bit unbalanced but it came easier after 2 or 3 steps.
_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_* WHAT GANDALF SAW -----------------------------
Gandalf raised an eyebrow and he watched the unsteady mare that was slowly walking towards him and when she reached him he glanced at his other three companions who were waiting for him to call for shadowfax and be off. He looked back to the mare infront of him only to come face to face with her nose. He watched in middle interest as she looked him over and then her eyes lit up and she started to look around for something. Gandalf almost fell over laughing when she spotted Aragorn and Legolas and tried to run over to them but tripped over her legs and lay on the ground before slowly making her way over to them.
---------------------------- BACK TO ETERNITY *_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*
Eternity had looked gandalf over and thought ~hey if Gandalf is here then so is Aragorn and legolas~ she had tried to run over to them but ended up face planting it, which was very very eternity! She managed to slowly walk over to them and stood infront of her heroes! The ones the inspired her to take up gymnastics and to try and be the best she could be. ~ Wow ~ she whispered and it came out a soft wicker.
*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_* ON WITH THE STORY! _*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*
Legolas felt a ping of nervousness when he watched this mighty black mare slowly walk up to them and stare at them. He watched as she walked closer and closer till she rested her head on his shoulder like a horse form of a hug. 'What do I do?' he asked him self as he gently patted her neck and that's when he first saw the white sideways 8 on her forehead meaning Eternity.
Aragorn got the same treatment and when she reached gimli she looked down at him and bowed her head lightly since he was to short or she didn't want to hug him. "Is your name eternity?" He voiced as she just stood there and when she nodded her big black head he looked at Aragorn who was looking at him funny. " She has the eternity sign of her head" he stated bluntly.
Gandalf suddenly made called out to shadowfax, making eternity jump and stare at him evilly. He just glanced at her and soon all of them were mounted and ready to go off when she trotted up beside them, making them look at her funny and when they took off at a gallop she ran after them.
~ Your not leaving me here all alone! ~ Eternity roared..Er..Neighed really loudly as she caught up with them and then Legolas looked over at her and said something in elvish and then kept on riding. ~ I wish I paid more attention in gym class~ she snorted as she kept up with the other horses who were down to a slowly canter. ~ Don't think think your going to get rid of me~ she whickered as they continued till they reached the main city of rohan (truly I forgot its name if anyone can tell me I would be very happy!!)
Legolas looked at eternity as she happily trotted after them even when they tried to ditch her in the stables she somehow managed to get out and followed them like a puppy. When they reached the main doors legolas watched in amusement as the guards looked at the mare then at them and they just shrugged. "She will come with us if she pleases" he heard gandalf say "she is related to Shadowfax lord of horses and wishes to know what is going on in the world of men." Legolas looked at the black mare in surprise.
Eternity felt her self-snicker and it came out as a soft neigh ~way to go old man! ~ She whickered. As she impatiently stamped her left front hoof, starting the poor man infront of her. ~ Yes be afraid be very afraid ~ she snorted. Slowly she advanced, making her hooves sounding very threatening on the stone floor. ~ I'm going to eat you I'm going to eat you ~ she playfully neighed as she backed up to her spot beside legolas and tossed her head a few times. ~ Just to look cute ~ She playfully snorted.
She watched as the handed all their weapons except Gandalfs staff ~ duh stupid mortal rohan men! ~ Eternity muttered in a light whinny. She watched as the battle happened between gandalf and saruman, The three musketeers (Aragorn, Legolas, and Gimli) and some guards. Eternity just stood there and when anyone looked at her she just gave a human like shrug..If that is even possible.
TBC!!
Please don't hurt me to bad!! I hope you like it so I can get down and actully write it out!
I PRAY THIS IS NOT A MARY SUE! IF IT IS PLEASE TELL ME AND ILL GO BEAT MYSELF! Also please tell me if I spelt anyone's names wrong so I can go and fix it..
"Talking" ~ Eternity in horse form ~ 'Thought'
Chapter 1-IM A WHAT!
Eternity sighed as she tried to balance on the thin beam that made up the top of the fence. Slowly she placed a bare foot infront of another and curled her toes every so lightly around the edges like she was holding on. She slowly brushed her big toe along the side as she spun and tried a handstand. Slowly she swung her legs up into the air as she had one hand infront of the other. Her thin fingers grasped the edge so that she didn't tip over and fall.
She was balancing on the fence in her backyard, practicing her gymnastics as a warm breeze whipped her sweaty hair out of her face and slowly drying it. The breeze shifted through the short grass of her backyard, brushing up bugs and dust along with pollen and small snippets of grass, sending it flying around and some landed in her eyes making her yelp, lose her balance and come crashing down.
The ground knocked the air out of her and she lay there gasping and making snorting sounds. 'Oh pain..Great pain' she thought as she tried to prop herself up on her elbows but found herself laying back down her mind wheeling with sweet numbness. 'Did I break something?' she thought as she tried again and propped herself up from about 3 seconds before gently lying back down and growling in irritation. "Oh rosy shit!" she cursed.
She closed her eyes thinking about how she was going to tell her brother that she fell again and may have really badly hurt her back. 'He works so hard to support us' she thought as a sudden wave of dizziness washed over her 'oh head ache' she groan but it came out different, deeper. Slowly she opened her eyes but quickly closed them as they were met with the harshness of natural light. 'Oh note to self never open eyes that fast'
Slowly she opened her eyes and blinked in confusion. She was still lying down and some old guy was leaning over her whispering weirdly and when she opened her mouth to scream she heard a horses neigh and that made her really confused. The old man backed up but continued to talk to her as if she was some kind of animal and then suddenly she understood him like she could a normal human but was just ignoring them.
"Hello young one" he said in a soothing voice "my name is Gandalf the gray but as you see" he gave a light chuckle " I am not gray but white so I am now Gandalf the white." He reached out and ran his hand along her cheek and began to scratch her neck.
~ HEY OLD MAN! ~ She tried to yell but came out as an angry neigh and that spooked her self. She took a step back and then looked down at her feet. ~ Bloody hell I have hooves..~ Paused and began to breath really hard ~ I'm a horse! ~ She paused and looked at the man infront of her. ~ Wow did he just say Gandalf the white? ~ She felt all of her hooves move towards him alittle bit unbalanced but it came easier after 2 or 3 steps.
_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_* WHAT GANDALF SAW -----------------------------
Gandalf raised an eyebrow and he watched the unsteady mare that was slowly walking towards him and when she reached him he glanced at his other three companions who were waiting for him to call for shadowfax and be off. He looked back to the mare infront of him only to come face to face with her nose. He watched in middle interest as she looked him over and then her eyes lit up and she started to look around for something. Gandalf almost fell over laughing when she spotted Aragorn and Legolas and tried to run over to them but tripped over her legs and lay on the ground before slowly making her way over to them.
---------------------------- BACK TO ETERNITY *_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*
Eternity had looked gandalf over and thought ~hey if Gandalf is here then so is Aragorn and legolas~ she had tried to run over to them but ended up face planting it, which was very very eternity! She managed to slowly walk over to them and stood infront of her heroes! The ones the inspired her to take up gymnastics and to try and be the best she could be. ~ Wow ~ she whispered and it came out a soft wicker.
*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_* ON WITH THE STORY! _*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*
Legolas felt a ping of nervousness when he watched this mighty black mare slowly walk up to them and stare at them. He watched as she walked closer and closer till she rested her head on his shoulder like a horse form of a hug. 'What do I do?' he asked him self as he gently patted her neck and that's when he first saw the white sideways 8 on her forehead meaning Eternity.
Aragorn got the same treatment and when she reached gimli she looked down at him and bowed her head lightly since he was to short or she didn't want to hug him. "Is your name eternity?" He voiced as she just stood there and when she nodded her big black head he looked at Aragorn who was looking at him funny. " She has the eternity sign of her head" he stated bluntly.
Gandalf suddenly made called out to shadowfax, making eternity jump and stare at him evilly. He just glanced at her and soon all of them were mounted and ready to go off when she trotted up beside them, making them look at her funny and when they took off at a gallop she ran after them.
~ Your not leaving me here all alone! ~ Eternity roared..Er..Neighed really loudly as she caught up with them and then Legolas looked over at her and said something in elvish and then kept on riding. ~ I wish I paid more attention in gym class~ she snorted as she kept up with the other horses who were down to a slowly canter. ~ Don't think think your going to get rid of me~ she whickered as they continued till they reached the main city of rohan (truly I forgot its name if anyone can tell me I would be very happy!!)
Legolas looked at eternity as she happily trotted after them even when they tried to ditch her in the stables she somehow managed to get out and followed them like a puppy. When they reached the main doors legolas watched in amusement as the guards looked at the mare then at them and they just shrugged. "She will come with us if she pleases" he heard gandalf say "she is related to Shadowfax lord of horses and wishes to know what is going on in the world of men." Legolas looked at the black mare in surprise.
Eternity felt her self-snicker and it came out as a soft neigh ~way to go old man! ~ She whickered. As she impatiently stamped her left front hoof, starting the poor man infront of her. ~ Yes be afraid be very afraid ~ she snorted. Slowly she advanced, making her hooves sounding very threatening on the stone floor. ~ I'm going to eat you I'm going to eat you ~ she playfully neighed as she backed up to her spot beside legolas and tossed her head a few times. ~ Just to look cute ~ She playfully snorted.
She watched as the handed all their weapons except Gandalfs staff ~ duh stupid mortal rohan men! ~ Eternity muttered in a light whinny. She watched as the battle happened between gandalf and saruman, The three musketeers (Aragorn, Legolas, and Gimli) and some guards. Eternity just stood there and when anyone looked at her she just gave a human like shrug..If that is even possible.
TBC!!
Please don't hurt me to bad!! I hope you like it so I can get down and actully write it out!