My first fanfic……WOOT!......heh. It might not be as great as others but it's mine. I still know it's better than some.
CONSTRUCTIVE criticism would be nice. ALSO, I shall comply with the all powerful disclaimer. I DON'T OWN ANY OF THESE CHARACTERS!
Now…….ON WITH THE STORY!!!!
A Second Mind
It was a bright, joyful day. Why you ask? Simple; Eggman was stopped earlier. Sonic was running along a plain. He loved the way the adrenaline ceased his thoughts. Many think it's just because he likes being empty-minded but the truth is he liked the way it blocked out certain voices. He stopped to rest for a while. After all, he did start running after he stopped Eggman.
Finally! Do you need to exhaust yourself just to block me out? That's really pathetic!
In reality, Sonic's other, more powerful forms had their own will. They could interact with the hedgehog if they wanted. Unfortunately, some form's dialogue consisted of tearing down Sonic and his confidence.
Can't you be quiet for a while? Geeze, I'm trying to rest!
Sonic clearly was not in the mood for Demon Super Sonic's taunts.
Aww. Is Sonic angry today? The evil one mocked. He actually had something to talk about but he didn't want to pass an opportunity to tease the cobalt one.
"Ok! That's it! I'm going to bed!" Sonic exclaimed as he ran to his bedroom in his and Tails' home.
After a while, Sonic made it home. He rushed to his room and lay on the bed. Soon enough, you could hear snores emanating from his room.
I know it's short but what can you do.............Anyways, have a goodbye for now!! R&R