The New Guy
My newest fanfic is the story of a boy coming to take a farm and grow crops and take care of animals... WRONG! It's the story of a boy wearing a trenchcoat and has a suitcase with a water pistol in it that is going to create chaos in Mineral Town. I'm writing this for no reason, but if I do get any reviews, I'll make this one of my main fics.
Ep. 1 The Farmer
A boy with brown hair and eyes stood on a speed boat watching the ocean. He wore blue overalls and black shoes. He also had a brown trenchcoat, black sunglasses, and a silver briefcase.
He blinked, seeing the sight of a beach. He stood up and grinned. "Hello, Mineral Town."
As the boat docked, he hopped off and took a look around. It was a beach with two houses, some stairs, and a midget. A midget?
He walked to the midget and said, "Hello midget." The little man blinked and said, "No, I'm Mayor Thomas. You must be..." He took out a piece of paper and put on his glasses. "Uryu Ishida?" "No." "Akito Hayama?" "No." "Squall Leonhart?" "My name is Jack! JACK!" He roared so loud, he blew him away.
"Good riddence." Jack said. Then he took out his gunblade on his side (Revolver edition) and a magazine of Timber Maniacs and sat down. "Wonder what's taking the mayor so long?"
Someone ran down to the beach with a katana. She had brown hair, green eyes, purple jacket over white shirt, and brown shoes. "Why did you just fling the mayor all the ay to the mountains?!" She snapped.
Jack looked up. "You must be the mayor." He said. "You took too long." "I'm not the mayor!" She screamed. "You like to scream, don't you?" The girl got so angry she lunged at Jack. "Time to take out the secret weapon."
The girl flinched, stopping her attack. What could he have in that briefcase? She wondered. He took out a... WATER PISTOL! She dropped on the floor anime style.
"A water pistol?!" She screamed, running to him. He aimed the pistol in her eyes and BAM! "Ahhh! I'm blind!" She screamed.
"Now, shut up!" He yelled, grabbing his gunblade. He raised the blade and slashed her face! "AHHH!" She screamed louder, fanting.
The mayor ran back and said, "Jack, how could you... How DID you make her faint like that?" Jack grinned. "My name is Jack, a SeeD from Balamb Garden." "Really" "No."
Thomas looked at Karen's bloody face and said, "That mark might leave a scar, but it was well worth it." He looked at Jack and said, "I'll show you your home now."
He led Jack through the town to a huge farm. "Whoa! Lots of places to hack! It's all for me?" The mayor nodded. "Now, you're going to receive a big responsibility. You must now take care of this farm, raising animals and growing crops. Make friends with the townsfolk and who knows? Maybe you'll- ARE YOU EVEN LISTENING?!"
Jack had the Valiant at his side, shooting all the birds gathering his field. "Too many birds." He said, continuing to attack.
The mayor slapped his forehead and said, "Jack, come here and get these seeds." Jack turned and took the turnip seeds. "I hate turnips." Jack looked at Thomas, gripping the Valiant.
"AHH!" The mayor screamed, running out of the farm. "And stay out!" He screamed, continuing to shoot.
Jack's stomach started to growl. "I'm hungry." He walked to the inn for a drink.
He saw a variety of people in the inn, drinking. Jack wasn't so okay with this.
"DRINKING IS WRONG!" He had the Valiant and a water pistol on each of his hands, shooting. "AHHH!" They screamed. "Dad!" A girl yelled. She ran out a door and looked at the Shooter.
She had orange hair, tied up in a braid with a silver ribbon. She had blue eyes and wore blue overalls too. She had a buster sword in her hands. "Ann, save us!" Doug screamed.
Ann turned back to Jack. "You'll pay for ruining the bar." She growled. "Take this!"
Ann lifted the blade and swung as hard as she could. Jack jumped and aimed for her eyes with the water pistol. She split her blade into two and dodged. "My sword can split into different swords about up to 6." She smirked.
Jack tried to shoot her with the Valiant, but she dodged, and tried to slash him. He let go of the Valiant and grabbed his gunblade, blocking the blow.
She stared at him. "You would let go of a real gun insteadof a water pistol?" "This pistol is special. It never runs out." Jack grinned.
He tried to shoot her eyes, but again she dodged, clashing both her blades into his gunblade. He aimed for the eyes, but missed as she ducked.Ann tried to sweep kick him, but he jumped.
"Take this!" He squirted some water at her legs, making her slip and fall to the wooden floors of the inn. She was about to get up when Jack threatened her with his gunblade and water pistol. "Now, I want a cheeseburger with no pickles." He said.
So what do you think. I added a lot of ideas from Final Fantasy VIII into this story for more action. I don't like the fact that most of the Harvest Moon stories are filled with mushy romance and love. What happened to action?!