This is my first FanFiction story ever. So give me your input, because I don't know what I should do and I have a lot of ideas for stories.
It hurts to walk now, to keep my eyes open. My breathing has turned into wheezing. My only thoughts are of my younger brothers.
Did they make it out?
All communications with them have been down for what seems like hours now. The static is all I can hear from the ear piece. Finally I collapse on more rumble looking towards the sky. I don't want to give up to never see my family and friends again.
This isn't fair!
I scream but only inside my head, all of my calls have been muffled and silenced.
Flash Back
My back was turned to my father as I stared at my younger brother. He stood their shaking with anger. The words stung as they hit me.
"How could you do this Scott?"
At times my youngest brother Alan can be hot headed and at those times I can understand why, but now I just stood shaking my head.
At that moment Tin-Tin burst into the room.
"Scott. Alan." Then I knew that Tin-Tin had told Alan.
Tin-Tin and I had been spending a lot of time together and finally it had come out that we wanted to date.
"You, BASTARD!" Alan then through himself at me, making me topple over.
"ALAN NO!" I heard Tin-Tin scream. She was to late though the fight had already started.
"Alan Tracy!" My father ripped both of us apart.
I wiped the blood from my lip and looked at Alan, he was furious he then looked at Tin-Tin.
She was now pleading with him to let her explain.
"Forget it, I don't want anything to do with any of you anymore." Alan stormed from the room.
Tin-Tin rushed after him and I was left with a bloody lip and a questioning father.
Now as I pick myself up from the ground to start the steep hike again I pray to god that Alan will forgive me. The cough that escapes my lips carries the faint traces of blood. All I want is to get out of this hole. To find my family happy on the other side to have Alan forgive me. All my thoughts suddenly turn to the static on my headset.
"Can….Anyone……hear……me………" It breaks out and I return the call.
"Virgil is that you?" The question is answered with more static.
Please answer! My head screams.
"Scott….please……help me." It is Virgil my heart bursts with joy just knowing he is alright.
"Where are you?" I know my question will be broken to him.
"Alan…..he's…..hurt needs ……medical help…." Virgil breaks in again.
My heart sinks hearing my little brother needs help. We have always been trained to help people that need help in a professional way but this is different.
"Virgil tell me where you are at." I order into the headset.
"To….the….north…." Virgil sounds scared now.
I take a moment to think, "to the north." I'm in a cave so directions are difficult to take without my computers running right. Finally it comes to me that the cave is facing North when we came in. So they must be ahead of me.
"Virgil hold on. I'm on my way." Though the pain racks my body I force it to move up and forward towards my brothers.
