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Author's Rant No. 1
As I've admitted before I, Yuukii-Tan am not always on planet earth. This is well, what I like to call a minor setback. Moving on I've edited and totally re-wrote all three chapters. The reason for me doing this is simple; at least I believe it is. Being one hundred and ten percent honest I've been avoiding updating this story, because I hated it. I didn't dislike the topic; I disliked how it was written. Over the past year my Accelerated English Class, really did help improve my writing. And, this story wasn't doing my newly acquired/improved writing skills any justice.
(It might me easier to say Yuukii is an insane perfectionist and had to re-write a perfectly good story)
So Bite Me No.2 the improved version was born!
(That would be the page you're currently reading)
Yuukii-Tan
Summary:
Both came from different worlds, He a vampire, and she a vampire slayer clearly they cannot love each other. Kei x Hikari
I DO NOT OWN SA OR ANY OF THE OR ANY OF THE CHARACTERS! EXCEPT MY OC!
Bite Me
By
Yuukii-Tan
OxO
Wherever there is light there is dark.
Wherever you find a saint, a sinner shouldn't be very far.
Where there is life, death is lurking around.
My point would be; this is a fate you cannot escape no matter how hard you try.
Not even after death, after everything is said to make sense, instead it gets more confusing.
At the beginning of life when we are humans, we are already born into a difficult world to understand.
Right away the young are taught sinners burn in hell and saints go to heaven.
We live the rest of our lives thinking after death will be easier than life it's self. Even if we do not say it we, should surely think it.
After all it is normal.
Yes the basics apply with both heaven and hell.
But not all of us make it into one or the other, some are trapped in between.
Never to see complete light or complete darkness.
We are tormented by the unknown of our seemingly bleak lives as the un-dead.
To live we must kill the innocent, for the sweet nectar that runs through their veins, known as blood.
I, Takishima Kei, am a vampire.
We vampires lack control around human, it's almost placing a small child in a room filled with birthday gifts. It's an overwhelming feeling, then instinct takes control, we lose every shred of control.
A vampire with a strong blood lust is not the best sight to witness.
So vampires don't lose control they go on hunts.
Hunts usually have a group of two to three vampires, helping one another take down their target to get a drink.
Oddly enough, I am against these hunts, and yet I let Akira and Ryuu drag me on one.
"Kei, you have to drink. Don't fight your instinct, it's not healthy." Were my ears deceiving me or was I actually hearing the Akira showing concern for me.
"I'll be fine."
"Kei, you can't live on animal blood for the rest of your days. Actually I'm surprised you haven't started to gain your memories from the light days. After that what's next mortality?"
"Ryuu!"
"Fine I'll choose a target. On one condition neither interfere in unless absolutely necessary."
No matter hard how we try to cover it up we cannot hide the truth.
Ryuu had said everything that had been bothering me these past few days. No I had not started to gain my memories from the light days. In fact the exact opposite had bothering me.
Recently, I've been becoming more and more forgetful.
But it got me thinking, what if slowly I'm withering away.
Usually when a vampire starts to die, they remember things from what we vampires call our light days.
Light days were the days that we lived.
After death the soul's memories are completely wiped.
The reason behind this is so we no longer bother the living.
But, it doesn't help, much.
We still have to bother the living, but they are the reason we came into existence.
Most if not all people believe if they are bitten by a vampire they become one. This is not the case; we are not vampires by choice.
We did not choose this ill fate.
It was a curse placed upon us, upon my people.
Then I was an idiot, ignorant to everything, and because of my faults my people suffered.
At first she made it simple things droughts, illnesses, poverty, and wars.
She tried to crush the spirit of my people, to make them revolt.
Eventually she realized that they would never betray me.
And so she decided my people should follow me, even after death.
She would never me rest, so in turn my people could never rest.
It is only now that I wish they betrayed me, and gave her my head on a silver platter, just as she wished.
If they did no-one would suffer this cruel fate that we must.
If only.
That's when the sound of footsteps brought me out of my thoughts.
She was walking down a dark alley, like it was nothing.
She wore a tan school uniform.
Her backpack was lazily slung over her right shoulder.
And her hair a slight pinkish tint under the street lamps.
It seemed too perfect.
I half expected to blink and she'd be gone, just as fast as she appeared.
Funny thing is idiots make the world go round. And this girl was dumb enough to wander the dark streets in a city like this. Not to mention on a night like this, the night of the no moon.
If I were healthy my powers would be at their peak, but this wasn't the case.
Slowly I crept towards her; I couldn't afford to lose this chance.
I lunged towards her, knocking the girl out cold.
Then stopped, dead in my tracks.
How could I have been so, ignorant?
I was followed, this entire time.
And by the scent of this being, it was no ally.
Author's Rant No.2
Well that's the new and improved chapter of Bite Me. And I'm actually excided to write the next chapter. I'm trying to remain in one point of view per chapter, since it gets way to confusing switching around. Now the only way I switch point of view, is if the characters are in two different places. And it's not repeating the same scene twice in a different view.
Does Kei seem a wee bit out of character to you? I tried to make him cold but I fear I made him into Mr. Ice Cold. Not good, not good at all.
Okay guess its time to close up, please review. Pretty please with a cherry on top. Anyway before this gets pointless and longer than the actual chapter please review.
Suggestions are gladly accepted and kind of needed…
Bye!