A Second Chance at Life
Before I start this rewrite I want to thank you for reading this.
Thoughts are like this (Examples)Damn it I can't lose not like this!
Speech/Describing things are like this. (Examples) "I love you Juugo," Kimimaro says caressing, Juugo's face

X-x-X-x-X- Underneath the ground
It seems like I'm trapped here. "Lord Orochimaru..." Kimimaro whimpers his curse mark throbbing with pain. I just have to kill them. Kimimaro struggles to stand. "I have an idea." He closes his eyes

X-x-X-x-X- Above ground

"Gaara I am now certain that he is dead!" Lee says excitedly.
Gaara looks around before nodding and saying: "Yes I do believe you are right."
"Dance...Bracken Dance"
"We were lucky you still had some chakra left, Gaara. I would have been a goner without you." Lee says smiling brightly at, Gaara.

"YOU ARE WRONG!" Kimimaro shouted angrily.
"H-How are you still alive." He's a tough one...
"Lord Orochimaru cares about me. He would Never abandon me!." Kimimaro yells tears slightly brimming in his eyes because of his rage.
"Such a sad little pawn. Your master has brainwashed you well." Gaara mutters glaring at, Kimimaro in defiance causing Kimimaro's rage to build.
"You die first. Clematis Dance...Flower..." Kimimaro Shouts. I can't...fading

X-x-X-x-X- Outside of Heaven's Gate.
W-Where am I? Kimimaro opens his eyes and he looks around. He sees that he is in water and there are clouds surrounding him. He sees another being a female.
"Hi there. The name's, Angel and I'm obviously your guardian angel!" Angel says very cheerfully
Guardian Angel? He ponders to himself then says slightly sad "So I'm dead?"
"Yep!" She says bluntly
His eyes widen as he says in shock "I can't be dead! I have to serve my master."
"Well, you are so deal with it. It's not so bad." She says sympathetically
"But I.." Kimimaro is out of ideas he is sad
"Kimimaro We always give people who die a choice."
"A choice. Hm. What do you mean by a choice, Angel?"
"If you would listen for once and didn't interrupt me… Maybe I'd tell you!" Angel huffed angrily.
"I'm sorry, Angel," Kimimaro mutters sadly.
"You won't interrupt?" She stares at him with an annoyed and slightly impatient look.
"You have my word."He says with a shy smile
"Okay here are your choices, Kimimaro."
"Yes I'm listening," Kimimaro says showing slight excitement in his voice.
"You can either go heaven where you will feel ultimate happiness and what not. You can go to hell and be on fire constantly. Lastly, you can be brought back to life. I'm only offering this because you are young and have lots to accomplish in this world also you have someone waiting who loves you very much. Now choose the choice is yours."
Kimimaro clenches his teeth and then says "I choose to live and to serve, Lord Orochimaru!" He shouts