This is my first story in the Melee section (Let alone first story ever) so
if it is bad, give me ideas on how to improve it without flames. The story
is already about fifteen chapters long but needs to be edited so there is a
guarantee of more to follow. Also a warning that some, or possibly many
characters may be out of character at times. And without further ado, here
is:
Pride of a Green Smasher
Prologue 1: Introduction
Legends and scriptures of long forgotten worlds state that all life everywhere is connected in one way to another, whether one thing lives or dies will directly affect another being somewhere else, just like the way of dimensions. When one is created, it may spawn more dimensions. Beings of one dimension may know about the things that happen outside their dimension, or they may be totally oblivious. until it is too late.
****** A young child was playing in a house somewhere, the location is not important just the boy, his name was Josh, an eight year old boy with a big and wild imagination. Currently he is playing with his toys that appear to be little trophies or figurines, he loved to play with them. He had rarely seen anyone else have the type of toys he had, they were based on Nintendo character mascots. The trophies represented the Nintendo videogame characters Mario, Luigi, Yoshi, Ness, Samus Aaron, Captain Falcon, Pikachu, Jigglypuff, Donkey Kong, Fox Mcloud, Link and Kirby.
These figures were all characters created of the company Nintendo, as a sort of propaganda for their company, Josh however won some special edition trophies, he actually won the trophies at a Nintendo company store for being their 2 billionth customer, he was awarded some games, hardware, and these "special edition" trophies, what made them special was that instead of having Nintendo's logo on the bottom which was now on the top, instead it had a strange symbol.
The symbol looked like two lines crossing, one vertical and one horizontal to an outer circle, the thin horizontal line was below the central point of the circle making it closer to the bottom while the wider vertical line was closer to the left side of the circle. The symbol took up the entire area of the circular stand as if it was embedded into the stand. Currently he was playing with them as if they were fighting a giant white glove, which he was wearing on his hand. He bought the glove at a small magic shop while on vacation a while back. He was having the hand be the "bad guy" as it appeared and had 10 little trophies opposing the hand. He was using the trophies like they were a team, fighting against the seemingly much more powerful glove in which the Josh called: The Master Hand.
"HA HA HA! You foolish warriors will never defeat me!" Josh said in a lower voice, trying to sound evil. " We can if we work as a team!" Josh said impersonating all the trophies speaking at once. He then made a giant battle as the trophies seemed to be overtaking the glove "No I cannot be defeated, it is impossible!" Josh said impersonating the Master Hand. Josh then took the trophies and had each deliver a final blow to the white glove. "NOOOOAAAUUUGGHHHHH!!!" he shouted for Master Hand's cry of defeat. He took off the glove and put it on a nearby table which held a box that held many, many, many other trophies, "Yay!! We did it" he said impersonating the 10 trophies, he was about to make another game when he heard his mother call him for lunch he put the ten trophies in the large box with the many other trophies, and exited his room closing the door as he went to have his lunch.
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Defeat. I am defeated. The tournament has failed. instead of destroying each other, they freed the minds of four of my fighters, destroyed my army of polygonal clones and they saw me as the common enemy. If I had succeeded I would rule over six more dimensions and I would be well on my way to controlling all the dimensions!!. But. There is still a chance, with this artifact I can rebuild my army, that is simple enough. Obviously they can beat me as a team, but what about one on one? And while I'm at it perhaps I can make them believe that there is a traitor between them, or even better, have one of them betray the rest! Heh heh heh, I will make a new tournament, this time the stakes will be higher. All the old smashers, and perhaps new ones too! Wait, maybe I can get anyone to join and use their wasted lives, as well as the tournament losers to fuel the Final Destination. Yes!! HA HA HA HA!!! Once any of the combatants have figured out what has actually happened they will already be dead! And the Master Dimension will be open for the taking!! I will crush any opponent who stands in my way!! HA HA HA HA HA HA!! LET THE SUPER SMASH BROTHER'S TOURNAMENT OF MELEE BEGIN!!!!
No need to review the first chapter for it was pretty bland, but it would be nice if you did anyway. More to follow soon.
Pride of a Green Smasher
Prologue 1: Introduction
Legends and scriptures of long forgotten worlds state that all life everywhere is connected in one way to another, whether one thing lives or dies will directly affect another being somewhere else, just like the way of dimensions. When one is created, it may spawn more dimensions. Beings of one dimension may know about the things that happen outside their dimension, or they may be totally oblivious. until it is too late.
****** A young child was playing in a house somewhere, the location is not important just the boy, his name was Josh, an eight year old boy with a big and wild imagination. Currently he is playing with his toys that appear to be little trophies or figurines, he loved to play with them. He had rarely seen anyone else have the type of toys he had, they were based on Nintendo character mascots. The trophies represented the Nintendo videogame characters Mario, Luigi, Yoshi, Ness, Samus Aaron, Captain Falcon, Pikachu, Jigglypuff, Donkey Kong, Fox Mcloud, Link and Kirby.
These figures were all characters created of the company Nintendo, as a sort of propaganda for their company, Josh however won some special edition trophies, he actually won the trophies at a Nintendo company store for being their 2 billionth customer, he was awarded some games, hardware, and these "special edition" trophies, what made them special was that instead of having Nintendo's logo on the bottom which was now on the top, instead it had a strange symbol.
The symbol looked like two lines crossing, one vertical and one horizontal to an outer circle, the thin horizontal line was below the central point of the circle making it closer to the bottom while the wider vertical line was closer to the left side of the circle. The symbol took up the entire area of the circular stand as if it was embedded into the stand. Currently he was playing with them as if they were fighting a giant white glove, which he was wearing on his hand. He bought the glove at a small magic shop while on vacation a while back. He was having the hand be the "bad guy" as it appeared and had 10 little trophies opposing the hand. He was using the trophies like they were a team, fighting against the seemingly much more powerful glove in which the Josh called: The Master Hand.
"HA HA HA! You foolish warriors will never defeat me!" Josh said in a lower voice, trying to sound evil. " We can if we work as a team!" Josh said impersonating all the trophies speaking at once. He then made a giant battle as the trophies seemed to be overtaking the glove "No I cannot be defeated, it is impossible!" Josh said impersonating the Master Hand. Josh then took the trophies and had each deliver a final blow to the white glove. "NOOOOAAAUUUGGHHHHH!!!" he shouted for Master Hand's cry of defeat. He took off the glove and put it on a nearby table which held a box that held many, many, many other trophies, "Yay!! We did it" he said impersonating the 10 trophies, he was about to make another game when he heard his mother call him for lunch he put the ten trophies in the large box with the many other trophies, and exited his room closing the door as he went to have his lunch.
**********
Defeat. I am defeated. The tournament has failed. instead of destroying each other, they freed the minds of four of my fighters, destroyed my army of polygonal clones and they saw me as the common enemy. If I had succeeded I would rule over six more dimensions and I would be well on my way to controlling all the dimensions!!. But. There is still a chance, with this artifact I can rebuild my army, that is simple enough. Obviously they can beat me as a team, but what about one on one? And while I'm at it perhaps I can make them believe that there is a traitor between them, or even better, have one of them betray the rest! Heh heh heh, I will make a new tournament, this time the stakes will be higher. All the old smashers, and perhaps new ones too! Wait, maybe I can get anyone to join and use their wasted lives, as well as the tournament losers to fuel the Final Destination. Yes!! HA HA HA HA!!! Once any of the combatants have figured out what has actually happened they will already be dead! And the Master Dimension will be open for the taking!! I will crush any opponent who stands in my way!! HA HA HA HA HA HA!! LET THE SUPER SMASH BROTHER'S TOURNAMENT OF MELEE BEGIN!!!!
No need to review the first chapter for it was pretty bland, but it would be nice if you did anyway. More to follow soon.