Ok so with this story I decided to do something way different but tell me if you think I should go on with this story or tell if it sucks!!
Chapter 1:
Invatations
"Hey Nia, there's going to be this awesome party that I just got invited and I was wondering if you wanted go with me!" said my best friend Taylor. She was jumping up and down with excitement.
"Are you sure I can come cuz I don't want to just crash someone's party." I asked but I really wanted to go! I love parties.
"There will be so many people there that no one will notice that you weren't invited!" she said trying to persuade me to come.
"Fine. Who's party is it anyway?!" I asked. She hadn't mentioned that part yet in all of her excitement.
"Oh it's Hannah's sweet sixteen and it is going to be poppin!" she replied trying to act all cool. Hannah was the most popular girl in the school. Everybody liked her because she was nice, rich, and gorgeous. Her dad always gives big parties for her. I heard from the lucky people who got invited that there were so many famous people there.
"Um… Nia, you still there??" she asked waving her hand in front of my face.
"Oh sorry. I was just thinking about how awesome this party was going to be!!" I yelled. Then we started jumping around screaming 'We're going to Hannah's party' over and over again. Oh and did I mention that it was the middle of lunch so everybody was staring at us, but we didn't care. You see, we weren't the most popular people at Wilson High. We weren't completely nerdy but we were not even near being at the top of the food chain. Then it hit me. How the heck did Taylor get invited to the party.
"Wait a minute." I stopped jumping and sat down and everyone went back to eating. "How the hell did you get invited to that party??"
"Well I saw Hannah at her locker alone and so I walked up to her to say hi and then we just got talking and she ended up inviting me to the party. She also told me that I could bring one person and that's you." Oh well that makes sense. As I told you before, Hannah's super nice even to dorks and losers.
"So when and where is the party??" I asked. She pulled out the invitation and looked at it with bright eyes.
"OH MY GOD!! It's at her mansion in Hollywood and the party goes from 8 to 2!!!!" she screamed with excitement. Oh my god we were going to party all night. Maybe I'll meet a super hot guy!!
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The bell finally rang, signaling the end of the school day. After saying bye to my friends, I got into my red Ferrari and drove home. You didn't really think that I was poor did you?? My dad kinda owns Abercrombie and Hollister. You probably want to ask me why I'm not popular. Well I go to a really famous (not to mention pricey) private school where everybody is rich. It's just that some people are richer than others and Hannah is the richest girl in the school.
When I walked up to my house I saw my dad's car in the driveway which meant that he didn't have to go to work today. I gave my coat and purse to Hank (our butler) and I saw my dad reading on the sofa.
"Hey daddy!" I said enthusiastically and then I skipped over to him and gave him a hug and a kiss on the cheek. He looked at skeptically.
"Hey honey. Why so happy today?"
"Well I just got invited… well technically I didn't get invited, but I'm going to the party of the year!!" I said bouncing with joy. Then I saw his face. He was going to go all dad on me.
"Whose party is this?"
"Hannah Davis." I said honestly.
"Oh, she's a nice girl. Are you going with some boy??" he asked questioningly.
"Of course not dad! No boy would ask me out." I said sadly which was true. A new boy would start liking me, but when they found out that I was a loser, they acted like I never existed.
"I don't believe that. You're such a pretty girl."
"Dad can we stop talking about my boy issues now. You're embarrassing me!"
"Sorry. Your mother was the one who would be talking to you about boys right now." We both got sad at the thought of my mother who died in a plane crash on her way to Paris. It was tragic.
"So… anyway, I made plans to go shopping with Taylor tomorrow since the parties on Friday." It was really late notice considering that it was Wednesday.
"Ok honey, sure." He said sticking his nose back into his book.
"If you want to know where I am, I'm going to go swimming!" I yelled to him as I walked up the stairs. I always go swimming when I needed to think about stuff and I had a lot to think about, especially about my outfit.
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A couple minutes later, I stepped into the Jacuzzi. It felt so good and relaxing. I could just lie here all day. I almost had the perfect outfit in mind when I heard somebody calling my name. I snapped out of my trance to see my neighbor really high in the air, and then he would disappear behind the fence. Then he would jump up again and disappear. This must mean that he was on his trampoline which he just happened to be on every time I was in the pool alone.
"Hey Josh." I said in an annoying tone. Josh has a crazy obsession over me and it gets really annoying.
"Hey Nia. Isn't it crazy that I was on my trampoline right when you were in your pool?" he asked with a really fake tone.
"Ya. Amazing." I said gritting my teeth.
"So, are you going to Hannah's party?" he asked. Wait, he got invited. Hannah must be really, really nice.
"Ya. Are you?"
"Ya totally! That party is going to be the bomb!"
I walked out of the pool and grabbed a towel.
"Well I guess I'll see you later Josh."
"Ok. Bye Nia!" he said a little too enthusiastically.
When I got out of the house and into my room, I was so relieved that I got away from him. He was really nice to me but he could get super annoying.
I layed on my bed, still trying to think of an outfit when it came to me. It was perfect!!! I couldn't wait to go shopping and show Taylor what I wanted to buy!!
Well I hope you like this chapter! Tell me if I should go on by reviewing!! Make sure you all review please!!:]
