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(Rika's house)
"Rika do you want to go to a date with me?"Ryo asked blusing a shade of red that Rika never thought exist.
is he serious?OMG my dream has come true but how did this happen? has he love me all this time? Rika wondered
"umm..ok."Rika answered quite unsure cause what if it was a joke.
"really then I'll come pick you up at 7 tomorrow"Ryo said smiling. That smile melt Rika everytime she saw it. She would always daydream about it.
"ok see ya"Rika said embarrassed that she has been staring at him.
"later Rika"Ryo said kissing Rika's cheek.
OMG he did not just did that? he did this is the best day of my life
"yeah whatever"Rika said trying to hide her blush.
(later)
knock knock
it's him relax Rika act normal act like if you don't care yeah exactly Rika thought
"come in"Rika called
"Rika it's me are you ready?"Ryo asked with that smile that Rika loves so much.
"yeah"Rika answered smiling
Rika and Ryo went out to a restaurant and they had fun. After dinner Ryo kissed Rika and Rika kissed back. They decided to be a couple.Rika was the happiest girl. She thought that Ryo was going to be always with her but she was wrong.
(2 months later)
knock knock
who could that be? Rika wondered
"come in"Rika called. The door opened and Ryo was there. Immediately Rika hugged him but somehow she knew something was wrong.
"is something wrong Ryo?"Rika asked hoping he would say no.
"umm...Rika I don't know how to say this"Ryo asked a little nervous.
oh god what could be wrong? I know is something that has to do with us
"just say it"Rika said the words came out a little harsh
"Rika I want to break up"Ryo said
WHAT? no he's lying this a a joke no a dream this can't be happening he said he loves me no no NOOOOOOO
"what?Ryo you're joking right?"Rika asked but she knew he wasn't.
"no Rika I'm sorry I met someone else and she is how to say this? nicer"
"WHAT? then get out of my house"Rika said
"Rika we can still be friends right?"Ryo asked
"NO GET OUT I don't want you here"Rika yelled
"Rika don't do this.."
"SHUT UP just get out"
"fine you're the worst Rika"Ryo said slamming the door.
"get out get out get out"Rika whispered.
"Rika what's wrong? I heard you yelling"Rika's mom asked
"nothing"Rika answered in a low voice.
"honey are you sure?"
"yes"
"Rika you can tell me anything"
"I'M FINE JUST GET OUT"Rika yelled running to her room.
(night)
Rika has been crying in her room for hours. She felt weak and stupid somehow she knew this was going to happen. A week ago Ryo had been acting weird. Everytime she called him he would always said he was busy or his father would say he wasn't home yet. She had started to suspect something but she just didn't want to believe it.
"why Ryo? why? "Rika asked
"You're liar you lie Ryo you LIE"Rika said throwing a pillow.
"Rika what's wrong?"Rika's mom asked
"nothing mom I'm going to Jeri's house I'll stay there just for tonight"Rika said
Rumiko wasn't sure about letting Rika going alone to Jeri's house. When her house is about 30 minutes aways but seeing her daughter so depress and sad. She knew that Jeri was the only one that could help her somehow.
"ok Rika call me when you get there"Rumiko said
"thank you mom"Rika said
(later)
Rika was walking toward Jeri's house. The tears still didn't stop from coming so she just let them flow. She didn't even bother to wipe them away. Jeri was the only one that could help her she knew that Jeri would understand.
whistle
"who's there?"Rika asked afraid of who could be there.
"my,my what's a pretty girl doing here all by herself?"a fat tall man asked
"none of your business"Rika answered trying to soud normal but it didn't work.
"girl you shouldn't talk to me like that so let's start my name is Soma so what's your"the fat man said
"like I said none of your business"Rika said with that she started to walk away.
Before she could walk away the fat man got hold of her throat and pushhed her to the wall.
"like I said girl you shouldn't talk to me like that now you will see why" before Rika could answer Soma was beating her.
Fist he throw her to the floor then she started kicking her in the head. Just when Rika thought he was done he kicked her in the eyes. When he was done he left her there unconscious.
(Rika's house)
Rumiko was dead worry about her daughter. Rika had left 2 hours ago and when she called Jeri's house she said that Rika wasn't there. Rumiko decided that she would look for her daughter.
(outside)
Rumiko thought that she should take the path to Jeri's house just incase but what she didn't expect was Rika lying there unconscious.
"Rika wake up please"Rumiko pleaded. Rumiko took her cell phoned and dialed the emergency number.
(hospital)
Rumiko didn't know what to do. She just stood there waiting for the doctor. She didn't even know who to call. Her mother had died a year ago and Rika's friends weren't fond of her except for Jeri but it was late.
"Mrs. Nonaka?"a very good looking boy asked.
"yes?"Rumiko said
"your daughter is out of danger for now but she's unconscious"the boy said
"you mean she might not wake up?"Rumiko asked afraid of what the boy would answer.
"oh no no she will wake up maybe tomorrow but.."
"but?"
"she might not be the same"
"what do you mean?"
"your daughter was attacked badly and we suspect that something will happen to her"
"like what?"
"we're not sure but like she might lose her memory or maybe her brain will be damage"
"oh god"
"I'm really sorry and you can go see her"the doctor said
"thank you"Rumiko said walking to Rika's room.
When Rumiko entered Rika's room she wanted to cry but she couldn't. She had to be strong for her daughter. She only stood there holding her daughter's hand.
"Mrs. Nonaka do you want to call someone?"the doctor asked
"no"Rumiko whispered
Thye stood there for a few minutes. None of them talking Rumiko holding Rika's hand and the doctor watching Rika.
"she's very pretty"the doctor said looking at Rika.
"yeah aren't you a little young for being a doctor?"Rumiko asked
"yeah I'm 16 and I'm not a doctor I'm an apprentice everything I told you was what the doctor told me"teh boy answered
"why didn't he tell me?"
"the hospital is really busy"
"I see"
"I'll see you around Mrs. Nonaka and Rika"
"yeah"
(next day)
"argh"Rika said starting to wake up.
"Rika you're awake"Rumiko said hugging his daughter.
"it seems so"the apprentice said
"who are you?"Rika asked trying to open her eyes.
"I'm Kenji I'm sort of a doctor"Kenji answered
"wait I'm in the hospital?"Rika asked trying to remember what happened.
"yes Rika someone attacked while you were going to Jeri's house"Rumiko answered
Then Rika remembered everything even Ryo.
"I see"Rika said.
"don't worry honey you can go home in a few days maybe"Rumiko said
"ok"Rika said opening her eyes.
"it looks like there's nothing wrong with you maybe you'll be out tomorrow"Kenji said
"ok and mom can you turn on the lights?"Rika asked
"Rika what are you talking about it's not dark and there's sunlight"Rumiko answered a little worry.
"mom what are you talking about it's dark turn on the lights"
"Rika it's not dark"
"TURN ON THE LIGHTS"Rika yelled
"Rika stop yelling what're you talking about?"Rumiko asked
"Rumiko relax I see what's wrong with her"Kenji said
"what? is her brain damage?"Rumiko asked but what it was, it was something worst.
"no she's blind"Kenji said
Rika's eyes widened.
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