Wow this is my first piece ever on here. it just can to me one day and I just hard to get it down. Well, please review cuz i want to know what I can improve on or what people like.

Disclaimer: I don't own Rurouni Kenshin

Note for those of you who are a little new to the RK world or and a little confused, the seed is Kenshin and the white plum is Tomoe


The White Plum

Harsh winds beat the white plum

As it held onto its seed

The seed tried as it might to protect its friend

But the white plum withstood

After many days and countless nights

The wind ceased and the skies cleared

And the white plum and seed hung

Happily in the sunshine

Though the white plum was comforted in the light

The seed could not be

It knew it wasn't a plum seed

It knew it didn't really belong

But still the seed was content

For it had someone to love

And it was loved in return and overtime

The seeds wounded heart began to heal

But the sunshine did not last

And the winds blew anew but,

The storm was icy and ruthless

And they cut to the bone like daggers

The seed was desperate

For it knew its white plum could not last

In one last frantic attempt to save it

It flung itself from the branch

In the snow the white plum lay broken

Its soft skin broken and bruised

Its life fading away

The seed wept bitterly

The white plum spoke in a whisper

Live my seed live,

For you can do good in this world

Live for me, and I will be with you

The seed lived, though barely

It wandered through the desolate snow

It was marked both inside and out

By the cruelties of life and love

It found someone in need and settled

And it grew into a small tree

And although it was not one of them

Upon it grew several white plums