Chapter One
WELCOME one and all to my story here. My first try at a story, so feel free to critic (especially my grammar) anyway have fun reading and enjoy! This chapter is May's point of view.
Gary: 16 May: 15 Max: 12 Misty: 15 Brock: 20 Ash: 16 (As the story progresses I will let you know the ages of new characters.)
The Mist was thick and impossible to see through as May, Brock, Max, and Misty headed for Eterna city, but first they had to get through the forest. As we join them we find that they are lost, as usual.
"Brock where are we!" I asked freaking out because of the thick fog.
Brock replied "Well do you want the truth or the…"
"The TRUTH" I, Max, and Misty shouted.
"We are lost" Brock stated simply
May, Max, Brock, and Misty were all headed to the Battle Tournament in Eterna City to cheer on Max, not Ash. Ash and Gary had disappeared 2 years after Delia Ketchum died; her death affected everyone that knew her. Nobody was as destroyed as Ash and surprisingly Gary, but people just assumed that was because Gary was Ash's oldest friend.
I was in such deep thought that I didn't even notice that I separated from the group. I started to panic freaking out about what I should do when I screamed out "GUYS WHERE ARE YOU!" I started sprinting through the forest in the direction that I thought I came from yet what didn't know was I was going the completely polar opposite. I continued to scream for my friends to help me, until I tripped over a large root and snapped my ankle.
Well how did you like it? I know, I know boring, lame, and hard to understand. I kind of didn't make the thing it very interesting. Anyway the more you review the faster I write :)
Have a good Day.