Okay guys here is my first page of 'Stranger In The Woods'. ( AN - just so you know, every time a new paragraph starts it is a new speaker.)

"We can't get caught by the firenation or Azula."

"I know my nefew. But we have to keep hiding then."

"It's better than being handed over to Azula!"

"I know but I miss my tea."

"This is know time for tea Uncle!" Prince Zuko and his Uncle Iroh were walking in the forest. They were hiding from the firenation. Zuko and Iroh had just the day before cut off there topnots. They were now disloyal to the firenation.

-----time gap-----

Now I know how the Avatar and his friends felt." exclaimed Uncle Iroh.

"Arrrgg! All of this looks the same! I can't take it anymore!"

"Who goes there stranger!" Zuko and Iroh looked up to see a beautiful warrior girl in the trees. "Why are you here firenation scum?"

"We are not scum!" yelled Zuko angrily.

"This is Prince Zuko and I am General Iroh. We are now disloyal to the firenation. And as he said we are defiantly not scum."

"I'm sorry for saying that if you are speaking the truth. My name is Natasha."

"Well hello Miss Natasha." said Iroh "Could we stay with you for a while, until we get a new ship?"

"Uncle no!"

"Okay! But you'd better be telling the truth."

----time gap----

"Here we are!"

They were up in a huge treehouse full of kids swinging up and down the vines. Just then a tall boy walked up and said. "Hey Natasha! Who are these people? Wait they look like firenation dudes!"

"That is because they are." Natasha said in a small voice.

"They are firenation? Natasha how could you do this?"

"I-I umm."

"No! I don't care why!" he said cutting her off. "You know the rules!"

" And just what are you going to do about it? Natasha snapped.

"This." He said as he pushed her out of the tree house. Zuko and Iroh could do nothing but stand there ans watch because they weren't expecting it and he was so quick about it. She tried to keep her balance but it was no good. She fell. As she fell she screamed. She began to hit branches and such on her way down but not enough to slow her down. Once she hit a huge branch. "Ugh." She groaned. She was sure that she had heard and felt something crack. Then the branch gave way and dropped her. She hit the ground and blacked out.

"Natasha!" Zuko screamed as she fell. He rushed to the rope that they used to get down and slid down burning his hands in the process. He felt the pain but he didn't slow down because he new that Natasha would be in a lot more pain if she was even alive.

The stranger boy followed them. And so did a bunch of other boys that we in the treehouse.

"What have you done?"said Iroh

Zuko saw that she was just knocked out and not dead and figured it was okay to ask questions.

"Who are you?"

"My name is Jet and these are the Freedom Fighters.

Cliff hanger! Do you like the story better than my other one which I deleted?

This is the description of Natasha:

Age: 16 zuko is 17 in the second season and he's 17 in my story.

Hair: A dark brown with blonde streaks.

Skin: Flawless olive colored skin.

Height: About the height of Zuko.

Nation: Earth but she's a non-bender.

but she can fight very well.

Weight: 102 pounds skinny for her age.

She has a big bust and wairs a outfit identical to Katara's but it is green. Her hair is in a messy bun.