I do not own Mr. Characters I just own the plot of the story. This story will be switched from Max's to Fang's point of view.
Summary: Max is 13 years old. She lives with her new foster parent and he already has 2 daughters, Nudge and Angel. Nudge is 14 and Angel is 8. Fang, Iggy, Ari, Dylan, and Gazzy all are family friends to Max's new dad, Jeb. Every girl has a crush on either Fang or Ari, who are 13, Iggy and Gazzy are twins and they are 14 and Dylan is 13.
MAX'S POINT OF VIEW
I got off the plan. I had to fly to L.A. I was in freaking Illinois. I kept looking around to see where my new foster family was. "MAX OH MY GOD YOU ARE SOO PRETTY I CAN'T BELIEVE YOUR HERE AL-"Nudge said and Angel covered her mouth and smiled. "Sorry 'bout Nudge she talks a lot. But umm I hope you will like it with us" Angel said. I smiled at them and thought to myself they seem really nice. "Thanks Angel I hope I like it with you guys too" I said. Angel giggled and I gave her my "what are you laughing about look" "we should have all the guys come over and meet our new "sister" Nudge said acting if I wasn't there. "Ooh nice idea Nudge I'll text them and tell them to meet us over there" Angel said while getting out her phone. "Wait who are you guys talking about" I scream-said. "You're going to meet the Martinez's. They are friends with us so don't worry." Angel said. Right that second Jeb walked over "Alright let's go, Maximum I can take that for you" Jeb asked "Just Max and thanks" I muttered and he pick up my 3 bags and took them to his car. But I have to admit Jeb looks really young with his brown-blond hair with a little gray in it. Nudge was showing me a dress but I zooned out for a while but nudge's hand went behind me around Angel, who has blond hair and a tan, and Nudge were talking, Nudge has black straight hair and chocolate colored skin, "I wonder what they'll think" Angel whispered Nudge just shrugged. After about 15 minutes Jeb said "we're here" I got out after Angel and Nudge and there were five guys standing there.
Fang's point of view
I was laughing at Gazzy because Iggy just cracked an egg on Gazzy's head. I felt my phone go off "bringing Max over to my house be there and bring Iggy and Gazzy and you can bring Ari too but you guys have to be here before we get here so hurry and I couldn't forget about Dylan so bring him too!" "GUYS" I yelled over them "WHAT" Iggy said while still laughing "Angel said their new sister Maximum is coming over to their house she want us to come over and meet her oh and ARI, DYLAN" I yelled Ari's and Dylan's names and they came running down stairs yelling "WHERE IS THE FIRE" "there is no fire but we have to go over to Angel, and Nudge's to see their new sister that they told us about" "alright let's go then we got to get there before they do don't we" said Ari, who is Fang's twin, we walked outside and I was thinking about what she was going to look like and I thought I know they told me a thousand times but I know I shouldn't be thinking about their sister because I'm dating Lisa. We all got in my car and we sped down the road and we were going 100 miles an hour. We got to their house in 5 minutes and we had to wait 10 minutes before they came and then Angel and Nudge got out and so did Max. She had the pretest hair I have ever seen it is brown with blonde streaks in it. Dylan whistled at her but she just flipped him off. I kind of felt sorry for him.
Max's point of view
I heard someone whistle and I flipped whoever it was off. He had blonde hair and really dreamy blue eyes. I went Inside and smiled this place was (blanking) huge. "Wow" I said "I'm going need a map just to find the bathroom." All the guys came inside Angel pointed to the guy I flipped off earlier "this is Dylan, Dylan this is Maximum" she said "Max just Max" I muttered "glad I got to meet you Max" Dylan said and winked at me. I was so shocked that I ran into a room and close the door. Someone knocked on the door "Max, are you alright in there" said someone with a really deep voice. I opened the door a little and there he was just standing there looking concerned so I pulled him into the room with me. He had dark black hair and when I look at his eyes they were black and his hair was going over one of his eyes (sounds dream doesn't he). "I'm Fang, by the way," he said "Really your name is Fang" I said "No people just call me that" he whispered and I realized our lips weren't far apart and I leaned back so I could get a hold of things. "Oh I see" I could see why they call him that. "are you going to stay in here for the rest of the time or are you going to come out of here with me" he said and held out his hand I took it and he helped me out and I went into the room with everyone else "sorry" I said looking at the ground and then looked at Fang and he smiled at me. Someone who looked like Fang stepped forward "I'm Ari" he said quietly then stepped back. Two guys who looked a lot alike stepped forward the shorter one talked first "I'm Gazzy" he said then the other one said "And I'm Iggy" I looked at Fang and he stepped forwards "And I'm Fang" he bowed and I laughed and everyone just stared at me "what" I said "oh nothing" Angel said and I saw Angel take Nudge in the other "P-PLEASE TELL ME YOU DIDN'T INVITE LISA!" Angel yelled "I didn't I swear" Angel marched in the room we were in "Fang did you invite LISA!" "No I didn't Angel" Fang said then looked at me but I looked away and Dylan came over to me put his arm around my waist "hey Max you look great today you want to go out some time" he said and I looked at Fang and he looked extremely pissed at Dylan and came over by me "Dylan what are you doing" he yelled "I'm asking her out what do you have to say about it you have a girl-" Fang cut him off and I put 2 and 2 together and then I realized he has a girlfriend. Just as I realized that a redhead walked in in a way to short skirt and a too small shirt.
Fang's point of view
I heard Angel and Nudge talking in the other room. They were talking about Lisa. Then I saw Dylan put his arm around Max "Hey Max you look great today you want to go out some time" he said and Max looked at me and I bet I was extremely pissed at Dylan. I walked over to Max "Dylan what are you doing" I yelled "I'm asking her out what do you have to say about it you have a girl-" I cut him off and I'm pretty sure Max figured out what he was going to say then Lisa walked in with a slutty outfit. "Hey, Fang" Lisa said and I wanted to tell Max I was sorry I looked at her and she just walked out of the room. "Max where are you going" I yelled and ran after her. I could hear Angel yelling at Lisa to get her ass out but she wouldn't.
Max's point of view
"Hey, Fang" is what Lisa said and Fang looked at me like he wanted to apologize but I just walked out of the room. "Max where are you going" Fang yelled and started to run after me. I heard Angel say "get your ass out of here" I think she said it to Lisa but I didn't want to hear any more. I opened the window and sat there and waited for Fang to finally find me. But it wasn't fang who found me it was Ari. "Max, are you okay?" he said "yeah I guess I am" I said sadly. "why did you come and I thought Fang was following me" "I'm here because Angel told Fang to tell Lisa to get out and he did more than that after he got her out side he broke up with her and I thought it would be better if I told you that before he came so you would take it easier on him" I laughed at the last part and so did he. And I didn't realize what I was doing until after but I kissed Ari and when I broke apart from the kiss I saw Fag standing "Fang I-I w-we" then he just turned around and walked away. Ari was wearing a look of pure horror. "Ari I-I didn't mean for this to happen I'm so sorry" I said "Max it's my fault don't blame yourself" he said "I'd better go and find Fang so I can explain"
Fang's point of view
I was going to go after Max but angel told me to get Lisa out. "I'll go find Max" Ari said. I went to Lisa "hey, Lisa can I talk to you out side" I said. I lead her outside and I said "Lisa I'm breaking up with you" and she just ran off screaming at me and I went to go find Ari and Max. I was about to turn around a corner and I heard Ari "I'm here because Angel told Fang to tell Lisa to get out and he did more than that after he got her outside he broke up with her and I thought it would be better if I told you that before he came so u would take it easier on him" I heard Max's laugh and Ari joined in. then I thought I'd better go talk to Max. I turned the corner and I saw what I thought I would never see I saw Max and Ari kissing. I was just standing there like an idiot. Max broke off from kissing Ari. She saw me "Fang I-I w-we" and I just turned around and walked off. I could still hear Max say "Ari I-I didn't mean for this to happen I'm so sorry" and I heard Ari say" Max it's my fault don't blame yourself" he paused "I'd better go and find Fang so I can explain" I heard him he was getting closer and Max was following him. "FANG" Max yelled and she ran after me and leaped and tackled me to the ground "what" I said hiding any emotion I had on my face. She was looking for any sign of emotion but she looked disappointed. "Listen it's not that I wanted to kiss Ari but he" she paused for a second "he-he looks so much like you and I know I would never be able to actually be able to have the nerve to kiss you" she sighed I could tell she wasn't lying.