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"Good morning Naruto ." says Narutos alarm clock^ it's 7 am wake up!
Naruto gets up. He goes to the microwave^ to get some ramen. Wow^ I am almost out of ramen^ Naruto says. He sits sadly as he wears his bright orange suit.
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Naruto has orange hair and is very tan with blue eyes they sparkle and muscular. He is outgoing all the time^talking to his frends. They raelly like him^ because he is smart and ^ because he is a great singer and he can read peoples thoughts . And also he is in an emo hardcoree rock band^ called he Bleeding Narutos. He is the all band members^ no one else was outgoing to join.
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Naruto gets on the bus^ he hates riding on it. There are so many people and he says hi.
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Naruto gets to school. He can read peoples thoughts. He is eating lunch now^ and he hear's all the people's thoughts. &&theres a new gurl today&& thinks^ a boy with black hair and black eyes and emo. Wait that is sasuke! Naruto turns around becuaz he doesn't want to look at Sasuke. Naruto sits sadly. &&life sucks . && he thinks.
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Naruto goes to science class. In class they are learning about chemicals, maths. and the effects of ninjutsus. Suddenly^ Naruto hears a new thought- &&Wow!! that gurl is so kawaii (cute in Japanese) && thinks all the people in the class. Naruto looks over^coz he is bored. Suddenly^ hes not bord anymore^ he sees the most beautiful girl in the word. She has purple hair and purple eyes and pale and looks shyly.
"What is your name?" Naruto asks her ^ because hes not shy
"I am H-h-h-h—hhh-hhina—a—tt-a"" says Hinata..
I will update soon!
--Authors note: I hope you liked it! This was my first fanfic I wrote. Please review but I do nut like flames! Critiche is welcome.