Telling Charlie

This is my first fanfic...so please let me know how I do!

-Charlie POV-

I…What? What did they say? What is she trying to show me? The boy keeps babbling about love and marriage and looking at Bella all I see is Renee. A woman in a beautiful dress 19 years ago and me in a shabby hand-me-down tux. "Ch-Dad?" Is she really doing this?

- Bella POV-

OK…I told him. Here comes the yelling. Thank God the gun is by the door. Wait…he's not yelling? All I see is confusion and hurt and…I don't know what it is. Wait…how long has Edward been talking and why did he stop. She looks to Edward and all she sees is her favorite crooked smile and she knows that whatever her father is thinking definitely doesn't involve a gun…or a no!

-Edward POV-

"Chief Swan, I love your daughter more than words could ever describe and I would be more than privileged to marry Bella and do all that is in my power to make her the happiest woman ali …" I should stop there, I can't promise alive, but wait, he's not listening to me. Renee? Why is he picturing Renee…oh…in her wedding dress. Wow she looks lovely and he doesn't look to bad either. Edward couldn't control the smile on his face knowing this memory may not mean yes, but it definitely doesn't mean no, and turns to his beautiful fiancé.

-General POV-

Charlie shakes away his memory and gives a big sigh, "When and Where?" Bella jumped into her father's arm and Charlie forced back the tears he felt welling up. Edward replied, "August 13th and I presume Alice will have more details on the where. I relay your question for you," adding a big smile at the end. After Bella released Charlie he soon fled to the living room mumbling about baseball and making sense in life. Bella escorted Edward to the door with a smile and raced up the stairs to meet her fiancé, only tripping twice on the way up.

Author's Note: This is my first fanfic so if anyone could please review and point out my good and bad qualities I would greatly appreciate it. I'm definitely a one-shot writer but if anyone wants to run with it...just ask me first.