A/N: The following charactors do NOT belong to me. They are Stephenie Meyers.
Cold, wet, grey afternoon. Empty house, for the 'kids' were out hunting, and the first son was off with the human girlfriend. The previous night was spent alone, for her husband's long shift at the hospital. Loneliness starting to make its way to be her company. And it would be, until eight o'clock.
Went upstairs to their bedroom. Clean sheets of paper lay on the desk with a black pen nearby. She did not feel like writing now, went downstairs again. The cozy, white leather couch was, in fact, inviting. Flipped through the channels really fast, nothing could capture her attention.
Suddenly a sound from the drive-way pulled her out of her daydream. The silent engine of the Mercedes was turned off. He was home. A tiny smile was formed on her lips. The sound of the key unlocking the door, and chasing away the loneliness, was heard. His sweet scent was all around her. Oh yes, fresh lemon and coconut. His eyes were sparkling as he looked at her. His lips, turned into the most beautiful, wide smile. He was hers.
That very thought made her smile grow.
'You're early.' Anyone could hear the smile on her voice.
'There was nothing left to do there, and I was glad to come home and spend sometime with my wife.' The reply sounded as happy as hers.
She closed her eyes. 'Good.' She felt his body come closer to a tight embrace. A small kiss on her forehead.
They sat on the couch again. His arm around her tiny –next to his- body. One of the hands, tenderly stroking her hair. Her hands were on him too. And so she started to flip rapidly through the channels again. Not that it actually caught her attention this time. But it didn't matter. He was here now.
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A/N: Hey, so this idea popped into my head during my redaction class today. My teacher was explaining how should a narrative be done and he gave us an example similar to this one. With all the tiny paragraphs which gives the idea of 'movement'. So here is my redaction. Tell me what you think. ;D
By the way, I tried my first 2 'vestibulares' and I acctually did real good (better than I expected) and results come out on Thursdey. Wish me luck! I promise I'll post new 'CP' and 'ROTTF' stuff soon enough. Anyways, I created my own twitter account and it is CaamiRocha, so if you wanna follow me and give me ideas or just tell me what you're doing right now (or know what I am doing xP) feel free.
A review would make me happy ;D
Love,Cami