Mark of Athena my prediction
It's me. Thinking of doing a prediction for mark of Athena. I read other ones and just wanted to share my opinion. May or may not be a multi chapter fic. Depends on if people like this. Well, here goes nothing!
Chapter 1- Percy
I walked with Hazel and Frank to the field of Mars. It looked like Reyna was givin orders to attack. I ran up to her, asking what the Hades did she think she was doing. Reyna stiffened and said, "Percy, these,- these graeci are coming down in a warship. If we have to fight, we will." I replied, " i dont care if they come in a warship or an airplane, they are my family. Plus, Jason's on that boat. Are you sure you want to risk peircing an arrow into his skin?" Reyna finally gave up. She said that they would not attack unless a Greek made the first move.
Finally, the warship settled on the field if Mars. The dude from the video, Leo Valdez, walked out of the boat saying, "what is wrong with you people? No, καλοσήρθατε?" Reyna nudged me. "uh, what does that mean?" i sighed. "it means no welcome." Reyna just nodded. Leo came over to me. He said, "So you are the Savior of Olympus. DUDE, YOU ROCK!" I thanked him, but then asked where Annabeth was. He said, "Oh, she stayed behind at Camp Half Blood. Giant dudes were attacking them."
My heart sank. That one week that I have been awake I have only been thinking about Annabeth. And know she decided not to come. As if he was reading my thoughts, Leo said, "But she wanted to come. It's just that Camp needed her...". A girl was the next person to get off the ship. She had choppy, brown, uneven hair. She had multicolored eyes, leading me to believe that she was a daughter of Aphrodite. She walked up to me, asking me if I remembered everything. I told her I did, but I didn't know who she was. She laughed and said, "Oh, no you shouldn't remember me. I came to camp after you left. Annabeth told me to tell you that if you remembered, send her an Iris message immediately." I sighed. All of a sudden, I heard gasps and murmers. Then Gwen shouted, "Jason's back!" Octavian looked pissed. He probably was hoping that us Greeks killed Jason so he could declare war on us. Reyna ran up to Jason and kissed him full on the lips. The Aphrodite girl, Piper, looked mad.
After Jason emerged from the ship, all my old friends came out. I was happy to see every single one of them. Travis Stoll, Conner Stoll, Katie Gardener, Chris, Grover, hey, I was even happy to see Clarisse. When she came up to me, the first thing out of her mouth was, "Prissy, you look ridiculous." I was confused for a moment, but then I remembered that I was wearing a toga. I cursed in ancient Greek. Thalia came up to me and said, "Kelp Head, watch your language." "Shut it Pinecone Face, it's not like you do it any better." Jason said, "Why are you calling my sister Pinecone Face? Is that like an insult or something?" I laughed. "Thals, you didn't tell Jason about your tree experiance? And also, I'm Percy." Jason laughed. "Really? I couldn't figure that out myself." I knew that he definately was Thalia's half sister, they had the same saracastic sense if humor. Then, I realized he said sister. Not half sister, but full sister. I asked them what they meant about that. Thalia laughed and said, "Both of our fathers are Zeus, but we also have the same mother, so we're like, legit siblings." I said, "Thals, you never told anyone about him..." Thalia responded by saying, "When we were little, Hera/Juno took him. He's the reason I stuck around at home longer." I noticed that she didn't like talking about this subject, so I changed it. "So, Thalia, what's camp been like?" Jason answered for her, saying, "Dude, everyone's been looking for you. She's gone crazy..." Right then, I knew I had to get Annabeth to know that I remembered...
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Annabeth POV
I tried not to cry as the Argo 2 sailed off into the sky. I knew I had to stay behind to protect the camp; it was in danger. But I don't know why mosters keep on attacking. I mean, the Golden Fleece is there and Peleus (A/N is that the name of the dragon that guards the fleece?) is protecting it, so I don't know why the borders are failing. But I also stayed at Camp for another reason. If Percy didn't remember me and Hera made him get another girlfriend, I don't know what I'll do. We went on so many quests together, and all of that, just wiped away? No. I can't do that. I remember Sally Jackson, Percy's mom, said that Percy sent her a voice mail saying that he was on a quest and fine, but he didn't mention Camp Half Blood or any of his other friends. I just hope he remembers me.
A/N I don't know if I should make this a multi chapter or if I should just end it here. Please send me reviews. This is my first fic and I really want to know if I did well. Also, if you have something bad to say, I accept constructive critisism, but please, no flames. Flamers will be blocked. Thanks for reading!