This is about when loren and Melissa are at eddies concert trying to break in- but things are different they may not be the same as they we're in the series's
I hope you like it ,
no copier right intended .

chapter 1

Loren's pov
"I can't believe we're trying to break in. I said trying to push Melissa up.
"Trust me Lo everything is gonna be fine, we're getting into that concert one way or another"
I let out a sign
"Got it yet ?"
"No, nearly just a little bit higher"
I pushed her higher but in the process of doing that the backstage door opened, Mel turned round to fast and fell, luckily she landed safely.
I stood there in shock looking at a talk man with a suit on, he was on the phone talking to someone. He looked familiar
"Mel" i whispered
"We should run" i said nervously
"No Lo, I've got an idea" Mel looked at me with her idea face and walked to the man in the suit.
"Mel?!" I said
She ignored me and carried on walking, she finally stopped and made a look at me to follow, i soughed and walked next to her not know what will happen.
"Umm hello ?" I said quietly
The man look at me, and hung the phone up without a goodbye.
"Can i help you ?" He said curiously
"Your jake Madison right ? Eddies manager" Mel said smiling
"Yes, and who are you two" jake coughed
"We are Mega Fans of Eddie Duran and we got sold fake tickets and we would really like to see his concert, its my friends birthday today and we really wanted to go" she said

"By the looks of what your guys were doing,i think I'm gonna call security if you too don't leave now " jake said firmly
My hands were shaking of the chance of getting kicked out, Eddie was my idol, he was the one to help me survive when my dad left, his music inspired me. I couldn't let jake kick me and Mel out. Before Mel could respond i spoke.
"Jak- i mean , Eddie is my idol and he helped me through a lot of hard times in my life, me and my best friend Mel are truly his #1 fans and we wouldn't want to miss his concert for the world, I'm begging you from the bottom of our heart to let us in just to enjoy his music and feel alive " i said breathless.

Jake sighed "Fine, you girls can have v.i.p.s passes just this once just because your his #1 fans" Me and Mel smiled and screamed in joy, Jake sighed and let us in the door to the concert.
This was gonna be the best day of my life.


Eddies pov

Breath, just breath
'Knock, knock'
"Jake you know i don't want to be disturbed while I'm getting ready for a sh-"
"Surprise"
I turned around and saw pops.
"Poppa max is in the house" looking at his tired face, i brought him into embrace
"Just to see my favorite son" i smiled
"How you been, how is the club getting on ?"
"Ive been good, the club has really kept me busy so i haven't really had time to have free time" he laughed
"Well thats something too do in the day, I'm proud of you pops, mom would of been too" he smiled weakly and moved to the door
"I better go i know you need to prepare for your concert"
I gave him one last hug and opened the door
"Good luck" i nodded
"Thanks pops, see you soon" he walked out the door to the exit.
I miss mom, she was always there to help me prepare for a show, and now shes in a better place, a tear trickled down my cheek as i thought of her.
Keep it together Eddie.

I walked out the door, and onto the stage,
"This is for you mom, always"
"Hello everyone, how are you?, are you ready to start this concert" i gave my charming smile to the people in the crowd, everyone is screaming my name, this is it.
"Well ill take that as a yes"
*intro for music starts playing*
'Breath it in,'


Lorens pov

"Coming through
V to I to the P's , V. , move " Melissa said whist dragging me through the crowd.
We finally got to first row, Melissa grabbed her phone from her clutch and started recording.
"Hello, lovely viewers we are at Eddie's Duran concert tonight ! Wooooo ,V.i.p's , say hi Lo"
"Hi everyone, this is gonna be one of the best nights of my life !"
"Omg lo, there he is" Melissa pointed to the one and only Eddie Duran, i was about to faint but u kept it steady, i have to admit his hotter in person.
"Hello everyone, how are you?, are you ready to start this concert" he gave a charming smile to the everyone in the crowd, everyone is screaming his name, so am i now.
"Well ill take that as a yes"

*music intro begins for something in the air*

'Breathe it in, can you feel it in your soul?
Under your skin, just let it take control

Tonight is gonna be our night
The beating rhythm, feel the energy inside
I know your body wants to explode
Your feet just wanna go
We're gonna feel alive
There's something in the air, yeah!
Yeah we're gonna have a good time
There's something in the air, yeah!
Yeah we're gonna have a good time
Whoa oh whoa oh, whoa oh whoa oh
Whoa oh whoa oh, whoa oh whoa oh

It's all around
Go on let your mind escape
So free it out
There's nothing in our way

Tonight is gonna be our night
The beating rhythm, feel the energy inside
I know your body wants to explode
Your feet just wanna go
We're gonna feel alive
There's something in the air, yeah!
Yeah we're gonna have a good time [x4]
Whoa oh whoa oh [x4]
I stuck out my hand out to Eddie as he went to the side of the stage, it didn't seem like he was gonna come close enough to touch anybody's hand, i was about to pull mine back but he came closer to the edge, i looked deep into his brown eyes sinking into them. Then out of surprise he took me hand.


Eddies pov

I was just about to walk back to the mic but i notice a girl, Curled hair, hazel eyes, beautiful smile i got lost in her beauty for a moment and the next thing i knew i was holding her hand serenading her.
you feel it? [x4]
There's something in the air, yeah!
Yeah we're gonna have a good time [x4]
Whoa oh woah
I looked at her one more time and let go of her hand,
I did a couple more songs after that, said my thank you's and goodbye's and walked off the stage. i need to find that girl before she leave the concert, i just don't know there's just something about her.

i hope you guys enjoy that i will update A.S.A.P promise, leave reviews and tell me what you think

becky x