Black Raven
Black Raven, Black Raven, how could you? Use your body as Sin. To fall in love with a human and use your body to please. Black Raven was it worth it? To fall in love once, didn't tell you to stay away. You Sin! You Sin! A body of the pleaser! No Pure Magic, just holy. Your mate, little Black Raven, protects you and cares. When you last expect it he saves you. Roy is your fire bird, dieing but coming back. Why? Why, little Black Raven did you not just allow us to keep you safe. We could have been your fire bird, lighting bird, holy bird, water bird, and air. And now we can not save you are little Black bird.
Kagome stood staring at a empty pond with a little koi swimming in circles." Why save me?,"She asked empty eyes staring into the pond." They left me for dead,"She whispered,"They wanted me dead". Tears warmed there way to her eyes. She didn't seem to notice as she watched the little fish swimming to find its' mate that had sunken to the bottom with a new fish magically appearing."He did not notice me,"She whispered seeing the new black koi swimming toward the white silvery poked at it before it chased the smaller fish." Black fish, sliver fish," The words dripped from her mouth like the tears falling slowly over her face.
Its' hard right little Black raven? You keep your mind from something else running from the truth and when it gets you it gets you hard. You saved them they betrayed we told you before it happened and you didn't listen...
"Its' hard to trust,"She whispered, the Silver fish stopped chasing and it seemed to nuzzle the other smaller black fish."Butt, Unlike my fates. I won't let you ruin yours!,"Kagome snatched the small black fish out of the pond confusing the silver one."Sorry, little one,"Kagome muttered to the flopping fish before sliding it into a another pond a foot from her.
Life if full of unanswered questions
Um, review please. This my first story and well, I wanted to know if it was good. My dad says they are horrible but, everybody else say their great. and well, I'm confused. Just review