First Fic ever, tell me if it suck



INTO THE HAZE

"Twenty seconds till landing!!"The pilots voice boomed over the com. The drop ship sped towards the landing zone as the marines nervously chatted."Pentatrating the Covenant defenses won't be easy"Cortana said" I'm aware of that Cortana." The Master Chief replied. The ship started to

descend to the landing zone as the marines ran into the steamy jungle. They all knelt down behind a boulder as the Master Chief explained the mission to them."Banderas and Trimboli will go around the left, Vasques and Duke will sneak around behind the facility, Anderson and Evans will go to the right, Addison and I will go straight. McCoy and McDowell will stand guard." He explained to them.

As the Master Chief and Addison moved past the bushes up to the structure, they heard an Elite scream something in its own language, then they heard a roughly 5 shots from its plasma rifle. Addison fell dead; the hole in the side of his head began to pour blood. He heard the Elite say something along the lines of "Wart wart wart, rocsma douche!!"

Not knowing what the alien had said, all he could do was pray that he had not warned the others of there presence. The master chief slid the silencer onto the barrel of his sniper rifle. He then laid flat, against a rock to his left, and a large tree to his right, making it nearly impossible to see him. He spotted a Jackal lazily yawning, it's energy shield not turned on.

The Chief then got the Covenant in is cross hairs. He slowly squeezed the trigger, sending an unheard bullet in-between the aliens' eyes. Blood exploded from the back of its head as it fell to the ground with a slight clunking noise. A grunt saw the Jackal fall and ran to a gun turret. It climbed into it, and then searched for the gunman responsible for the Jackals demise. The master chief raised the rifle until the cross hairs were on the Grunts chest. He pulled the trigger. A second later, a very dead grunt slid out of the turret, blood covering the seat the grunts back was on a few seconds ago.

The master chief then hooked the sniper to a hook on a waist belt, and drew a silenced machine pistol. He silently crept up the slope nearing the flat platform that was the entrance to the covenants weapons research facility. He leapt behind the gun turret that moments ago he shot at. He peeked over it, seeing the Elite that had wasted his partner. He slowly raised the gun at the beasts' center chest. He pulled the trigger and held it for a few seconds as silent shots burst into its chest as it jerked back then flew to the ground. Seconds later, a huge pool of purple blood formed around the dead creature.

He looked around for any more covenant that might be there. He was shocked, as he would've expected them to have a greater security presence. He walked up to the door, wich ironically at the other side a jackal was about to open at the exact same moment. They pressed the open button at exactly the same second. The door opened, and they were both surprised to see the other. They stared at each other for a few seconds, then the jackal reached for his energy pistol, which he un-conveniently had in its holster. But the Chief was faster, and with a silent shot he logged a bullet into the Jackals forehead, causing blood to erupt from the back of it's head, which was no longer there. It shot a couple of times as it fell to the ground.

The master chief stepped past it, making a slight splash as he stepped into the large puddle of blood t hat was now surrounding the jackals head.





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