This is the first chapter of my very first Rave fanfic! Hope you like it!
DOZO, MINA-SAN!
50 years ago..........
There was a force of darkness and they used the dark bring. A girl named Resha Valentine created the Holy bring in order to defeat such evilness. But Resha died. Then an army soldier named Shiva handled the Holy bring. He then called it Rave. After he defeat the mother dark bring Sinclair, there was a huge explosion called the overdrive that destroyed 10% of the world. After 50 years Rave has again been looking for the next rave master................
Chapter 1
The story starts with a girl that becomes a friend and they defeat Demon card
It will have a changing first person thing so it might be a bit confusing!
ELIE
We're in the middle of the desert. We were all thirsty. Musica was sleeping while Haru was staring at nowhere. Let was as usual meditating. Plue was eating while Griff was driving. Yup, everything seemed normal until I felt that my head started to hurt. It started to hurt every time we moved forward. I didn't mind it for a while I until I felt that my brain was about to explode. Then I saw an image of someone. I first thought that it was just a mirage but as the image came closer and closer the image became a she. She came nearer and nearer. My headache was getting worse and worse. Then she said, "You are Second Rave Master, Haru Glory right?" Then I fainted.
Haru Glory
ELIE fainted. Could this person be a demon card? No. I will not allow her to defeat me. I must defeat her. Wait. What is she doing the weird hand movements. Suddenly the whole area began to turn to ice. Let, Musica and the others were stuck. I guess its up to me again. I have to fight her know
"Blue Crimson!" "oh, no" what the?! Ice for a shield what kind of person is she? "Silifion" shoot! Rave has been trapped in ice.
Homlio Musica
It was unbelievable. Haru was immediately beaten. But know Haru will never be beaten that easily. I wish I could help him out but I can't. I'm trapped in this ice and so is every on else. What's this? Haru used Loonslave. Yes he was able to evade some attacks but still some hit him. Haru then asked her name then she removed her coat.
Akira Blueruby
"Akira Blueruby" I replied as soon as removed my coat "Are you a demon card?" the Rave master said "Of course not" I replied, "I'm no demon card"
I stretched out my left hand and out went my ice weapon. I know I will defeat. Yes I will defeat him know matter what. I attacked. He evaded my blows and finally I was able to only a few inches from his throat.
Let
Haru lost for sure. I guess he is a goner. I want to help him out but I can't move the ice won't melt. Not even a single drop of water melted. Musica was trying to set himself free. Wait ELIE had a headache right? Maybe this Akira Blueruby is Rave related. Could she be? I don't know, but I just have to find out.
"You must have some connection with Rave"
"As a matter of fact yes. I'm looking for the rave of healing.
Do you have it Glory?" she said
Haru
"The Rave of healing? I don't have it! What do you want from it?" I said.
Well I didn't care if my life depended on it even though I still don't have it. I would never give it to the Oracion Seis, never! Without me noticing it I actually said I would never give it to Oracion Seis.
"Who says the Rave of healing is for them. I need it to save someone," she shouted. "And that someone would be Lucia Rareglove?!" I shouted. "Well I guess I just wasted my time here and I won't be able to give you this." She then said, "I guess I should go goodbye."
Musica
The ice suddenly disappeared. What was that woman about to give to Haru? Well whatever it is I must find out.
"Hey, wait Akira Blueruby" I ran towards her "What are you going to give to Haru?" I asked. "It's nothing really she then replied
She started walking but I grabbed her arm. She tossed me but I manage to land on my feet. I turned my silver into a spear and I tried to attack her. Finally, I was able to punch her. Then she stood up looking quite unaffected. I was pretty amazed; I never encountered a girl like her!
Akira
"You seem quite of a worthy of having a battle with me" I said.
Then I took out a Rave in my pocket and threw it to him. Then I continued walking. Then suddenly I saw a bright light. I knew the Rave Master used the stone, the Rave of Increasing abilities. I looked behind me and Haru bowed. I went on walking. Not long after that, I heard Glory calling my name.
"Aki, would you like to join us in search for the other Raves!" Haru Glory shouted
I stopped for a while to think about it. Then
"Alright!" I shouted back and came towards them.
Let
Aki Blueruby a new friend and a very interesting one indeed, she looked like Julia mixed with a little bit of ELIE. For short she was pretty...............well for me.
Haru Glory
ELIE seems to be coming around now. Aki well seems to be very happy. She looked Cute with her long braided brown hair and blue skirt with brown boots.
Musica
Akira Blueruby, um- a brat, a brat and a brat. She's very um- well...........conceited, cute JUST CUTE very childish and oh yes has a bottomless pit in her stomach
Aki
I just met new people, Homlio Musica the Silver Claimer(A baka) , Haru Glory the Rave master(Strong and I don't know), Let the dragon man(powerful but VERY snobbish), Plue the Guardian of Rave(not just cute but CCCUUUTTTEEE!!!!), Griff the weird blue thing that I don't know what he is(HENTAI!), and of course ELIE the girl that has Ethelion(Nice friend!).
ELIE
Finally I regained consciousness. Well Aki was great. It was even happier since Aki and Musica usually fight.
"That my sandwich! You little BRAT!" "Who you calling brat, you idiot!"
"Idiot!"
"Brat!"
TO BE CONTINUED
Hope you like it guys!
50 years ago..........
There was a force of darkness and they used the dark bring. A girl named Resha Valentine created the Holy bring in order to defeat such evilness. But Resha died. Then an army soldier named Shiva handled the Holy bring. He then called it Rave. After he defeat the mother dark bring Sinclair, there was a huge explosion called the overdrive that destroyed 10% of the world. After 50 years Rave has again been looking for the next rave master................
Chapter 1
The story starts with a girl that becomes a friend and they defeat Demon card
It will have a changing first person thing so it might be a bit confusing!
ELIE
We're in the middle of the desert. We were all thirsty. Musica was sleeping while Haru was staring at nowhere. Let was as usual meditating. Plue was eating while Griff was driving. Yup, everything seemed normal until I felt that my head started to hurt. It started to hurt every time we moved forward. I didn't mind it for a while I until I felt that my brain was about to explode. Then I saw an image of someone. I first thought that it was just a mirage but as the image came closer and closer the image became a she. She came nearer and nearer. My headache was getting worse and worse. Then she said, "You are Second Rave Master, Haru Glory right?" Then I fainted.
Haru Glory
ELIE fainted. Could this person be a demon card? No. I will not allow her to defeat me. I must defeat her. Wait. What is she doing the weird hand movements. Suddenly the whole area began to turn to ice. Let, Musica and the others were stuck. I guess its up to me again. I have to fight her know
"Blue Crimson!" "oh, no" what the?! Ice for a shield what kind of person is she? "Silifion" shoot! Rave has been trapped in ice.
Homlio Musica
It was unbelievable. Haru was immediately beaten. But know Haru will never be beaten that easily. I wish I could help him out but I can't. I'm trapped in this ice and so is every on else. What's this? Haru used Loonslave. Yes he was able to evade some attacks but still some hit him. Haru then asked her name then she removed her coat.
Akira Blueruby
"Akira Blueruby" I replied as soon as removed my coat "Are you a demon card?" the Rave master said "Of course not" I replied, "I'm no demon card"
I stretched out my left hand and out went my ice weapon. I know I will defeat. Yes I will defeat him know matter what. I attacked. He evaded my blows and finally I was able to only a few inches from his throat.
Let
Haru lost for sure. I guess he is a goner. I want to help him out but I can't move the ice won't melt. Not even a single drop of water melted. Musica was trying to set himself free. Wait ELIE had a headache right? Maybe this Akira Blueruby is Rave related. Could she be? I don't know, but I just have to find out.
"You must have some connection with Rave"
"As a matter of fact yes. I'm looking for the rave of healing.
Do you have it Glory?" she said
Haru
"The Rave of healing? I don't have it! What do you want from it?" I said.
Well I didn't care if my life depended on it even though I still don't have it. I would never give it to the Oracion Seis, never! Without me noticing it I actually said I would never give it to Oracion Seis.
"Who says the Rave of healing is for them. I need it to save someone," she shouted. "And that someone would be Lucia Rareglove?!" I shouted. "Well I guess I just wasted my time here and I won't be able to give you this." She then said, "I guess I should go goodbye."
Musica
The ice suddenly disappeared. What was that woman about to give to Haru? Well whatever it is I must find out.
"Hey, wait Akira Blueruby" I ran towards her "What are you going to give to Haru?" I asked. "It's nothing really she then replied
She started walking but I grabbed her arm. She tossed me but I manage to land on my feet. I turned my silver into a spear and I tried to attack her. Finally, I was able to punch her. Then she stood up looking quite unaffected. I was pretty amazed; I never encountered a girl like her!
Akira
"You seem quite of a worthy of having a battle with me" I said.
Then I took out a Rave in my pocket and threw it to him. Then I continued walking. Then suddenly I saw a bright light. I knew the Rave Master used the stone, the Rave of Increasing abilities. I looked behind me and Haru bowed. I went on walking. Not long after that, I heard Glory calling my name.
"Aki, would you like to join us in search for the other Raves!" Haru Glory shouted
I stopped for a while to think about it. Then
"Alright!" I shouted back and came towards them.
Let
Aki Blueruby a new friend and a very interesting one indeed, she looked like Julia mixed with a little bit of ELIE. For short she was pretty...............well for me.
Haru Glory
ELIE seems to be coming around now. Aki well seems to be very happy. She looked Cute with her long braided brown hair and blue skirt with brown boots.
Musica
Akira Blueruby, um- a brat, a brat and a brat. She's very um- well...........conceited, cute JUST CUTE very childish and oh yes has a bottomless pit in her stomach
Aki
I just met new people, Homlio Musica the Silver Claimer(A baka) , Haru Glory the Rave master(Strong and I don't know), Let the dragon man(powerful but VERY snobbish), Plue the Guardian of Rave(not just cute but CCCUUUTTTEEE!!!!), Griff the weird blue thing that I don't know what he is(HENTAI!), and of course ELIE the girl that has Ethelion(Nice friend!).
ELIE
Finally I regained consciousness. Well Aki was great. It was even happier since Aki and Musica usually fight.
"That my sandwich! You little BRAT!" "Who you calling brat, you idiot!"
"Idiot!"
"Brat!"
TO BE CONTINUED
Hope you like it guys!