Hello and thank you for giving my story a chance. I will be collaborating my chapters in a half-journal/ half-narrative sort of way. So that you get the characters view first hand, and also a setting and the feelings of other characters are painted by putting it in third person text as well.
This story will be seen half through the eyes of children of some of our favourite characters such as the Potters, the Weasleys and many of their friend's children such as Lavender and Seamus's daughters. Dennis Creevy's children, Katie bell's and Lavendar and Neville's children all have entries and parts in the story.
So please, enjoy my unique stile of writing and remember... I LOVE RECIEVING REVIEWS! It keeps me updating...
Chapter 1: Lily's Diary
On this very day, fifteen years ago a prophecy was written.
On this very day, fifteen years ago, the fate of the Wizarding and Muggle worlds alike was decided.
On this very day, fifteen years ago… I was born.
Ha ha, I'm only kidding, I just wanted to see your reaction.
Hello, I'm Lily Nymphadora Potter.
Before you ask; yes I am the daughter of Harry James Potter; The Boy Who Lived. Or as they say when they've all had one two many Fire Whiskeys; The Boy Who Kicked Voldemort's A.
Who's they?
They are everyone.
Today I'm fifteen.
WHOO!
I got loads of stuff for my birthday.
The most surprising would have to be this diary.
I got it from Precious.
Alright, her name's not Precious… Not really, it's Rose.
Rose Weasley…
Yes, another Weasley…
There are quite a few.
Just counting children there are nine.
Anyway, I told Precious I'd use it, so whilst she's here for the Christmas holidays, I'll just scribble random things in it…
Well, my birthday is on the eighteenth of December. I don't really like it being so near to Christmas though. But I'm not all for attention seeking so I guess it isn't that bad.
I got quite a bit for my birthday/ Christmas.
From Mum and Dad I got a new broom and Jenifred, an owl. About time too! James and Albus got one on their fourteenth birthday. Mum and Dad said I wasn't responsible enough. It's Christmas in fourth year and I only just get one now. But that's just because of last year's incident.
I'm wearing a big woollen, itchy turtleneck jumper that's head hole is too small. It was knitted by Grandma Weasley, which I'm sure I'm going to 'Incendio' as soon as possible.
I got a miniature dragon and a "gorgeez" doll from Uncle Bill and Madam Fleur.
She insists I call her that, I swear it!
Victorie got me a perfume kit, which Teddy had replaced for Weasley Ponkee Perfume, but I didn't realise it until I'd tried it, and had everyone reaching.
I received a few trinkets from Uncle Charlie and Aunt Adoral.
I got a MASSIVE supply of Weasley Wizard Wheezes stock from Uncle George and Teddy.
Uncle Percy brought me a (get this!) Hogwarts Rules and Regulations book… I'm sorry I like having fun! Sheesh!
From Aunt Hermione and Uncle Ron I got a few school supplies and an organiser ("organization is the key to success!" Or so Aunt Hermione says) Uncle Ron says that the key to success, is actually, a time turner, but I didn't get to hear the rest of the story as Aunt Hermione dragged him away.
From Neville and Luna I got a necklace that is supposed to propel Knargals and a Remembaral (I think Professor Longbottom could use it more than me!).
Hugo got me a voucher for Honeydukes.
Albus got me a very interesting book about… Well, I didn't even bother. I probably wouldn't be able to pronounce the title anyway.
"It's very informative Lil!" Albus told me.
But I just told him: "I'm sure it is Alby…" Just to keep him happy. The book now sits in my top draw, gathering dust.
I'm missing someone….
Oh yes… the other brother.
From dear, sweet James I got… a few minutes of peace.
Then a kick in the shin and Fleur's doll thrown at my head.
Like I wanted the stupid doll anyway!
"James you turd! Why are you such a loser?" I ran around the house after James but eventually retreated, he was too fast.
"James, you're nearly seventeen, shouldn't you be beginning to grow up?" Mum stomped her foot, which we all know means she's serious.
"Don't stress mum, I'm just having fun." James is such a suck up when he wants to be!
Well, that's it for now…
Nice knowing you Diary! I hope Precious is happy now!
Lily Potter
Lily shoved the diary in the drawer and took a shower, ready for bed. When she got back she found James sitting on her bed, reading it.
"Do you really see me as a suck up Little Lily?"
"Give it back!" Lily shouted, pouncing for the diary.
"Not until you take it back… Infact I want you to repeat after me! James, you are not a suck up. You are the coolest, wickedest, best brother and hottest guy in all of the United Kingdom!"
"Oh sod off you git!"
"Let's see shall we?" James opened the diary to a random page, which happened to be just like the ones after the first… blank.
"You did what with Keegan Wood?"
Lily stoped jumping and stood still. "Don't… you… dare."
"Mum! Guess what Lily just confessed to me, no forcing or black mail was included!" Lily wasn't stupid enough to think that her mother would mind, nor listen to anything James said, but Precious… Lily had a feeling that she had a "thing" for the prat.
"James, really, what do you want?"
"I want you to repeat after me. James, you are not stuck up-"
"If I do, you give back the diary ok?"
"Alright. After me: James, you are not a suck up. You are the coolest, wickedest brother and hottest guy in all of the United Kingdom…"
"James, you are not a suck up. You are the coolest, wickedest brother and hottest guy in all of the United Kingdom."
"You forgot bestest."
"Bestest isn't even a word!"
"You FORGOT bestest."
"Fine… and bestest."
James threw the book at his sister's head and bolted from the room.
"That little git." Lily muttered to herself, hoping he would fall down the last step and fall on his face.
Well, I hope you loved it! I'm actually looking for a Beta reader at the moment so if anyone knows of someone... let me know!!
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Sarah xx
