Hi, thanks for the nice welcome...I will delete that note as it is against ff rules. This is my first story on ff. Read and tell me what improvements can I do..or any suggestions of yrs..r welcomed.
Now the story.
He was becoming more and more restless with time, breathing heavenly, sweating..
Abhijeet : pointing gun towards tarika
Tarika : Abhijeet tum yeh kya kr rahe ho ?
Abhijeet : gunshot and she fell down.
Abhijeet woke up with jerk and screamed tarikaaaa...
Daya came to his room after listening to his scream.
Daya : abhi, ( he gave him water, abhiijeet drank it in one go)
Abhijeet : daya..tarika...main..maine usse goli..
Abhijeet hugged daya tightly.
Daya : shaant ho jao abhi, woh bas ek bura sapna tha..
Abhijeet : tarika zinda hai, aur aaj toh maine khud dekha hai usse, meri aankhen dhoka nahi kha sakti , woh tarika he thi..tarika he thi.
Daya : abhijeet tum jaante ho na woh mar chuki hai !
Abhijeet : nahi daya, zinda hai tarika ...dekhna ek din wapas aayegi..aana hoga usse..mere leye...aayegi woh daya.
Daya : abhijeet tum shaant ho so jao, hum subha baat karenge
Abhijeet : par..
Daya : par war kuch nahi abhi tum so jao ( he putted hands on his eyes to make him quiet and relax..and started rufling his hair)
After sometime abhijeet went to sleep, daya also went to his room.
Daya : kitni mushqil se abhijeet fhir se normal hua tha aur aaj fhir, aaj itne dino baad woh kaise aa sakti hai, mere sammne woh...
Par abhi ko bharosa hai ki woh zinda woh, abhi bhi pura bharosa hai..par mare hue log wapas nahi aate, sab kuch theek ho gaya tha..lekin aaj fhir!...
Toh kaise lagi..tell me through yr reviews.