hey! this is my first story, ever! please let me know what you think, good or bad, its all good to me! not a huge fan of jacob (much prefer edward/bella or alice/jasper!) but this idea came to me and i thought it would be interesting to see what would happen if jacob became a vamp! im working on the rest of the story at the moment so should have the next chapters up soon, but would like to know if any of you guys like the idea so far and if i should continue!! thanks! :)!

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'we've been out for ages!' renesmee said as she pulled Jacob's chest closer to her. they had been sat at the roots of a giant red oak in the forest that surrounded forks, and had watched the sun move from east to west and were now sitting in darkness staring out into the black quite content in each others company.
'they're probably getting worried, you know what dads like!' Jacob groaned deep in his chest that came out more like a growl. he was reluctant to release his embrace around her dainty shoulders and he could sense that she didn't want him too as although she suggested they should leave she never relaxed her grip from around his waist. he ran his fingers up and down her arm making her shiver which was normally impossible when she was nestled in Jacob's warm arms.
'cold?' he asked,
'in your arms never.' she replied she was always stone cold, her vampire side but in Jacob's arms she felt normal, she loved the contrast. 'you?'
'ha' he smirked 'you know me well enough to ask that!' Jacob was never cold, she smiled.
'i like it, your heat. your my hot to my cold. never get lukewarm okay?'
'i could never be anything but hot for you' he replied. she smiled, and hugged him closer. she loved him, well and truly. she couldn't hold him any closer and yet she ached to hold him nearer, wanting to just melt into him. and what made it better, and make her love him even more, was that she knew he loved her just as much. he wanted to stay exactly where they were forever, just to sit there so he would never have to let go of her, even for a moment! he would even endure the uncomfortable rock that was under his bum causing the whole left side to go numb. he kissed her hair, and breathed in her scent. the scent that he was created to hate but with renesmee his love intoxified it, clouding his head making and making her smell like sweet earth, which he couldn't get enough of.
'sniffing me are we Mr black?'
'you smell so good!' he whispered 'i can never get enough of you' he said as he bent to kiss her watching face 'any part of you' he added.
'i cant either' she said 'don't ever leave me' she looked up at him with expecting eyes. Jacob sighed, she didn't get it. she didn't that he couldn't live without her. at all. even the thought of it made his stomach curl, and his eyes pricked with moisture. she occupied his every thought, every cell of his blood. and every second he was with her he couldn't believe that she was with him. when she turned 16 and they kissed for the first time Jacob couldn't believe that she wanted him, he had always hoped but throughout that year and a half where he had watched her grow from a baby to a beautiful young woman he became doubtful that a gorgeous girl like her would choose a guy like him, and had prepared himself to just be another father figure in her life. I'm one lucky guy he thought to himself.
'not possible' he said, cupping her face in his hand when he saw a flash of doubt in her eyes 'not possible' he insisted, touching the side of her head, mimicking the movement she made when she showed people her thoughts 'i wish i could show you everything, the extent of my love, how i could never be without you, my fear that you could leave me...' he trailed off. renesmee smiled and lifted her hand to touch Jacob's cheek, and a hundred different images of them flashed throughout his mind.
'not possible' she said and she curled into Jacob ever tighter. they sat there for a while breathing in the still air, perfectly content.
as the darkness grew blacker (renesmees suggestion that they should go home, completely forgotten) Jacob sensed something, he opened his eyes and lifted his head from renesmee's, looking about him. he heard a snap of branches and a russel of leaves, his wolf side of him knew it wasn't an animal. renesmee, feeling Jacob tense held onto him, tensing up herself. they waited for a second staring ahead where the sounds where coming from, and Paul burst into the clearing, the moonlight making him just visible. Jacob and renesmee relaxed
'Paul, you scared us' Jacob said, 'what are you doing here, is it Sam?' Jacob saw Paul's angst expression and thought something was wrong 'does he need me?' he asked
'no' Paul spat 'its not Sam, he doesn't want you. i want you'
'what' Jacob was confused, Paul looked so angry, making Jacob's hair stood up over his body, something wasn't right
'i want you. you. its all your fault, we're going against nature and I'm the only one who can see it' Paul shouted getting louder pointing a finger at Jacob.
'against nature? what are you on about Paul, whats happened?'
'you, and her, and them' Paul became red in the face, Jacob tightened his grip protectively around renesmee when Paul pointed at her
'Paul your not making any sense' Jacob warned, 'I'll talk to you in the morning'
'no, no you will not. I'm fed up of this not being talked about, shut up Paul, its okay Paul, there's no problem Paul, they're vampires for crying out loud' he took a step forward and shouted the last part louder then before. Jacob slid quietly up the tree, till he and renesmee where standing. 'and yet no one seems to think there's a problem with that! no one seems to remember that we're here, because of them, we're natural enemies and all of a sudden we're bosom buddies because Jacob said so' he took another step forward as he shouted Jacob's name. Jacob pushed renesmee behind him putting her out of dangers way as he stepped towards Paul
'Paul calm down, we don't need to be enemies, they arnt a threat to us anymore'
'then we should be a threat to them' paul bellowed stepping into jacobs face 'rather then all being whipped just because you're with the freek, who should have been killed the moment she was created' jacob growled and placed a hand behind him to push renesme further behind him.
'dont you ever talk about renesme like that again'
'or what'
'paul dont be stupid theres no reson to be enemys'
'im stupid your the one whos hanging around with bloodsuckers'
'paul' jacob growled warningly as paul was getting more and more red and started to shake 'paul control yourself'
'i will not do as you say' paul bellowed as he stepped back, his shaking sped up and he burst through his skin roaring as he did. jacob spun round to renesme clasping her round the waist and gently swun her back behind the tree, and phased as he twisted to face paul preaired to fight.

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next chapter soon! please let me know what you think, am i babbleing to much? thanks!!