So this is my first fic so please be nice. Constructive criticism is welcome.
-Tobi
The first bead
Before her eyes lay a sight she wished was only a nightmare but it was all too real. Rukia didn't mean for any of this to happen! Why was it happening! Tears slid down her face as she looked at the laughing figure with a disbelieving gaze. The battered bodies of her friends lay on the ground.
"Ichi…go" she whispered to herself and the masked figure turned to her. The body of the boy she loved but the mask of what she abolished for a living. A hollow's mask. It laughed a short 'ha' and told her
"Ichigo? That weak fool is out of the way for good! I'm in control now! He can't kick me out now! Not when I'm just beginning to have fun!"
He…no, it lunged at her with the sword that had protected her so many times. This was not her Ichigo. Not the one she had grown so fond of. A little too fond one might say if they were to judge by the smile he gave her, or the way his eyes soften just that little bit more while she was around. It didn't matter any more. She was going to die at the hands of a boy she loved, and the mind of the thing she had watched be killed and killed first hand many times over.
Good bye every one…..thank you Ichigo….
so that was the 'bead'! Woo! Tell me what you thought ! If you like it tell me I'll always be reading every review!!!! Thanks!! R & R!!!!
-Tobi