hi pls review... i am not following the plot
chapter 1
killua pov...
' this test is so boring, well it hasnt began but the people here look so weak i only left home
to get entertained by the hunter exam. i hope it will be or i will kill everyone in here... i really will.
i walked around the hall (or big place if u want to call it ) and i bumped into someone
"oh..sorry" i look up to see an ugly man who looks like a potato his tag number says 16 ( i think thats the one sorry if its wrong )
"haaa haaa dont worry about it my name is tonpa and this is my 35 th attempt" he said i sweat dropped that wasnt something to be proud of.
"here, a drink you must be really tired since you found the hunter exam" he said as he handed me an orange can of juice
i knew straight away that there was poison in it but since i am a zoldyck it wont affect me.
time skip...
after i drank the juice the elevator opened with 3 more applicants.
one blonde guy who lookes like a girl...
an old guy with a brief case...
and a kid with black spiky hair and really green clothes...
i saw potato face walk over there...i think he said his name was toma or topa...cant remember
he introduced himself and gave them each a can of juice 'oohhh i wonder how they will react if they drink it the are done for it'
the kid with the spiky hair spit it out and said " tonpa san i think the juice is expired "
hmmm... intresting he could tell... from what i heard he lives in a mountain and sampled a lot of grass or whatever he said.
potato face kept bowing his head saying he was really sorry... tch he is so annyoing i will kill him sometime later.
i got bored and sat down somewhere and fell asleep
time skip...
rriinngggg a loud ringing noise woke me up god i hate loud noises...
a big wall got pulled up revealing a man with a purple suit a mustache...and he had no mouth...ehh what the hell i thought
" i apologize for the wait" ohhh he can speak "the entry period for hunter applicants has ended. the hunter exam will now begin!"
thnak god i was getting so bored...and he continued talking
" a final caution. if you are short on luck or ability. you could very well end up seriously injured or even dead
those who accpet the risk please follow me. otherwise please exit via the elevator behind you."
no one left as he said "all 404 applicants will participate in phase one."
ehh 404 i pretty sure spiky kid is 405 did one leave while i was asleep.
then i heard a few whispers about a guy named hisoka making another applicants arms disapear into flower petals for not apologizing for
bumping into him. wow i wish i could have seen that mou why did i miss the fun i wined to myself...
we started following him when he picked up the pace
"i neglected to intoduce name is satotz, the phase one examiner. i shall lead you to the exam's second phase."
a bold head asked "second phase? what about the first phase".
no mouth guy said " it has already startes"
there were whispers like "it has already started?" or " this is part of the test?"
oi oi oi are these people really so dumb this is an endurance test duh... it so obvious...tch stupid people.
"you must follow me to phase two this is the exam's first phase" said no mouth guy.
bold guy said " follow you? thats it?" god he is stupid
no moth guy answeres and said "yes. i cannot tell you where or when you must arrive. you need to follow me"
tch so boring i though as i started to skate on my skate board i hope it gets intresting.
pls review oh and i am changing the plot...sorry if i have spelling mistakes or grammer mistakes i am quite new at this...if you have any ideas pls let me know
thanks