Now I have just finished two of my stories. The Lion and the Lamb and So Happy I Could Cry. Well, I have had this story idea for a while, but I put it in my "Unfinished" file. I started to look through it to get some ideas, and I read this. I did some changes and loved what I was doing to it.

So, I have made the decision that I'm going to post this story for all of my beautiful readers. But I'm going to put a preview of it and then you tell me what you guys think of it okaii?? Love ya'll!!

REMEBER WHEN
by,
MyPassionateMusician

They were Tommy's kids: Jada Skylynn and Aiden Nicholas.

It had been four years sinceJude's death from a brain tumor.

"The same storm that hit Quebecthe other dayis coming towards Toronto."

"The blizzard is coming faster than we thought. The winds are up to 85, and the temperature is still dropping a deadly degree. We advise everyone to get inside..." The T.V. suddenly went off and the whole house went black.

It wasn't fair that she reallydidn't remember Jude as much as Aiden and Tommy did.

With nothing to do they really didn't have anything to say.

"We're snowed in forabout three days so we better make the best of it."

"Dad it's an awesome idea! I don't know anything about my mom. I was going to ask all these questions eventually anyway."

That's when he could feel tearsat the brink of his eyelids.

"I'll forget," he whispered. "I'll forget."

"You should've seen me when I first found out that your mom was pregnant. Now, that's a story I am willing to tell."

Aiden didn't get why Jada wouldn't sing. She had an amazing voice, but every single time he mentioned it she would change the subject.

"I just listened to the radio. We're still snowed in and no one is going anywhere for awhile."

She slowly cried herself to sleep wishing on everyprayer that her mom would just come back.

Aiden took out a box that he had kept hidden under his bed. He opened it and saw all the memories he had of Jude. They're were pictures, cards, letters,and video tapes. He looked throught the tapes and smiled when he found the rightone.

"It wasn't fair, and it's still hard. I nevergot over it. But what pulled me through were you two. You gave me something to live for."

"No! I don't want to hear anymore stories about her! It was a stupid idea, so just forget it!"

Tommy staggered through the blizzard hoping to find his daughter soon, and praying that she was ok.

"No! No dad, I can't lose you too. Please, dad, wake up!"

"Aiden, please tell me he's going to be ok. Just tell mehe'll live, and I'll be ok." Aiden couldn't even look at her without the fear of breaking down. He had to be strong for his sister.

Jada collapsed on Aiden and he followed her to the floor. The long beep wouldn't stop ringing in their heads. He was gone.

"You can't stay here. They need you."

So that's what I got, and I'm really liking where this is going, so please tell me what you think!