Okay everyone, this is my poem about dilandau. Now this is a fairly short poem and mostly a large author's note. I could probably put up a VERY large installment just on what I have to say (having nothing to do with my fic writing) I'll try to make it up by writing a half decent poem(I like rhyming). anyway, enjoy and if you can bear through the pain, read the A/N at the end. Don't forget to REVIEW!
A violent boy, silver haired, garnet eyed,
Staring at a tiny flame of fire.
Fuel to feed the burning flame soon tried,
Engulfing the air as sparks fly higher.
Fascination grows as the fire grows,
Rage and obsession the cause of the fight.
Massacre to which only his mind knows,
Insanity reflected in his sight.
Soaring high in a mechanical thing,
In the darkest hour he finds pleasure.
Constantly dancing with metals that sing,
Something takes form that no one can measure.
You run when you see this boy in his place,
When the joyful smile plays across his face.
So? Was it any good? Please review, even if it is just one word (good/ or bad) I hope you all noticed that it was in a sonnet!!(kind of ironic writing a sonnet about dilandau, but oh well, I'm ironic so it works.) Do any of you have a slight idea how long it took me to write a poem I liked and that followed the rules? A long time, I'll just leave it at that. I hope you appreciate my effort to make it a good poem. RREEEVVIIEEEWWWWW!!!!
Now, I have a few things to say. Concerning my story (H20) I could use some help! It takes me sssooooo long to get up and installment, I only have 3, and the whole idea/plot I have in my head will probably take me a few years, the way I type. If you haven't read my story, please do, I don't think it is total crap. But anyway, I really could use some help just to get it rolling. If any one is interested please e-mail me at sammy_the_great@hotmail.com. Also as you all know, Christmas is coming and, well, I have a higher chance of getting the escaflowne movies if I can tell my parents where they can but them, bbuuuuttt can't find them. (I don't have a high tolerance to search for them using my search engine.) but if anyone knows where I could find them, fairly cheap, and in preferably Canadian funds, that would be eximondo! I hope that wasn't too painful, and thanks for reading, though I question why.!!- cranberry.