I don't Own One Piece and I am doing this for free
AN : Before I even Begin the first chapter of this story I must warn you that this will be an Alternate Universe that Will use One Key Thing what if Whitebeard didn't eat the Gura Gura no mi but before some one can insult me I will say this Whitebeard in this Universe is still the strongest man in the world because of the unparralled control he has on all three types of Haki and the giant blood he seemed to have that explained his Size and his strenght. I will say this now Luffy will eat the Gura Gura no mi in the same place and at the same time he ate the Gomu Gomu no mi in Cannon. Because of this one act several things will change with Luffy Because of the tremendous power to destroy the world if he wills it Luffy will take a more serious attitude will eat less because he don't have a stomach that can extend like that and he won't be as clueless with the girls however he will still want to become the pirate king he will still love meat and he will still be willing to take on the entire world to protect his Nakama.
Also Luffy will be more powerfull and will over power all the enemies of east blue the first real challenge he will have to face is Crocodile and the logias. He will also have more crewmembers than in canon but they will all be One piece characters that appeared in the Manga. Those things said the chapter may begin.
Chapter 1 : The Dawn of the greatest adventure : The first two crewmenbers
In a fishermen villlage it has been a year now that a pirate ship was anchored in the port. This village with a lot of windmill was very peaceful. On the pirate ship however their seemed to be some kind of agitation.
« Oï Luffy What are you doing up there ? » spoke a man wearing a strawhat
« pff » replied the boy who stood on the figure head of the ship wearing a shirt that said « anchor » som jean shorts and straw sandals with a knife in his left hand.
The boy named Luffy screamed to to the pirates « Look at me ! I am not Kidding ! You'll take me seriously Now ! »
« Yep ! Ga ahead ! Show us ! » teased the straw hat wearing man lower : « I wonder what he came up with »
« Luffy is is quite a character he is always fooling around ! »said a nameless pirate
Then to the shock of all the pirates Luffy stabbed himself just below his left eye.
« WH...!? »
« AARGHHH ! » sceamed luffy
« What an idiot ! Why the hell did you do this ?! » asked/yelled The straw hat man
« Ahh ! I am Bleeding ! »
A while later in the tavern of the village.
Luffy now wearing a band-aid beneath his left eye said to the captain of the pirate ship red haired Shanks « That didn't hurt at all ! »
« Liar ! You were crying the whole time ! » screamed Shanks at Luffy
« You saw I wasn't scared of hurting myself so take on your ship I want to become a pirate to ! » asked Luffy
« No you can't swim and you want to become a pirate there is no way you are getting on my ship. » replied Shanks
« Oh Come on even if I can't swim if i don't fall over board I will have no problem and I am strong enough to fight thanks to a special training from my grandfather my punch is as strong as a canon ! »
« Dahahahaha as if I am deadly scared » teased Shanks imagining a frail old man teaching Luffy How to punch.
« Stop mocking me ! »pouted Luffy
« You should be. » a calm voice lowly said to Shanks
« Uh ? » replied Shanks looking at the bartender who said that to him
« Scared. You should be scared His grand Father is a Marine Vice Admirals he is known as a hero. »
And then Shanks nearly forgot how to breath and his jaw nearly touched the ground after connecting the dots and finally kowing why Luffy never said his last name to him and his crew after recomposing himself he decided to see how strong really his Knowing that any man related to THAT man could certainly punch really well.
« Hey Luffy Let's see how strong your pouch realy is if you can make me move from my seat maybe I will take you on my ship » said Shanks
« Really » esclaimed Luffy overjoyed at the Idea of finally being a pirate.
He punched Shanks with all his might, his will to become a pirate was so strong that his fist became black, Shanks caught unprepared was launched from his seat and fell ten meters further
« Yatta that means I can come with you guys right ? » asked Luffy to the bewildered pirates that were just before partying with all their might.
« Nope while your punches are quite strong your still too slow. »said shanks getting up from the floor and regained his seats 'Was that Haki no way !'
« Hey boss maybe we could take him with us once. » asked one of Shanks'pirate
« Really ? » said Luffy
« If we take him with us one of you will have to stay here. »replied the Captain
« Let's get back to drink .»
« You traitors ! » yelled Luffy
« You are still too young try again in ten years ! » said Shanks
« I am no kid ! It's not fair ! » shouted Luffy
« Calm down. Drink this juice. » replied Shanks
« Thanks. » said Luffy taking the glass
« Dahahahahah This kid is too funny ! » laughed Shanks
« You tricked me ! » screamed Luffy
« You seem to have a good time today captain. Luffy I am sure you are hungry. » asked Makino The bartender.
« Ok ! Leave it on my Treasure tab. » replied Luffy
« Treasure Tab and when are you gonna pay your tab ? » demanded Shanks
« When I wiil be a famous pirate I'll pay it back with my treasures. » replied Luffy
« I trust that you will. » said the barkeeper setting down a plate in front of Luffy.
After a while of mindless chatting the door was suddenly kicked off it's hinges
« Hi everyone ! » arrogantly said the one who opened the door so violently « Well there are landsmen here I didn't see so many fools in one place before. We are mountain bandits but we aren't here to steal we are here to drink we would like ten barrels of rhum. »
« I am sorry but I am fresh out of alcohol »apologized Makino
« Hmm but these pirates seems to have something in their glasses and I am sur that it's not water. »
« It's true I already served all of the alcohol I had for tonight there is nothing left. »
« I am sorry I didn't think that we drank that muchbut here take this Bottle it's not open. » said the redhead man.
The bandit then took the bottle and smashed it on Shanks head « Do you take me for a fool it's not a miserable bottle that will quench my thirst. » the bandit the took a wanted poster from his pocket and showed it to the pirate captain. « My head is wanted for 8,000,000 Berrys I am a star and I killed 56 idiots like you in my life. » The bandits then went away to the next village for more alcohol.
« Feww I am sorry the floor is all wet.» said Shanks
« How could you laugh like this like nothing happened. » Screamed Luffy
« Some battle aren't worth fighting » calmly said Shanks to the enraged child
« I am off to seek another rôle model » said Luffy storming off when he stomped his foot in his anger there was a white aura aound it and when it touched the ground it shook causing the pirates to spit their drinks in shock.
« What the... » shouted Shanks astonished
« What's happenig to me » shouted the scarred child
« Captain The Gura Gura no mi we took from the enemy ship is gone ! » yelled a fat member of Shanks' crew showing Luffy a drawing of a fruit shaped like a pear white with blue swirls. « Luffy did you eat a fruit looking like this »
« Yes I thought it was dessert It didn't tast very good. » replied the child.
« Did you know it was the Gura Gura no mi it's one of the best kept treasure of the sea. It's an Akuma no mi the one who eats it becomes a tremor man and can destroy the world if he so wishes but in exchange he can never swim again » yelled Shanks grabbing luffy's Head and looking him in the eyes.
« What tell me it isn't true right ?! » shouted the frightened child ?
« What an idiot ! »
Three months later in Makino's Partys Bar
It's been two months and a half since the incident with the bandits and the pirates departure.
« It's been a long time since they left are you sure you aren't missig them ? » asked the barkeeper.
« No I haven't forgiven them for their cowardice against the bandits. But you can't understand you are a girl. » replied Luffy
« That's right I am a girl so i can't understand » replied the young woman with sarcasm.
« Hello everybody hmm those pussies aren't here. We were passing nearby so we decided to say hello. So don't stand here and serve us to drink. » said Higuma the bandit leader
At the townhouse
« Mr mayor it's terrible » panted a voice
« What makino you seem scared » replied the Mayor Woodslap
« It's Luffy he is in trouble with the mountain bandits. » replied the young bartender
Near the Partys Bar
« Dont stand there and go help Luffy » whipered Villager 1
« I would like to but I would like to stay alive, That kid is something he took out three fully grown men by himself and he is only seven he really is Garp's grandson. » whipered Villager 2.
After taking out three brigands by himself with his stronger than average punches Luffy was soundly defeated by Higuma the Bandits Leader.
« Get your foot Out of my face you bastard. » yelled the defeated child.
« Let the child go » said the mayor before kneeling in frot of the thugs « I don't know what he did to you and i don't want nor can fight but I beg you to spare the child's life. »
« Mr Mayor » whispered the child
« No he angered me I was just here to drinks and this little shit pissed me off so enough of this game I'll kill him now. » said the leader drawing his sword.
« My I knew something was wrong when nobody came to greet us back at the harbour. » said Shanks from behind the mayor and Makino suprising them both as he walked towards the thugs' leader.
« But it's my friend the mountain Bandit How it's going since the other day ? » asked the pirate as if he was talking to afriend before adressing Luffy « Ma You took down three of them not bad for a child but you still need training so I can't take you on my ship. »
« Shut up ! » from Luffy
« Oh So your were still there I don't know why you came here but this is between me and this shit ! So leave before it's to late, if you come any closer I'll have you killed ! » threatened the leader.
« You heard the boss he said to not come any closer ! I'll blow your head off hahaha !» said a nameless thug pointing his gun on Shanks.
« If you are to draw your weapon you better use it. » calmly said the Pirate captain as if a gun wasn't pointed on his head.
« uhh What does that mean ?! » asked the suprised bandit.
« I am telling you that the gun pointed on your head isn't just for show. » explained the redheaded man
Bang ! The thug was shot in the head by a member Shanks' crew from behind to the bandits' horror.
« They got him from behind ! » « What a dishonorable way ! » came from the Brigands.
« Dishonorable?! We arn't here to make friends we are here here to fight » replied the Pirates
« Open your hears and eyes : We are pirates We aren't saints » came from Shanks before threatening the bandits :« You can mock me, insult me, throw foods and drinks at me I don't care But You Aren't Aloowed To Touch One Of My Friends Is That Clear ! »
« Shanks » said Luffy awed by his role model
« Hahahaha I am not allowed to touch your friends, don't make me laugh what are pitiful pirates like you can do against the best bandits of the country Guys kil them all ! » laughed Higuma
At once the bandits charged the pirates thinking that the pirates were weaker than them.
« They are kind of funny I'll take care of them... » said the tallest member of shanks' pirates he then used the face of the slosest thug as ashtray for his cigarette then by the time it took for the cigarette to fall on the ground the rest of the band of bandits exept the leader were done for by his riffle wich he used as a club.
« It's over Brigand » said The pirate pointing his riffle on Higuma.
« Hay wait a second let's calm down it was the kid's fault honest ! » said Higuma trying to save his life.
« I remember that your head is worth some money » threatened Shanks sending the bandit in a panic state.
The bandit then tried to use a smoke bomb to escape with Luffy as an hostage and in a different universe his idea might have worked btu as he tried to drop his bonmb Luffy punched him in the leg using unconsciously his Devil Fruit powers causing his fist to be covered in a white aura and Breaking the Bandits legbones causing him to fall and scream in pain allowing him to get up to the amazement of the pirates and the towns' people.
Some time later near the pirate ship.
« You're leaving for good this time ? » asked a somewhat sad Luffy.
« Aye it's been too long since we were anchored here and it's time to say goodbye. » replied Shanks « It's sad don't you think ? »
« Nah since you will take me with you this time ! » excitably said Luffy.
« Not even in your dreams you think you gonna become.a real pirate one day ? What a joke ! »
« You'll see ! One day I will have a crew as strong as yours and i'll steal all the treasures right under your noses ! I WILL BE THE PIRATE KING ! » shouted the angered boy.
« Oh I see »replied the reheaded man taking his hat from his head and posing it on Luffy's « Take care of my hat for me will you It's my treasure and I expect to see it back the day you will be a strong pirate ! Luffy I also want you to promise me that you will be carefull with your devil fruit power ! »
« I promise Shanks. » replied the crying boy.
Ten Years Later on a raft somewhere on East Blue
« Ah what a geat day to sail ! » exclaimed a teenager
« Luffy could you please explain what am I doing here. » said the other person of the raft.
« Ah you see Makino I need a bartender fro my crew and you are the only one I could think about. » replied Luffy embarassed
« While I am flattered of that I am not really sure that being part of your crew is necessary to be a bartender. » said Makino
« But if we have the bartender and the alcohol on board then we could party on the ship and the marine will have less chance of catching us. Besides I want you to be our bartender, I saw how bored you were when Shanks and I left and how you were happy when you could spend some time with Ace Sabo and I. » ponctuated the straw hated pirate.
« Alright you win but don't expect me to fight You will be the one protecting me is that clear ?! » said The Bartender with a sweet smile that somehow deeply scared Luffy 'Oh my god what did I unleash ?!'
Then the raft was suddenly drawed towrds a whirlpool thinking fast Luffy threw Makino and hiself in a barrel that he shut with all his might.
After a while, on a marine ship that was about to get boarded by pirates there was a party going on.
An orange haird girl was dancing around with the others while waiting for the attack. When they finally attacked she used the panic caused to rob the marine ship and the pirate ship of their gold.
Meanwhile a pink haired boy was searching the ship looking completely scared.
« Hello...Is there...Anybody ….Here ? » asked the boy to the empty room« Ah there Is just a Barrel, maybe I should bring it to the ship there must be Alcohol in there. »
« Oi Coby what are you doing in here ? » asked a nameless pirate.
« I was just going to bring this barrel of alcohol back to the ship » replied Coby feeling very scared.
« Oh there is no need we will bring it after we taste it to make sure it's still good » replied the pirate « If you don't tell the captain then she won't know right » then he and another nameless pirate approached the barrrel to open it when it burst open revealling a boy who knocked out the two pirates
« What a great nap ! » .
The last pirate fled to look for his captain. Luffy then got out of the barrel and Helpe Makino out before adressing the scared Coby.
« Oi You where is the food ? »
« Luffy only you could think of food in a place like this ! » sighed Makino
After Coby led them to the Kitchen where both Luffy and Makino ate their fill.
« So Who are you and what were you doing inside that barrel ? » asked Coby at the same moment Luffy Asked « Who are you aand what are you doing on this ship ? »
« I am Monkey D Luffy and this is a funny story realy. »
« I am Makino and like he said a funny and long story »
« My name is Coby and I was captured a year ago by lady Arbyda and her crew and since then I am forced to b the chore boy. »
« Why aren't you leaving ? » asked the young woman.
« I am too scared however I have a plan that will allow me to fullfill my dream.» replied the pink haired boy
« Deam What dream ? » asked the straw hat wearing boy.
« I want to join the Marine. What about you Luffy-san ? »
« I want to be The pirate king ! » said the teenager
« What but that's impossible you will no survive the pirate graveyard ! » yelled the chore being lightly punched on the head by Luffy « But Why ? »
« Because You were annoying me and mocking my dream »
Suddenly the roof gave in to the most ugly woman of the world Iron club Arbyda
« Coby Who is the most beautifull woman on the sea ? » yelled the fat cow. « And who is that you aren't the pirate Hunter ? »
« But it's you Lady Arbyda » whimpered the chore boy
« Coby Who is that fat ugly cow ? » asked Luffy to the shock of all Arbyda's crew.
« Luffy you don't know who this is... This is The most Ugly Fat Cow I have ever seen » yelled the former chore boy.
« Shishishi good one Coby ! »
« YOU YOU WILL PAY FOR THIS YOU WILL TASTE MY CLUB » yelled the angered fat thing
As Arbyda was coming to kill Coby Luffy got between them and punched the club breaking it to the shock of all the pirates then he punched Arbyda knocking her out and launching her over board. He then asked the pirate to give them a lifeboat
After letting Coby navigate to the Yotsuba Island where The pirate Hunter was held Luffy decided that he wanted to see this hunter with his own eyes.
« So this hunter is being kept here ? »
« Yes Roronoa Zoro is imprisoned here. » at hearing Coby's word the people launched themself against the walls to the amazement of luffy and Makino
« And I heard that Captain Morgan was the chief of this base » yet again the people went against the walls.
« What is happening here why are thy reacting like this »wondered Makino
At the marine base Luffy climbed on the walls to see Roronoa Zoro after a quick discussion with him they saw a little girl going up to feed him when a arrogant boy came and threw the rice balls on the grounf=d and the little girl over the wall to the ire of Makino whose motherly feelings were telling her to slap the idiot boy. Lufy then went inside the base after the son of the marine Captain left to try and convince Zoro that being a pirate isn't that bad. After feeding Zoro with the ruined riceballs they went in the tavern to speak with the little girl who told them what Zoro did to be imprisoned at the marine base.
Suddenly there was a comotio outside and when they saw that Helmepo the arrogant telling the people that they weren't kneeling enough and that He will have Zoro killed in three days v=because he said so despite the promise he made.
« Only a fool like Zoro could think this joke was serious ! »
Hearing this something inside Luffy snapped and he punched the arrogant ass lightly.
« How dare you not even my dad dared to punch me My dad will hear of this and have you killed. »
At the marine Base
« Yo »
« You again if you want me to join you the answer is no ! »
« I am Luffy I set you free If you join my crew ! »
« Didn't you hear what I just said ? »
« No Believe me he didn't » said Makino
« Who the... » replied the tied up swordman
« Makino I thought that you would stay at the tavern it will be dangerous in here. »
« I have an ambition to fullfil I don't have time to become a pirate »
« That won't change anything about what the people think of you. » said the strawhat wearing captain
« I don't care about what the people think of me as long as I don't regret what I do so I am not going to be a pirate any time soon. » replied the tied up man
« Do what you want but you are still gonna be part of my crew ! »
« Don't I have a Choice in here?! »
« I heard you where a good Swordsman ? »
« As long as i am not Tied up to a post i am pretty good why ?! » asked the bewildered man
« Where is your sword ? » asked Makino curious
« The idiot son took it from me It is my treausure. »
« Ok I will go get it ! »
« What ?! »
« And If you want it you will have to join my crew ! »
« You tricked me ! »
« Hahahaha Typical Luffy »
« If you think you can enter the base just like that be my guest. »
Luffy then went to get Zoro's swords Now in a wolrd where Luffy is a rubber man he would have proppeled himself to the roof and entered this way Now since he isn't a rubberman he will just have to enter by the door. Door who got destroyed with a low powered quakepunch but the vibrations of the « wallquake » broke Captain Morgan's prized statue. Luffy then found his way into Helmepo's room since he thought that an arrogant jerk like him liked to keep trophies. He found three sword in Helmepo's room and decided to take th three since he didn't know wich one was Zoro's. He then walked out the way he came. When he arrived Back in the courtyard of the base he saw Marine about to shot Zoro and Makino, not being ok with someone trying to shoot member of his crex he used a low powered quakestomp to throw them off balance causing them to miss to the ire of Morgan.
« How the hell did you do that ?! » asked a amazed Zoro.
« I didn't Know wich one was yours so I took them all. » said Luffy not wanting to answer
« You did well I use all three in a style I created ! »
« Perfect now Will you join me or do you prefer that I let you die here ? » Asked Luffy
« I don't have much of a choice do I between death and piracy I'd rather be a pirate. » replied Zoro
« So be it. Makino would you Mind getting to safety while I trash those idiots over there. » said Luffy using one of the katana to cut Zoro loose.
« What are you doing if your riffle don't work use your swords and you who missed kill yourself now » yelled an enraged marine captain.
The marine then drew their swords and charged only to be held back by Zoro usind his Santoryu with a sword in each hand and one in his mouth.
« I am warning you the first one that moves will be cut. » said Zoro
« Mama I am scared ! » « What a demon ! » came from the marines
« I gave you my word so I will be part of your crew however be warned that I have a goal to attain I will be the strongest swordman in the world whatever do the others thnk of me the whole world will hear about me ! And if you ever got in my way You will regret it. » yelled Zoro
« The strongest swordsman in the world huh If you are gonna be a member of th Pirate king's crew you will need to be the strongest ! » replied Luffy
« Well said.. »
« Santoryu : Tora Gari » said Zoro before launching himself at the marines twisting himself in mid air and cutting the marines
« I am Axe Hand Morgan You will respect me ! » Yelled The marine captain before saiying more calmly at Luffy « You ate a Akuma no mi didn't you to be able to cause those quake ? »
« Maybe » replied Luffy
« Don't mock me » Yelled Morgan using his Axe arm to try cutting Luffy up, but Luffy jumped up to dodge the slash and grabbed Morgan's Axe arm and broke the bladed edge with his abilities before punching Morgan to Knock him out.
After Morgan's defeat at the hands of Luffy Makino came back and they were going when the lieutenant asked if Coby was with them after proving that no he wasn't with them Luffy gave the lieutenant a way to contact Marine HQ by contacting his grandfather. Then they used Zoro's raft To leave the Island Not before Being saluted by the Marines as thanks for freeing them.
« So now where to ? » Asked Zoro.
« Now we need a navigator, a cook, a musician, a doctor, a nurse, a sniper and other people to become strog enough to go to the Granline. » replied Luffy
« I think that Orange town is nearby maybe we could find a navigator here »suggested Makino
« Let's go then To Orange Town ! »
Character Profile
Monkey D Luffy
Position in the crew: Captain
Devil fruit : Gura Gura no mi = Tremor Tremor Fruit
Techniques : Quake punch : a punch where luffy reinforce his punch with his powers
Quakestomp : a stomp quake powered used to create an earthquake
Weapon/Object destruction : By grabbing an object or a weapon with a quake infused hand Luffy is able to destroy it by using the Frequency of the objects' vibrations
Appearance : same as in the manga/anime exept he has more muscle mass because he isn't rubber and he has a Tattoo that spell ASL with the S crossedBounty: NONE
Makino
Position in the crew: Bartender and Unofficial Mother
Devil fruit: None
Techniques: None
Appearance: She wears the same clothes that she did when Shanks was here without headband.
Bounty None
Roronoa Zoro
Position in the crew : First Mate
Devil fruit: None
Techniques: Santoryu Tora gari = Three swords style Tiger Hunt: Zoro spins in mid hair creating an horizontal bladed tornado efficient agaisnt multiple opponent
Bounty: None
Glossary
Haki = Fluid
Akuma No Mi = Devil fruits
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