this is kinda my first fan fic so please tell me how is it.

i dont think anypony ever done a sci-fi fanfiction but if they had please leave it in the review i love sci-fi stories but in any case lets begin

chapter 1: proulouge

I was so close but not close enough. As I lay on the floor I saw the other ponies going down when the shadows touched them.

I try to get up but my chest erupted in pain. Fluttershy started to cry on the floor muttering "stop please...stop." I looked at her with sadness and I blamed myself for dragging them down here to save me.

The shadows were now closing in on me. I try to get up pain erupted from my head, chest and legs. But I didn't care and I finally stood up.

Prince Sombra was twenty feet in front of me. He stared hatred in my eyes. "Give up boy." he said with hatred in his voice, "you can't win, stop resisting and I promise your death will be nice and simple" I looked at twilight who kept muttering "no...Not magic kindergarten..."

They all looked grays as if their giving up hope. This got me boiling with rage. I pointed at Sombra and yelled "IF YOU DON'T STOP IM GOING TO DO SOMETHING THAT YOU WILL REGRET!" he looked at me and laugh. "Why do you go through all this trouble to protect them?"

He asked me like I was a little filly. "You know they don't like you at all and they want to get rid of you so why don't you just let me teach them a lesson." I looked at them and they were all seeing what was going on. Sombra took a spear made out of shadows and pointed at fluttershy. Fluttershy struggled to get up but found out it was hopeless. Everyone try telling him to stop but he just smiled at them. Knowing everything was lost she just closed her eyes so she would not see when it hit her.

He threw it at her and as the other ponies yelled. I jumped in the way and it pierced my chest. For ten seconds no one spoke. Fluttershy opened her eyes to find me in the way with a spear sticking in my chest. Rainbow dash was awestruck, pinkie pie was glad that it didn't pierce her friend but was sad that I took the hit, apple jack was at a loss of words, rarity was crying for me, and twilight...

She asked me "why did you take the hit?"

I pulled out the spear and answered, "Because she is my friend." I looked at each and every one of them and said, "all of you are, whether you like it or not and I would give my life for any of you ponies to live another day."

Then I looked at Sombra and said as I made a ball of pure light appear in my hand. "I told you." he looks at me with horror "no...Please...ANYTHING BUT THAT!"

I ran to him with all my might. His shadows try to wrap me but I didn't care. He threw me spears but mostly missed. Two of them pierced my chest but I didn't care...I didn't slow down. Not for one bit.

Twilight and her friends were all in my mine as I was running toward the shadow prince. I just wanted twilight and her friends to be safe. I jumped and hit him with the orb of light to his chest. The other ponies screamed "NOOOOOO!"

A flash of light erupted from the orb and only one thought came into my head 'may the light guide me to friendship and peace.' then everything went black.

hoped you enjoyed it by the way thank you for reading

next chapter coming soon (^_^)/