Sorry, this part is kind of corny, but I promise things will get better. I had started making this almost 3 years ago, so my writing has improved a lot since then. Anyway, after this I'm going to post the first chapter. To be honest I don't even know how often I'll post the chapters, so sorry if it takes a while.
Long, long ago, in the early 1600's, a little girl sat cradled up on the floor, watching men pass her with angry voices. This little girl was only 6 years old, though she was very smart, and knew things that most little girls couldn't even dream of. Where she was, was a pirates ship, far out at sea. The men passed her without knowledge of her being there. For in fact, she was hidden behind barrels of rotten apples and other foods the pirates had rather not eat. The angry voices were talking of a mutiny for one of their own crew. They had reason to believe that he had been stealing from them, even when they had been generous enough to let him keep his daughter aboard their ship. Yes, they were in fact talking of Jennifer Lenning, the girl who was listening to their conversation right now.
Her tale was in fact a sad one, but not a rare one. The girl had been brought up with only her mother for 4 years. Her father had abandoned her before birth, and sailed away under the pirate flag. Eventually the mother had met another man who was truly in love with Jennifer's mother, and they were to soon have a child. But when Jennifer was nearing her fifth birthday, the mother had died trying to give birth to the baby. Jennifer never found out if the babe had survived, for she ran away from the site of her mothers dieing figure. It hadn't been much after that she came across her real father in the market. It was from a picture her mother had given to her of him with Jennifer's pregnant mother, that she recognized him. Now they have been together for nearly a year, and now she was hearing arguments on whether they should kill him, or just bring him to mutiny.
Yes, in the end they had chosen death for the girls' father, and later on planned the same for her. The silent tears of misery washed down her cheeks as she watched the men head for her fathers' cabin. It had been the truth that he was stealing from the crew; in fact, he gave an emerald crystal necklace to Jennifer to prove he did love her. But now, Jennifer wished she had never been given it, for she would loose yet another one so close to her. The crew slipped silently into their new victims' room, and closed the door. The only thing Jennifer could think of was to escape as soon as she could. And that was exactly what she had done. She walked over to the edge of the boat and cut one of the ropes that held a life boat up. Then climbing down the rope ladder to her boat, she began to row away, only to hear a loud BANG not to shortly after.
Well, I'm going to post the first chapter now. Feel free to review before I do so. Right now I'm watching Jonny Kapahala back on board though, it took soooooo long for them to make the sequal. I was phyched to hear the Jonas Brothers song "Hold On" in the movie! WOO JB!