Narcissa said he died

AN: This is a poem set during the time right after Harry is resurrected, and is being taken out of the forest right before the final battle. It kept floating around my head, so I posted it.

Narcissa said he died

But Harry lives yet

Now the fighters are ready

And the stage is set

And it's time for the biggest battle yet.

This is a day they will never forget.

Voldy thinks he's the victor—want to bet?

What do you think? Is it good? Is it weird? Should I take it down and stop writing poetry? Tell me in a review.