Hello everyone!This is my first Fanfic on this site!You can review and tell me how I can improve it.I usually have writers block,but I'm gonna try for my friend Maria and all my readers!
Maria Nakamura ran as fast as she could making her way through the forest.She was running away from one of Narakus incarnations.The reason for this was because Maria had escaped Narakus castle,but he found out and sent one of his incarnations after her.Maria was also one of Narakus incarnations,but she developed feelings and couldn't stay at the castle anymore.As she was about to be killed by the monster,something grabbed her and pulled her out of the way.Maria closed her eyes and hoped for the best.she opened her eyes to find a man with markings on his face holding her.
"Who-who are you?" she asked as he rested her safely on the ground."My name is Lord Sesshomaru.And don't think much of that rescue back there.You just happened to be in my way." he said rudely.Sesshomaru walked off into the forest,only to return with lots of food."Here.I suppose you're hungry after all th- " he was cut off by the girls loud burp.He looked down at the pile of fish bones where fleshy fish used to be. This girl can't be human.She eats like a freaking pig! He thought to himself.
"Hey!I heard that.And I don't eat like a pig,I was just hungry" she said folding her arms across her chest and turning her back to him."WHAT! You can read minds!" he asked stunned. "Well DUUUUUUUUH!How else would I have known what you were thinking.You know you're much more stupider than you look" said the girl grinning."How dare you!Do you know who I am!" he asked jumping around. "Well yeah.You're Lord Sesshomaru.Brother of that half demon Inuyasha." she said walking around looking for something.
"Yeah you got that right.We might be brothers,but he will never be like me.He is not worthy and neither are you.By the way what are you looking for?" he asked. "I'm looking for a..." she turned around looking at him uneasily,with her blood red eyes. "I'm looking for my...
Well how did you like it?Please review.Well I'm gonna go do some more homework,soooo... later!