This is my first fanfic ever you are welcome to give constructive criticism about how I could rewrite this to make it better because no teacher has ever look at my writing and told me how to make it good so now I'm turning to you people for help.
The Sun rose over the decimated Mount Aleph where the town of Vale and the Sol sanctum once stood until the Golden Sun event destroyed the mountain and Isaac's home. But that was all in the past now, the world was saved with the return of alchemy to the world.
Isaac stood outside his cabin watching the sun rise thinking about the distant and recent past. About his adventure with his best friend and his future wife. About how his best friend's son had accidently destroyed their best research device and made him and his own son, Matthew and their friend Karis go on a journey to find the parts they need.
The wind softly blew his blonde hair and his matching scarf. A burly man with a mustache and read hair walked up behind Isaac and said in a gruff voice, "Thinking about the past again?" Isaac turned his had slightly back "It's hard to believe it's been Thirty year hasn't it, Garet," he said, "And Now our children are going on a adventure of their own." The events of Tyrell, (Garet's hot headed son) crashing their newly aquired soarwing fresh on their mind. The burly man gave a confused look "this is unlike you, worried about our kids?" Isaac smiled slightly before saying "Worried? No, concerned yes. I mean what parent wouldn't be concerned for their child's safety...Now I know what our parent's felt like when we left," he said.
Garet nodded "I know what you mean every time I think about my son out in the world, it gets me worried what idiotic, rash, reckless and stupid thing he'll do next."
With that remark Isaac began to laugh a little before turning around and placing a hand on his shoulder "Don't worry Matthew and Karis are with him. They'll keep him in check." Garet gave a not so convinced look before shaking his head "So are we going to do research on the mountain or reminisce all day?" Isaac nodded "Yep lets go get some Djinn and our gear and head out.
As if on cue two Djinn came running out of the cabin one a Mars Djinn the other a Venus. The red Mars Djinn ran to Garet's feet before hopping to his shoulder, while the brown Venus ran to Isaac's shoulder. Isaac and Garet looked at them, "What's wrong, sap" Isaac said. "We want to come with you today," the brown Djinn replied.
Garet looked at his red Mars Djinn, "Forge you want to come too?" Forge nodded. "Alright then we have our Djinn so let's grab our gear and head out," said Isaac.
So they went into the cabin and grabbed their swords, some herbs, psynergy star and made their way to their bridge to head down to the mountain. As they begin to cross the bridge a huge psynergy vortex opened right over their heads.
"What the, where did that come from?" shouted Garet.
Just then the wind began to pick up as the vortex began to open up. Immediately Isaac and Garet felt all their psynergy drain away and began to lose consciousness as they fell to their hands and knees. Isaac struggled to look up and as he did he saw their Djinn flying up before disappearing inside. "Sap," "Forge," Isaac and Garet said simultaneously.
The wind began to pick up more lifting Isaac and Garet off the bridge and into the air towards the vortex. The last thing either Isaac or Garet remember before losing consciousness was staring down the black hole that was the vortex.
Lucy was sitting on the boat of the famed Fairy Tale wizard Salamander who sat across from her. She truly despised the man but he promised to get her into Fairy Tale if she played along.
He looked at her with lust in his eyes "Now open you r mouth and close your eyes" he said raising the glass, she complied and just as the liquid was about to enter her mouth she swatted it away, "Your trying to use sleep magic," she said with a disgusted look on her face.
He smiled and applauded her before saying "Very good, of course now I'll have to take you by force." Then big men appeared from behind a curtain.
Lucy instinctively reached for her keys but two men grabbed her arms. Salamander walked up to her and took the keys saying "I have no use for these because you have to be contracted to use them," before throwing them out the window into the ocean.
The door opened and in came some men dragging the sleeping girls. "What are you going to do with all these girls?" Lucy asked intensely. Salamander smirked "Sell you all into slavery at Bosco."
Just then something crashed through the ceiling getting cover in the debris. A grown came from the rubble and up sat a kid with fire red hair rubbing his head. His eyes snapped open "Isaac, Forge, Sap, are you ok?" "We're fine came a small shaky voice as some rubble moved revealing the two Djinn.
Another grown came from inside the rubble and out rose a Young teenage kid with blonde hair and a yellow scarf. "Isaac," Garet said "Is that you?"
He look at Garet "GARET WHY DO YOU LOOK LIKE YOU DID THIRTY YEARS AGO?" Isaac shouted. "YOU DO TOO," Garet snapped back.
Salamander, Lucy and all the pirates looked at them gaping. Lucy finally regained her senses and shouted "Help, these men are going o sell us into slavery!"
Garet and Isaac stopped and finally noticed the people around them. "Looks like we're in trouble again" Garet said.
Isaac nodded "Yeah we will worry about our age later. So let me see if I got this," Isaac pointed at Salamander "They are going to sell you into slavery?" Lucy nodded. "These men are scum of the earth," Garet said.
"Come on Garet, sap, let's go kick some pirate butt." Isaac shouted as drew his long sword and pulled out a psynergy star and absorbed it to restore his psynergy while Garet did the same.
Their Djinn hoped up on their shoulders getting ready. "You think you can stop me with thoughts?" he taunted as he shot a ball of purple fire at them only to be countered by Garet shooting a fireball of his own.
"He's a fire adept" Garet said. "You're going to have to take him, my earth abilities are no good on a boat. I'll free the hostages," Isaac said confidently.
"So you do have some skill after all. Looks like I'm going to have to get rough a little," Salamander said igniting his hand.
Garet was about to charge him when something else fell through the ceiling revealing a boy with pink hare and a white scarf with a scale pattern on it and a flying blue cat. Lucy looked surprised "Natsu, Happy." Natsu collapsed on the floor puking from motion sickness. "Lame," Lucy screamed while Garet and Isaac sweat dropped.
Happy flew next to Lucy, "Lucy what are you doing here?" while Lucy explained to Happy, Isaac quickly made his move at one of the pirates. He ran up to one of them and made a quick slash across his chest causing him to scream in pain.
He then looked back to see Garet fighting pirates on the other side of the room and Happy flying the girl named Lucy away, while Natsu rolled on the floor suffering from his motion sickness. He turned his attention back to the mob in front of him only to receive several cuts and blows to his body. "Isaac" shouted Sap.
Isaac grunted at the blows but didn't give ground, instead he started to deliver blows to his assailants when he was almost out of opponents he summoned Sap and struck the last pirate in his way drain some of his health to restore his healing some of his wounds.
Suddenly the boat tipped and began to move rapidly toward land. After thirty seconds the boat came to an abrupt stop throwing everyone out onto the shore. "Ground," both Isaac and Natsu said kissing the ground.
Both stood up and Isaac looked to see some of the pirates standing up again he smiled while raising his hand and said "Summon, Sap," a huge orb fell down to the ground and exploded blowing away some of the men.
Garet stood up "Alright my turn," he said raising his hand in the air and shouted "Lava Geyser" the ground cracked and a huge geyser of lava exploded from the ground blowing away the rest of the men leaving Salamander alone on the beach.
Lucy looked at them in utter amazement at seeing Isaac and Garet.
Natsu turned his attention to Salamander "I hear you're from Fairy Tale. Let me get a good look at your face. That's funny I've never seen you before," Natsu said.
Salamander had an irritated look "Fine, I take you down first, then those two insolent children behind you," "Hey" both Garet and Isaac said.
Salamander ignored them and shot a blast of purple fire at Natsu completely engulfing him.
The flames began to shrink "Aw man, are you sure you're a fire mage? Because these are the worst flames I've ever tasted" Natsu said leaving Salamander, Lucy, Isaac and Garet in complete shock as Natsu downed the flames. Happy then explained that Natsu uses Dragon Slayer magic giving him the ability to eat fire.
"Now I'm going to kick your ass for using Fairy tales name." said Natsu angrily.
"What are you?" Salamander said in fear as Natsu charged him. "I'm Natsu, Fairy Tale wizard!" he declared proudly before slamming his fist into Salamanders face causing a massive explosion destroying part of the town.
"YOU OVER DID IT," screamed Lucy.
Natsu's head snapped around when he heard the sound of soldiers running their way "Aw, crap" Natsu said "Come on, we got to get out of here," he said grabbing Lucy's wrist.
Garet looked at Isaac "Should we follow them?" Isaac thought for a moment "Yeah we should until we figure out what's going on," he said. Garet nodded before they ran off to follow the three.
Thank you for reading plz leave your comments it would be most appreciated. I will update this but I am currently working on two other stories that I will be working on as well. I will continue when I finish the first chapter of those stories. Thanks. :)