Me: Jackie and Jade finds out that an outsider, is not really fully a *beep*

Outsider: DON'T! YOU RUIN THE CHAPTER!

Me: What?I'm trying to tell the readers the conflict and plot of the story.

Outsider: *sigh* whatever just starts already.

Jade: Let's get this story started!

Mike: Yeah what she said.

Me: No one said you two can say any thing!

Jade and Mike: You don't own us!

Me: It is bad enough that I have to deal with you at school MIKE!

Mike: Yeah okay whatever just starts freaking story already.

Me: *sigh* *shut off the T.V book*

Chapter 1

Outsider Meets the Chan's in Person

A young woman walked through San Francisco. She was looking for scrap parts so she can upgrade her vehicles. She lives on an island that she owns with a house and maybe anything you can imagine. As she walks these two guys come out of an alley running away from something. It seem like they were being chase by cops for robbing a bank, since they had money bag from the bank a ski mask on. So the outsider stops and looks at them and trips them. They stop because they saw this girl trip them. One of them said "Hey little girl why the fuck you did that for that's not nice". "Well because robbing the bank isn't nice either. "How the hell did you know we were robbing the bank and running away from the cops". "Well here's your proof a stack cash in both your hands, your wearing ski mask and your both sweating like hog monkey from running away from the cops. But this is my proof *she took a picture of them with her cell phone*. They both put the money down and took there knives out so they can grab the outsider phone so they attack. "I wouldn't do that if I were you two". The outsider dodges both of there attacks, jumps in the air and kicks both knives out of there hands. They both attack without there weapons. She hit them with a few jab on the arms and legs. She made two in the ground so they can fall into that instead of the floor then closed them up a little. Her power made a sound of an earthquake.

One of thieves said "what did you do to us?" Outsider says "I block chi in your body, don't worry it will were off in a few hours. Then the other guy said "who are calling"? "I'm calling the cops you idiot, who else would I be calling". "Your mother", the thief said. The outsider ignored his comment. One of the cops picks up the phone and says "Hello you reach 911 what is your emergency Ms Lee". Outsider says "Um yes I have those thieves capture, the ones who robed the bank I just sent you a picture". "Oh I see I was wondering where those two ran off too… um I mean great job please tell us your location so we can bring them to prison". The cop said. The outsider said "Um Chinatown Uncle's Rare Finds, got to go bye". The cop said "thanks and bye. She really didn't have to go but she did not want to talk to him anymore. She sat down and waited for the cops to come and get these two.

Location: Uncle's Rare Finds

"Uncle, did you hear that?!" Jackie who just came into the room. "Yes Jackie I did hear something. It sounded like an earthquake. You must find out what happen out there". "Okay." Jackie ran out the door and saw the two guys trap in the ground and a girl just sitting on the floor. She's just staring at the floor. "What happen?" he asked. "Go away," the girl replied. "I'm trying to help you, but in order for me to do that, you have to tell me what happen". "I don't need any help". Don't fight it, just let me help you". "If so how"? "Come with me". "Why should I trust you?" "I hardly know you". "How do I know you won't do anything to hurt me like those two guys try to do to me"? She said. "I'm not like that. I promise". The girl was not sure to trust him or not, even if he is the good guy, but the girl stand up and followed Jackie into Uncle's Rare Finds shop.

When the outsider walked in Uncle shot her with a green chi beam. "Demon." He yelled. "Get out of Uncles shop!" "Uncle whoa-"Jackie said before getting shot with the chi green beam. The outsider was on the floor. Jade ran in the room to see what happen, followed by Tohru. "What in Drago's blast name-". Jade was cut off by Uncle and Tohru. "Language Jade," they both said. Jade took off his hand off of her mouth and saw Uncle blasted a chi beam at her. Sensei, what is going on here? "Are you blind? Girl is demon!" "Uncle, you're the one that's blind! That is a girl you just blasted with green chi!" Jade run to Uncle took the blow fish from him. "Jade give back blow fish at once!"

"You can't tell me what to do, only Jackie can", Jade almost scowled, running away. "What is your name?" Tohru asked. "Safire," the girl said. "You see!" Uncle yelled. Safire mean a lot of very bad things, and one of them means fire demon in Chinese! She is evil! Jackie shook his head. "I am sorry, Safire. My uncle has demons on his brain today." "Well doesn't he always do"? Safire said. Jade said "nice one" *giggling*. "Well he is totally wrong about the whole thing. I'm not a demon I'm something else lets just say that". "So if your not human then what are you" Jade ask. "Um let's just say I'm half human and the other half is an unknown secret" Safire said. "Any way to a different matter so that was you with the earthquake and why those two guys were in the ground? 'Yes and so what' you know you can get in a lot of trouble for doing that". "What do you mean I could get in trouble for that, those were thieves I capture"? A police officer walked in and said "Thank Safire for the call… wow an earthquake must of happen". "Your welcome…yeah an earthquake did happen". They both look at each other like that earthquake did happen. *He left the shop*. Safire left the shop to fix the hole she made. Jade said "wow what happen to the whole" Jade said. She said "What whole". Jackie said "oh boy I remember you, I seen you before, during the time Drago and the Ice crew try to rule the world. But you never help us why?" "Don't say that to her, you are being like Uncle, maybe she had reason for not helping us I don't know" Jade said. Safire said "Yes that's true I do have reason which is don't trust any unless their your friends, and since your not my friend and I hardly know so I don't trust. Jade said "Don't go Safire you're my friend that I just met". "I have no friend on this planet or world right now". Safire replied. *Safire ran and flew into the sky*. Jade said "you see uncle Jackie look what you have done, you got rid of my new friend!" Jackie said "Oh boy Jade I'm sorr-". "I'm going to my room, good bye Uncle Jackie" Jade yelled. Jackie walked in side the shop and closes the door. The day ended. Safire says "What am I, and why am I so different".

Me: That wasn't so bad, right.

Safire: Well I am not sure.

Me: Well you did a good job so far.

Safire: Well I do know them it is just weird to have friend in this world or planet.

Me: well at least you have z-. Safire: Shut up, don't tell them that yet.

Mike: Yo when me and the guys gonna come in to the story.

Me: Mike I'm not going to tell if you keep saying stuff in our conservations, but why do I bother, you won't listen

Mike: Yeah you're right, just tell me.

Me: No!

Mike: Yes!

Me: No!

Ciro: Stop it the both of you! All reader please review and comment about what you think of the first chapter.

Me: *tackles Mike*

*shuts off T.V book*