Jaakuna 7 Chapter 1, a naruto fanfic

hey all! my new story, Jaakuna 7. this is the first chapter and as for my few fans who read my other story, i take long to put up new chapters so if you want to wait to read this chapter and the next at he same time, then you can wait a weeks or 2 for it. well back to the story. i am trying to make it more bloody and detailed and trying to not make any grammar mistakes. ready and review!

.........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

Chapter 1: Assassination

It was a cloudy day over the large/capital city of Rangari, the people were in the market buying food and working. It was nearing dark, as the sun was no more then 30 from being hidden behind the great mountain. The city of Rangari had many large building for a city of that time. As the governor of the Rangari was sitting in his mansion on top of a small hill, he was watching the sun set over the mountain. The guards were not so lucky as it began to get colder and colder. The 2 guards on the left (if you were facing the mansion from the outside) of the mansion were standing guard as they usually do. A strong gust of wind hit them as one of the guards spoke "is it almost time to switch?".

The 2nd guard then looked at the first and said "no, we still got 30 long fuc*in minutes until that sun sets, then we can go home".

The 1st guard then began to lean back against the wall surrounding the mansion, the wall 15 feet high. Then the first guard said "I really hate this job, but it pays well so I could care less"

The 2nd guard looked at the first, continuing to hold his hand on his samurai sword (not: in the future I will say sword but I really mean samurai sword) and said to the 1st "you should not slack off, you know we could be watched and fired if you are not standing full guard"

The 1st guard then laughed a little as he said "the governor is getting scared for no reason, one little death threat for a peasant, and he is freaked out."

The 2nd guard guard then said, while watching, "it is no just that, I heard some of the officers say that there is a hit on the governor and we have to be ready for anything"

The 1st guard continued to slack off as he put hid hand behind his head and said "I bet it is another peasant, no need to worry over nothing, I mean if he was to stick, wouldn't they strike at night? We are safe here"

As he said that, there was a ruffling in the bushes 20 feet in front of them, the 1st guard then raised an eye brow and began to move to his sword as the 2nd drew his sword.

The 2nd then said "go check it out" as he held his sword with both hands.

The 1st guard had his hand on his sword and said "no you check it, you react faster then me anyway"

The 2nd guard, not wanting to drag on this fight, moved forward to check it out. As he leaned over in the and looked, he then laughed a little as he turned around, he was holding a bunny rabbit.

The 1st laughed as well as the 2nd guard began to walk back and said "maybe you are right, maybe there is no assassin after the governor"

The 1st then said "I told you, there is not a hit on the gov-" as he said governor, a sharp and small kunai flew threw the air and from the bushes, it hit the first in the chest and pined him to the wall behind him. The 2nd guard then was turning around as a sword stabbed threw his chest, causing the guard to cough out blood as he kept turning his arms to try and hit the assassin. Then another sword, from another user, slashed at the guards neck, cutting it almost completely off and killing him. The assassin with the sword, in the guards chest, pulled the sword out and put it back in his holster on his right side. The other assassin did the same but on his left side.

They then both walked over to the guard with the kunai in his chest, and pined against the wall. He coughed out blood as he said "I-I will tell you fuc*ers n-nothing". he then died as the assassin then took off his hood, he was warring a full black outfit (aka like organization 13 from kingdom hearts).

"you should have killed both of them easy Raiku" the one with the hood on said to the one with the hood off.

Raiku (one with hood off) then said " well I wana see him in pain. Not just a quick death."

The hooded man then looked up at the tall wall and said to Raiku "you know the plan"

Raiku nodded and walked to the wall, then putting his knee down on the ground with his other leg still on the ground (like if someone is about to jump on his back). The hooded man then quickly dropped a kunai into his right hand and ran forward and jump on Raiku's back and jumped up, grabbing a part of the wall and pushing himself up more, then using his left arm again, he grabbed the top of the wall, putting his right hand with the kunai on the wall and pulling himself up and sitting on the wall.

He then looked around to see a few guards on the inside of the wall and walking around, there was a man that was in no uniform in the middle of them. The hooded man then flew the kunai at that man, at very fast speeds and struck the man right into his chest as it then exploded. It looked as if it killed or injured the guards around him and blowing that man apart.

The hooded man then jumped back down next to Raiku as they started to run with there arms behind them (like in Naruto).

Raiku then said "blew that fuc*er apart?"

The hooded man said "yes" as then kept running fast forward, getting into the city streets and hiding in an alleyway. There then were bell ringing from the mansion as the army of the city was put on full alert.

Raiku then swore as he said "plan B?".

The hooded man nodded as they both took over in the street. No more then 10 min later as they were going down an ally as solders appeared in front of them. They turned around and solders were running to them. Raiku then charged at the solders in the rear and took out his sword, slicing at the first 2 swords from left to right. Cutting threw there swords and there tummies (I can spell stumic by heart so I use tummy). He then went to finish off the other 3 solders as he turned around to the hooded man holding his bloody sword and 10 men on the ground…dead.

Raiku ran to the hooded man and said "lets get out of here bro"

The hooded man did not say anything as he fell and landed against Raiku. Raiku holding his sword and holding the hooded man up as Raiku swore under his breath. He heard more troops running in the distance and looked around as he saw a door just across from there alleyway. He picked up the hooded man with his right arm and threw him over his shoulder and ran to the door. Raiku knocked on the door as a man opened it up slightly. Raiku, using his right hand with the sword, he put it threw the door's opening and aimed it at the mans neck.

"open it old man" Raiku said.

"I mean you no harm sir" the man said as he opened the door. "let me see your friend"

Raiku said "you're a doctor?"

The man said "yes, and no mater who you are I will uphold my oath as a doctor, so let me see the man on your back"

Raiku, then took a moment to think as he walked over to the mans couch and put the hooded man down on the couch. Then saying "just patch him up"

The doctor (man) went over to the hooded man and began to remove the cloak as Raiku put the sword to the doctors neck and said "don't remove it"

The doctor said "I have to. And I will to help this man"

Raiku swore under his breath and sheathed his sword and said "fine, but you tell no one about this"

The doctor removed the cloak so see not a man, but a old boy with cuts and burses all over his chest (he was not warring a shirt under the cloak, just pants). The doctor then began to clean all of the boys cuts and burses but Raiku said "not all of the cuts. Just the bleeding ones"

The doctor said "no, I have to clean all of them or them may get infected an-" Raiku then grabbed the doctors neck as he said "just his bleeding wounds"

A women then ran into the room and grabbed Raiku's arm and said "let him go, we just want to help him"

The boy then coughed as he looked at Raiku and said "dam* it little *couch* bro. we need to hide for now. *couch* let them work on me and *couch* we will go in the morning"

Raiku gritted his teeth and looked mad as he let go and went to a chair in the corner and sat down as he said "do when you want to him"

The man then continued to work on the boy as the women got materials to help the doctor. As the man did this a young boy, looked from the other room at them. The boy was warring dirty, ripped up clothes and had dirt in his hair as he watch the 2 strangers and the doctor and the women.

"so young man, may I know who I am working on in case you die?" the doctor said to the young man as he was examining the wounds and getting some cleaning alcohol.

"Sasuke *coughs*" Sasuke said as the doctor began to work. Sasuke grunted/moaned loudly as the doctor cleaned his wounds and worked on him.

hey, how was it!? tell me good or bad or the best ever. if i go down hill with the next 5 chapters or so, i may delete this story and i always want your review. goo or bad tell me. also raiku may not have his hood on, but he look older then he looks. and the doctors i made after the doctors in FMA. weird fact, as i am typing this i am watching FMA. lol well review!