Naraku can Love?
Chapter One: Demons!
This is my first story! Please review!
Sango was doing her morning training when she noticed the sky grew dark. She looked up and saw demons of every kind moving across the sky to the west. Must be Naraku again. I wonder what he's up to this time, Sango thought. Bad question because the demons started plunging towards her! Sango ran quickly to get her boomerang and started attacking.
"Come out Naraku or are u too afraid to show ur face?" Sango yelled. She could feel his prescence here already. Sango was strong so she killed the demons as fast as they came down. More demons came but after a while, the sky cleared up. Naraku was watching near. He realized he was staring at Sango. He was impressed by how powerful she was. He started to feel weird so he left.
What's happening to me? Why am I feeling this way? Naraku thought. Sango's really strong and pretty. I wonder what she's like. Wait! Why am I always thinking about her these days? Maybe I'm just tired. Yeah! I'm just tired and I'll feel better with a small nap.
A small nap turned into a deep sleep at Naraku's lair.
Meanwhile…
"Hey Kagome!" Sango shouted.
Kagome and Inuyasha both stopped walking and saw Sango running towards them.
"Hi Sango! What took you so long? We waited for you by the tree so long we almost fell asleep!" Kagome asked.
"Sorry but a strange thing happened. Naraku's demons attacked me and once I killed them, they were gone and he left too."
"Weird. We better get going. Inuyasha was furious when you were late."
Ende of Chapter 1
Was it too short? Sry but I am baaaaaaaaad at beginning stories. Please Review. I need advice to make my next chapter and story better.