Um...hey there guys. This is my first fan fiction, like, EVER. No need to be gentle, I love constructive criticism. If you guys think this is the start of something good then I will keep going with it. If not I will just bag it. This takes place in the second book right after they escape from the high school, but you know I did it differently.

I couldn't believe it. Honestly, I mean what possesses someone to just…to just…I couldn't believe it! He told her, he told her about everything! For once, I wish I were Angel so that I could just see what the hell was going through that twisted head of his. Who kisses a red haired girl named Lissa and then tells her that you're a mutant bird, human…thing? Fang does, that's who.

Can you believe it? That's me, yeah Maximum Ride, screaming that inside my head to that stupid voice! For once even it was too astonished to answer my rant. I-

Maybe if you love him that much you should just tell him.

Oh great! Now my six-year-old sister is giving me advice on my love lif-screw that. I don't love Fang, I never have. Fang is like my brother, you can't be in love with your brother, right?

"Max, are you alright?" Nudge asked. I was surprised she used four words, I was expecting forty. Ugh, and now I'm being horrible to Nudge!

"I am perfect." I replied. I'm sure saying it in a monotone really helped.

It was hard not to notice how I was flying directly in front of everyone about one hundred yards in front of Fang, who was holding his new girlfriend, while he was flying, right after we broke out of that death trap school, and now we are on the run. Now we have one more mouth to feed! One more person to look after who can't even fight or fly or look after herself! All she can do cuddle in Fang's arms and lock lips with him. I love his arms. Wait! No! Forget I said that!

Max it's all right to be angry. Everyone is. Trust me, I have talked to everyone except Fang and I wouldn't even dare try Lissa, but they don't like her. I have been monitoring their thoughts though, never mind I will definitely leave that part out…

Oh great.

"Ok this looks like a good place to stop and rest for the night." I called loud enough for everyone to here.

I started heading downwards towards a large forest area somewhere in the Colorado Mountains. We always end up here.

"I'm going hunting." I muttered quietly, "See you in a few."

As I stormed out of the clearing I couldn't help but notice Lissa clinging to him. There was a river near by so I went fishing. There's nothing like taking your anger out on some helpless fish.

Max, Lissa is a liability, but Fang I an asset. They cancel each other out. If Fang won't leave her behind then you have to leave Fang behind.

The voice is back! Lovely! But it had it spot on, Fang and Lissa couldn't come with us.

"Max we need to talk." I jumped. It was Fang. Joy!

"You're damn right we do. What in the world were you thinking?" I cried.

"I think I'm in love." I think my heart shattered at those words. I kept my face like a stone.

"Love? What do you know about love? You're a fourteen-year-old mutant bird kid!" I spat.

"Why am I not allowed to indulge myself in something nice once in a while?" He asked raising his voice.

"We don't have time for that!" I practically screamed, "Can't you not see that bringing her along puts not only her, but your family in danger? How do we know she's not a spy anyway?"

"I can take care of her and myself." He yelled.

"Well I hope so, because you can't come with us." I replied evenly. I felt like I was going to cry.

"What?" He asked, dumbfounded.

"Are you stupid? I won't have you endangering my family. You are, as of this minute, no longer a part of the flock." After that I turned and walked away. Leaving him far behind.

"Come on guys, we're going." I said as I stepped into the clearing. With that we all jumped in the air and flew away. When we were far enough away from him I burst into tears.

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