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Heaven's Warm Embrace
Susan Kay's Phantom (Raoul's POV) 'I had held her in trust for seventeen years until death chose to reunite her with the one to whom she truly belonged'
Light
Tremendous bright light swimming around my battered soul
Illuminated and made pure in the glory of the afterlife
Sweet air and lilac calm waft as I ascend into the welcoming glow
Into a vast expanse of holy white I stare
Lost
Searching for something to fill the aching in my heart
The aching that has been with me for what seems an eternity
Groping blindly through the fog of incense that presses itself around me
I raise my trembling voice in desperation
You
Standing before me as awesome as a true angel
Your face as perfect as your soul , inspires adoration alone
Your endless embrace claims me with your silent siren's song ,your eyes say things
That our eternal words of love never could
Us
Grasping something that our earthly lives never gave us
At last our restless souls have claimed what they have always desired
Warm; glowing our spirits merge together, forever soldered together
Now I understand why they call it heaven
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